Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 08:05 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
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Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed
Date: 05/05/2010 - 05:43 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
------“Can I touch it?” Buffy asked curiously.
“Touch it? Touch what? My face?!?” Spike’s shock was evident.------
ahahaha! that was soo funny :D i could imagine how exactly his face would look like when he said that :D
and those sparks can never be put out with these two in the same room :D
great job!
Author's Response: Yeah, I had fun writing that line. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2010 - 10:24 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Hope she does get another chance to experience that. Love how their passion was enough to convince Spike not to kill her. Would love to see what happens when they see each other next. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed my fic
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/2008 - 04:20 am
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
great start! I really liked it. I hope that this isn't the end.
Reviewer: Blackoberst
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 04:49 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Vewry hot and interesting too. From the title I'd thought something different was about to occur. Good job!
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 03:06 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Hey hey HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOH C'MON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is just dieing for a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Like literally! LOL! Other than that great job sweetie and I seriously cannot wait for more! So MORE PLEASE LIKE NOW! LOL!!!!!!!!! TA!
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 03:06 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Hey hey HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOH C'MON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't leave it like that!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is just dieing for a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Like literally! LOL! Other than that great job sweetie and I seriously cannot wait for more! So MORE PLEASE LIKE NOW! LOL!!!!!!!!! TA!
Reviewer: ShortStuff
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 02:14 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Was going to say - not bad but you need a beta - then I read the reviews and someone beat me to it.
If you think you've fixed the errors, then you still need a beta. You switch between tenses within sentences and it makes for difficult reading.
You have the basis of a reasonable story but if you get some help to sort out the errors you could improve this a lot.
Reviewer: astrodex
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 01:04 pm
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
The story is pretty good but you really need a beta. There are some serious verb agreement issues and other grammatical problems. I, personally, prefer a bit of build up of tension before Buffy just gives in. I like to feel the passion before I see it.
Author's Response: their whole relationhship has been a precursor to this. There has been sexual tension between the two of them since the first time they met in the ally during the episode School Hard season 2!!!!
Author's Response: I just went back and fixed the grammatical problems. I also added a final short paragraph. Hopefully you can enjoy this revised version.
Reviewer: Jacki
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2008 - 07:28 am
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Love it! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Signed
Date: 07/30/2008 - 06:29 am
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
OH HELL NO! COME ON UR KILLING ME lol, this can't be it i need more please do more chapters u know u wanna!!!!!!
Reviewer: iivyy13 Signed
Date: 07/30/2008 - 01:50 am
Title: Pain or Pleasure?
Well it would have been a lot better if the episode had actually ended like this :D well I liked it, and maybe there's possibility of a sequel?
