Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 07:41 pm
Title: Chapter One
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/02/2013 - 03:44 am
Title: epilogue
This story had some good points, but the writing could use some polish. Not quite enough tension for a good romance, and quite a lot of inconsistencies and places where the plot or details jumped around with no connections, so lot of things didn't make sense to me. As for the "step sibling" thing, that is such a non-issue, I can't imagine anyone truly getting upset by that. I mean, William and Buffy were adults when they met and aren't related by blood... They couldn't be less incestuous, really.
Author's Response: many thanks for a lovely critique. Thank you for the critism as well.. without it I can't improve. This story was written a long time ago, and hopefully I have improved. I post on Maplebookshelf now. As for the stp-sibling thing, yes people did complain! although I couldn't see a problem as they had never lived together etc.
Reviewer: ROSE Signed
Date: 09/23/2012 - 11:25 am
Title: Chapter 5
No the caps were not a mistake, and yes as i said, on the whole the story isn't bad at all of what i have read. Though i have chosen not to continue to read beyond the 5th chapter due to not being a fan of the whole step brothers and sisters (whether they are raised together or not, that still is what they are) getting together thing. Its not something i can just gloss over.
Reviewer: ROSE Signed
Date: 09/21/2012 - 05:51 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Well, i gotta though it is an ok etory on the whole. I'm really not a fan of the whole Spike's parent (normally dad who is normally Giles) hooks up with Buffy's parent (normally Buffy's mum Joyce) simply because if things go well for the parents then ultimately Buffy and Spike will become STEP SIBLINGS, which people either tend to forget,gloss over or it doesn't bother them that they will have steps shaking up together....I'm just saying. So i'm not a fan of these types of stories if it is obviously leading down that path.
Author's Response: Yep, they might become step siblings.. did your caps lock go on by mistake? but they haven't been raised together and it is pretty common actually... hope you find something you do like
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 10/12/2009 - 02:51 am
Title: chapter 4
Ya i'm bored. sorry. good luck w/ ur writing tho :)
Author's Response: not for you? no problems
Reviewer: Sotia
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/2009 - 11:25 am
Title: epilogue
Awww! Such a sweet ending to a sweet story. Thank you for sharing,
*hugs*
(Also, sorry it took me so long to finish it. RL has being busy)
Reviewer: Sotia
Anonymous
Date: 10/02/2009 - 11:19 am
Title: Chapter 14
So very hot, and WOOT! RING!
Sorry to hear your son was unwell!
*hugs*
Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 09/24/2009 - 07:47 am
Title: epilogue
Excellent - sorry to see it end as we really enjoyed it!! Love happy endings!!!
Reviewer: Jon, andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 09/24/2009 - 07:42 am
Title: Chapter 14
Truly a beautiful chapter!
Reviewer: Angie
Anonymous
Date: 09/11/2009 - 08:28 am
Title: epilogue
Great story, thank you for writing it!
My only question is at one point u said Clem was married and at the last bit he was bringing a girlfriend. Did they break up?
Reviewer: KAte
Anonymous
Date: 09/04/2009 - 03:35 pm
Title: epilogue
Cute story, I loved all the tie in's. Poor Clem though...in chapter 13 he had a wife, and now at the end he's bringing a girlfriend. Does this mean divorce? Poor Clem.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/02/2009 - 05:37 pm
Title: epilogue
*sigh* Sad to see it end. But I liked the jump into the future a lot. They have a good live together there.
I liked the way it ended.
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 09/02/2009 - 03:58 pm
Title: epilogue
What a sweet ending. I loved it. Everyone is happy. Yay! Happy, still in love, sexy domestic Spuffy! My fave.:)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/2009 - 08:32 am
Title: epilogue
Loved this!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/2009 - 06:31 am
Title: epilogue
Lovely epilogue, happy Spuffy endings always make me smile. :D Thanks for another wonderful story!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 09/02/2009 - 06:19 am
Title: Chapter 14
Aww, romantic and sweet... simply a lovely Spuffy interlude. :D Great chapter!
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 09/02/2009 - 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 14
Wow! Beautiful chapter. I love when Spike is her first. Their lovemaking was so hot and so sweet. And yay! it looks like they're gonna get married.
Wonderful story. Can't wait for more!
Hope your son feels better soon. =]
Author's Response: just the epilogue to go..will be posted today. glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2009 - 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Just read from the beginning - not sure how I missed this fic for so long! Hope your son is feeling better. :)
Author's Response: just in time for the epilogue.
Thanks for your good wishes, my son is better
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2009 - 07:55 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Loved the chapter!
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/01/2009 - 06:39 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Awe another update. Good to see.
Very romantic what William prepared. Turned out very hot too. Enjoyed.
Not many chapters to go, right.
Author's Response: no, just the epilogue to go..thanks for all your reviews. they have meant a lot
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2009 - 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Ahhhh... that was nice.. finally.
Enjoyed
Author's Response: It seemed the right place to put it in,
last chapter will be posted today
Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/2009 - 11:15 am
Title: Chapter 13
Loving this Vara, great stuff!!
Author's Response: thanks. more when i can
Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/2009 - 10:45 am
Title: Chapter 12
Silly William! Thise pesky fans huh!! loving it!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed
Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/2009 - 10:40 am
Title: Chapter11
Love it backstage!!! Great chapter!!
Author's Response: glad it rang true for you..thanks for the review
Reviewer: Jon< Andy and Deb
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/2009 - 10:33 am
Title: Chapter10
Sounds like a good night was had by all!!
Author's Response: yep and there is more to come. thanks for the review
