Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 12/09/2014 - 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 4
Cute, but feels unfinished. This seems like a start to a story, not a complete story.
Also, some errors , such as loose/lose confusion. Lose is the opposite of win, loose is the opposite of tight.
Reviewer: DidiSummers Signed
Date: 11/21/2013 - 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter 4
I just love it! It was funny and cute at the same time...
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/04/2013 - 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Super sweet and fun.
Reviewer: Kimberly L
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/2010 - 07:24 am
Title: Chapter 4
This would have been great as part of the episode!
Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed
Date: 03/23/2009 - 01:20 am
Title: Chapter 4
Of course it would turn into strip poker, LOL. Cute!
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2007 - 09:48 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Cute
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: Jaime Bee
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2007 - 03:26 am
Title: Chapter 4
Aww that was Great! Funny and not too Fluffy. Just enough though. lol
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you liked it! I was aiming for not too fluffy but still sweet. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Squid
Anonymous
Date: 08/24/2007 - 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 4
WAY TO GO!!! I really liked it. We definitely need a sequel.
Keep writing.
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks :)
I'm thinking about starting a sequel soon. I've got the idea sort of laid out, but I have a couple of papers to write for school this week. I will start as soon as I can though, especially after such encouragement! Thanks for reviewing :D
Reviewer: Lynda
Anonymous
Date: 08/23/2007 - 10:41 pm
Title: Chapter 4
This story screams sequel. I love sequel with happy endings. I would like to see Buffy falling head over heals over Spike. If not that's what I will imagine happened after your beautiful story.
Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you so much! I am working on a sequel which I will hopefully start posting in a couple of weeks unless the muse strikes a little earlier.
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/2007 - 11:46 am
Title: Chapter 4
Really enjoyed reading this story. It was lovely to see Spike's gentler side and Buffy to be accepting of it. Very funny in parts with just the right of sweet. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! *smiles*
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/18/2007 - 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Sad to see it already end here. Loved this chapter too, Gentleman Spike. Hopefully after drinking so much Buffy won't forget what happened. Maybe the shirt will remind her :)
Author's Response: Yeah it was only a short one, but I may use this as a starting point for a longer story in the future. We'll see how it goes. But the shirt will definately reimind Buffy of their time together. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/18/2007 - 04:26 pm
Title: Chapter 3
I thought first Buffy was loosing but not yet :) Thrilling game even if it looks bad for Buffy now.
Author's Response: Well Spike can't have it too easy, even if he is the better player. This type of poker is half luck anyways :)
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2007 - 02:04 pm
Title: Chapter 3
What will he do? Can he lose his duster, just to cheer her up? Maybe he can do something else to cheer her up! We all know just how capable he is! What to do! Great chapter, thanks.
Author's Response: Ha ha! Yes he is very capable indeed. Thanks for reviewing *hugs* it makes my muse very happy :)
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2007 - 12:58 pm
Title: Chapter 4
I truly enjoyed this story. I have a huge smile in my face after reading the amazing and very hopeful ending. I loved, loved, LOVED that Buffy was so much open to Spike on this, that you allowed the camraderie that shined in that chapter to seep into your story and make it much better than what we saw in the series. I loved that Spike was such a gentleman and realized that he shouldn't push Buffy, that she wasn't ready yet. If you ever want to write a sequel of this story, I'd be very happy to read it.
Author's Response: *blushes* well thank you! I hardly know what to say, I'm sitting here with a big grin on my face. Your review made my day! I'm happy you liked the story and I'll see if I do a sequel. I may use it as a starting point for a longer story, not sure yet though. Thank you so much again for reviewing the whole story *hugs* it means so much :)
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2007 - 12:40 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Ooooh, interesting developments! I loved seeing Buffy all flustered and not concentrating on the game butrather on Spike's attributes. *giggles* Excellent chapter, off to read the next one!
Author's Response: I know I'd be flustered *blushes and giggles*.... Thank you again for reviewing! It's certainly making me smile!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2007 - 11:33 am
Title: Chapter 2
Why do I have the feeling that if he kisses her, the kiss would be anything but simple? ;) I loved that she asked for the coat, shows she does know him. And I'm loving their interaction. Off to read more while I do like I'm working. ;)
Author's Response: A kiss with Spike could never be simple. And the coat is the only thing that Buffy knew would be worth enough to him. Glad you're enjoying it and still reading!
Reviewer: Dusty273
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2007 - 09:43 am
Title: Part One
Wonderful first chapter, hilarious too. I love your Spike and Buffy voices and how everything is evolving. *giggles* Buffy getting a Royal Flush without and effort was too funny and now I can't wait to see how she will do with the strip poker.
Author's Response: Thank you! *smiles* I thought it would be a fun idea and Buffy is always a little over confident in situations concerning Spike. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2007 - 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Spike without his duster? No way! Now he's got to win. Fun chapter, thanks.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. The next one will be up as soon as we get our internet connection back at home for the second time this week...
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/31/2007 - 12:24 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Buffy raised the stakes. Now Spike has to win or he'll lose his beloved duster ;-)
Author's Response: yes, should be fun to see how it develops :)
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 07/31/2007 - 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 2
keep it up
Author's Response: thanks, next chapter should be out in a few days
Reviewer: BG
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 11:43 pm
Title: Chapter 2
I love it. It's fantastic. I can't wait till you update.!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Awww... thank you! Definately good for the muse :) I'll update soon, right after I finish editing.
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 04:38 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Very funny and really enjoyable.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: TammyAsh666
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 10:25 am
Title: Chapter 2
Just a kiss? He could at least be more imaginative than that. They've kissed before, but I kinda hope she doesn't win. I wouldn't want him to part with the duster...lol! Besides, it's way too big for her. She should just tell him to buy her one if she wins, but I guess she would be worried about him stealing it. Well, interested to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I know they have kissed before, but it was under a spell and when she was pretending to be Buffy-bot, so maybe this will be thier "real" first kiss... if he wins that is ;)
Reviewer: Verda
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 04:20 pm
Title: Part One
Of course! It had to be strip poker! This should be all kinds of fun, hope Buffy will be winning several hands herself! Great beginning, glad she went home with him and I hope you will be updating again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just got my internet connection back today so I'm hoping to update as soon as possible
