Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/11/2012 - 11:36 am
Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed the story. I think you do a great job exploring the characters' psyches and motivation. Especially loved how insightful William was about sex and how it affected Buffy psychologically, particularly the bit about how he realized after Buffy goaded him into anger sex that Buffy's inexperience meant she didn't know all the mental games lovers can play on each other or that she'd played a dangerous one on herself. Such an accurate and well-illustrated concept, so skillfully descibed.
Plenty of grammar/word mistakes, though, that a good beta could help fix.
Reviewer: callmekitten
Anonymous
Date: 04/17/2009 - 06:06 am
Title: Chapter Five
loving it still.....
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 04/16/2009 - 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter Four
sooooooo sweet, love that William is shy around her :)... more!
Reviewer: callmekitten
Anonymous
Date: 04/16/2009 - 08:53 am
Title: Chapter Three
oooo another good one :) more more...
Reviewer: callmekitten
Anonymous
Date: 04/16/2009 - 08:02 am
Title: Chapter Two
this is a great story :) love the "gift" many great lines and images in this chapter... cant wait to read the next one.. so am off to do so
thanks :)
~Beth
Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed
Date: 04/16/2009 - 07:37 am
Title: Chapter One
what a rush :) I love this so far .. cant wait to get to next chappy
thanks for writing and sharing
~Beth
Reviewer: Olinka
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2008 - 11:01 pm
Title: Epilogue
What an original story! I especially liked the fact that Dru got to be one of the good guys. I always felt this character has so much potential, but she is usually portrayed as nothing nut a loony ho in fan fiction :( Oh, and naming William's penis Spike - that was absolutely hilarious =D
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2008 - 08:12 pm
Title: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this story! I couldn't stop until I finished and I loved all of it!
Reviewer: Shelby
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/2008 - 02:14 pm
Title: Epilogue
aws, i love it =D. i love the whole Buffy/Dru sister thing it was too cute =D. loved the plot of the story though i gotta say it was totally awsome, brilliant job. keep it up ;D
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 11/01/2007 - 02:54 am
Title: Epilogue
Cute and creative story!
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:18 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty one
damn.....that's all i need to say
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:07 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty nine
hooray for want take have...but all the pesky emotions that come with it? that's tough. we all wish we could shut them off but...that's what makes us human
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty eight
what a wonderful way to wake up
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:54 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty six
GOOD GIRL
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty four
god, buffy just needs to wake up and smell the hottie. embrace the scary emotions!!
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty three
bed and breakfest, eh?
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:22 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty one
very good 'witchy' ideas
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty
yay tara!! i love her, i'm glad she's in this story
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:12 pm
Title: Chapter Nineteen
ok, at least we're making Spuffy headway
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter Sixteen
damn...you know, i go to bookstores a lot...but that never happens to me...go fig
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:55 pm
Title: Chapter Fifteen
damn...and just when it was getting all hot...you little minx
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter Thirteen
oh, god, a buffy suicide...that just can't happen! stay buffy, staY!!
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter Twelve
brilliant about the suicide thing
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter Eleven
good dream.
Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed
Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter Ten
gee, maybe Dru was just playing matchmaker.
