Reviewer: Julia
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2010 - 01:24 pm
Title: Part Five
amazing
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 07/07/2008 - 08:06 pm
Title: Part Five
That was so well written - you surely have the characters and dialogue down - but the literary merit to the story itself - your descriptions and story were top notch. I would love to read more. Thanks.
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 06/19/2007 - 08:33 am
Title: Part Five
liked the story and wanted to follow up your A/N but lj says your journal has been deleted and purged? is there anywhere else that you put the symbolism thing up?
am jeanieofoz on lj
Reviewer: YB
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2006 - 05:12 pm
Title: Part One
Well, I wasn't aware there were symbols to be looking for,but now I know this might become an even more interesting read than it is already. I like Spike not being led around by Buffy's little finger. And so far, you pull his character rather well, which I am grateful for. Off to read next chapter now.
Reviewer: YB
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2006 - 05:10 pm
Title: Part One
Um... WTF? Weren't you supposed to write another story after this one? Or did I miss something in the meaning of the term 'series'? Come on! You gotta write more to that. Leaving that fic as a stand-alone is like... like... Um. For lack of an appropriate comparison, we'll just say that it;s like something good with no ending, which transforms it into something bad. Er... yeah. And I can't get into your lifejournal. That normal?
Reviewer: YB
Anonymous
Date: 05/22/2006 - 03:42 pm
Title: Part One
Well, I wasn't aware there were symbols to be looking for,but now I know this might become an even more interesting read than it is already. I like Spike not being led around by Buffy's little finger. And so far, you pull his character rather well, which I am grateful for. Off to read next chapter now.
Reviewer: Gwendolen
Anonymous
Date: 07/02/2005 - 07:00 am
Title: Part One
Enjoyable read with a nice atmospheric undercurrent both in the stormy setting and in the state of Buffy and Spike's relationship. You've made me curious as to where they go from here so I'm looking forward to any continuation.
Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed
Date: 06/23/2005 - 11:04 pm
Title: Part Five
The storm was exciting and having the ghosts help out was a clever twist. This was a well written, atmospheric interlude in Spike and Buffy's relationship. Buffy's stubborn clinging to her anger and fear was tempered by the fear the storm brought to both of them. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
Reviewer: zanthinegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2005 - 02:18 pm
Title: Part Five
Really like this story, Excellent characterization of Buffy and Spike; very believable interaction. I have some theories about the symbolism of the storm, all the water, the ghosts, the lighter and candles. I'm going to have to head to your journal and see if I'm totally off base!
Reviewer: zanthinegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:51 pm
Title: Part Three
Again, really enjoying this one. Very believable Buffy and Spike; you have a great feel for their voices. "To her eyes, it suddenly looked as if he was about to cry. That surprised her. Somehow it hadn’t ever registered how deeply Spike was hurting because of the rift in their relationship. He was mentally curled up in the fetal position, lashing out at her to keep from being hurt himself. She’d always assumed he was simply angry with her because she’d rejected him – but no, Spike was just hurting. But damn it, so was she." Loved this passage.
This story is genuinely creepy-- I mean that in a good way. I'm reading it on a cold, stormy day just before bedtime; and I find myself glancing into the corners. Brr! And I'm hoping to hear more about Galveston!
Reviewer: zanthinegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:38 pm
Title: Part Two
Really enjoying this one. I watched a program on (I think it was) the history channel about the Galveston Hurricane. No wonder Spike's wigged out! I went through a hurricane as child; we were FAR from the epicenter but it was a terrifying.
Reviewer: zanthinegirl
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2005 - 01:29 pm
Title: Part One
This is fascinating; I'm going to have to re-read it to make sure I get at least some of the symbols. I think I get the rain; and Spike's lighter seems pretty clear, but...
And i love the idea of Buffy and Spike's road trip!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/22/2005 - 05:48 am
Title: Part Five
You're very quick this time :-D I didn't think that this were the intention of the ghost. And good that Buffy told why she won't forgive Spike. I'm sure he can work something out now he knows. And Buffy will too. And the symbols? Can't say I got it - was too busy reading :)
Reviewer: Kimber
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2005 - 05:00 am
Title: Part Five
Oh honey, I need a epilogue....LOL......5 years later with a wedding....LOL! Great story and realistic of both of them when you really think about it.......great job
Reviewer: Emmie
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2005 - 11:50 pm
Title: Part Five
Great way to start a series! Can't wait for more Buffy & Spike adventures. I hope romance blossoms again soon.
Reviewer: H
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2005 - 11:20 pm
Title: Part Five
Really loved this. Can't wait for the next part of the series:)
Reviewer: H
Anonymous
Date: 06/19/2005 - 07:24 am
Title: Part Four
I love this story. Just read all four chapters - hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/19/2005 - 03:32 am
Title: Part Four
Yeah... first time that Buffy discovers what it feels to be alone - even under people... especially Spike. Well, it's partly her fault. But maybe they can work it out, huh? Wonder if Buffy reactions are quick enough or if she'll have a mirror in her face - very soon :) TNX for updating here, too!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/29/2005 - 10:51 am
Title: Part Three
Mmm - they found a ghosthouse... :) And Buffy knows now that Spike is only hurting. Looking forward to find out what happened to Spike in Galveston. Because he didn't want to talk about.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/29/2005 - 10:44 am
Title: Part Two
Sad to read how their fight started that brought them apart - but totally believable.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/29/2005 - 10:41 am
Title: Part One
I don't know if I'm good enough to find all symbols, but I'll read anyway.
Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed
Date: 05/27/2005 - 07:06 pm
Title: Part Three
Excellent detail the the worsening storm and the location. I'm enjoying how unnerved both Spike and Buffy are. Can't wait to find out what happened to Spike in Galveston.
Reviewer: Syl
Anonymous
Date: 05/27/2005 - 06:04 pm
Title: Part Three
Better and better--keep updating, can't wait to see what happens! And, great job of capturing the real essence of Spike and Buffy's characters.
Reviewer: Carole
Anonymous
Date: 05/12/2005 - 07:31 pm
Title: Part Two
Wonderful atmosphere. Isaac's Storm, describing the Galveston hurricane, was a fascinating read for me last summer. Eager to see how the storm and their relationship develops. Very intrigued by the house. "Gaudy and excessive", "stifled much of the charm", "Maybe the house wasn’t so bad, after all"...hmm, interesting.
Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed
Date: 05/12/2005 - 02:25 pm
Title: Part Two
I like this premise and you're doing a good job with the settings. I always enjoy Buffy and Spike at each other's throat and the dialogue is sharp.
