Reviewer: Jenx
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2006 - 10:48 am
Title: Named and Ashamed
I'm sorry, but, ugh. I can't read on anymore.
If I have to be nasty, the story just sucks. If I have to be encouraging, you need to work on the storyline, your grammer, your characters' emotional control and to pan out each chapter more carefully. It moved simply too fast and most scenes simply DON'T connect to the next.
Maybe you can do better with a beta.
Reviewer: shel
Anonymous
Date: 07/19/2006 - 12:17 am
Title: Birth and Epilogue
good story. im only confused on one thing. it says that her name is katelyn willow huffman, but i thought spike said his name was william carter. you might wanna straighen that out. i like the story though and i plan on reading the sequel
Author's Response: No, I didn't mention a last name till about the end, I don't think anyway but I'll check just in case, thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2006 - 12:07 pm
Title: Birth and Epilogue
Oops! I missed the last chapter! I'm reading now. I would say I loved the end but there is a sequel now means that this wasn't the end :) On to the next part :) 13 years later is a lot of time. Gonna see what happened to them.
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 12:14 am
Title: Birth and Epilogue
absolutely loved this story....you did an incredible job on it
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/05/2005 - 06:09 pm
Title: Birth and Epilogue
Cute story and a very fluffy Spuffy ending. Great job!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/04/2005 - 04:57 pm
Title: Preparation
Oh - wasn't this too early to the baby? Looking forward to read more.
Reviewer: wiccangirl314
Anonymous
Date: 04/30/2005 - 06:28 am
Title: Preparation
So good, I had so many chapters to catch up on....all amazing! :-) Please update soon, I need more of this wonderful story. :-)
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed
Date: 04/30/2005 - 03:11 am
Title: Preparation
great update more please :)
Reviewer: Mia
Anonymous
Date: 04/29/2005 - 11:59 pm
Title: Preparation
It's such a cool story; I can not wait for you to update. I wanna know what happens next! :)
Reviewer: Bint
Anonymous
Date: 04/29/2005 - 07:54 pm
Title: Preparation
AWWW MORE PLEASE I LOVE IT SOOOO MUCH!!!!
Reviewer: Bint
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 02:38 pm
Title: No Pain, No Gain
more please!
Reviewer: Cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 03/26/2005 - 07:37 am
Title: No Pain, No Gain
Yay, it's gonna to be a girl :-)
Reviewer: lindsay
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2005 - 08:19 pm
Title: No Pain, No Gain
i love this
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 03/25/2005 - 04:40 pm
Title: No Pain, No Gain
Yay! It's a girl! I can't wait for more! Please update asap!
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed
Date: 03/25/2005 - 04:32 pm
Title: No Pain, No Gain
good update
Reviewer: Kathyrn
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2005 - 03:23 pm
Title: Child of an Angel
Eugh! Why does every godd fic I read end up being a fucking baby fic! I loved this fic but now I can't read anymore of it!!! Y does that always happen! Baby fics suck!!!
Reviewer: wiccangirl314
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2005 - 02:14 pm
Title: No Pain, No Gain
Ooh so good! Please update soon! Need more! :-) Loved it huni! :-)
Reviewer: loxie
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2005 - 06:06 pm
Title: Feelings
update soon please lov it so far
Reviewer: Bint
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2005 - 07:29 pm
Title: Feelings
more
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed
Date: 03/19/2005 - 05:04 pm
Title: Feelings
good update sad about her dad
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/19/2005 - 03:45 pm
Title: Feelings
What an unexpected turn!
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2005 - 03:23 pm
Title: Feelings
wow that was weird. i really like this story and cant wiat to readmore. its really interesting and is very creaive. i cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can im dying to no more thanx
Reviewer: wiccangirl314 Signed
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:31 am
Title: Feelings
OMG! I LOVE this story! It is So good! I love the scenes you painte between Buffy and Spike and how sweet they are on each other, and I love the scene when the woman called her name and Buffy yelled, "She's not here" cracked me up. lol. hehe! I really love this story! Please update soon! I can't wait for more! The last line of this chapter got me very sad though, very put you do need to put ansgt into it, good job! I can't wait for more, you are a very talented author and I love the way you write, Update soon...I need instant gratification! Pretty please! :-)
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 03/19/2005 - 06:48 am
Title: Feelings
I can't believe that Hank's dying! Pretty please update soon!
Reviewer: Bint
Anonymous
Date: 03/15/2005 - 09:10 am
Title: Scared
more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
