Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/27/2012 - 03:14 am
Title: Chapter 1
As a fantasy, it's pretty hot, but wholly improbable, especially with the simplistic dialogue. Plenty of errors including missing words.
Reviewer: Nell Signed
Date: 10/13/2009 - 06:38 pm
Title: Chapter 1
This fic was odd for me. The way it was written kept on making me think that at the end I was gonna find out that Spike and Buffy were a happy couple who were roleplaying. Still good though.
Reviewer: xappletinix Signed
Date: 09/22/2007 - 03:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1
OMG this was so amazing I love this story!
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 08/29/2005 - 12:10 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Great fic - very hot ; )
Reviewer: Whitelighter354
Anonymous
Date: 08/03/2005 - 02:15 am
Title: Chapter 1
Thats not fair!!! *pout* I want more! Great chapter so far! Im
loving the fic! I cant wait to read the next chapter!! I hope that
Spike realizes after all of the Spuffy magic that is going to
happen in the future that Buffy is the one! lol! Please update
soon! :)
Reviewer: Raspy_luv
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 06:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...this is kinda like a porno movie. :) Interested in seeing wear you're gonna take it.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/02/2005 - 05:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Why not? More :)
Reviewer: NEO
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 01:51 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Hope to see the rest soon!! Naughty Buffy
Reviewer: MarstersGirl13
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 01:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I REALLY LIKE IT!
Reviewer: daisy
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1
interesting. cant wait for more. i suppose she's already part of the family and i suppose the child already like her so why not have a go at it. can't wait, please more soon.
Reviewer: Delicia Signed
Date: 08/02/2005 - 10:45 am
Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting! I so want to know what's next.
Reviewer: SpuffyLuv
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 09:01 am
Title: Chapter 1
Wow, please continue. This is going to be a fun fic. I luv Kimber's comment. I like idea of him intending to seduce her the whole time;)
Reviewer: Brat
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 1
Well...she got bold there lol. I think you should definitely continue this story!
Reviewer: Kimber
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 06:29 am
Title: Chapter 1
LOL, one that was a pretty long bad date to come home at 01:45 after saying no to ass grabbing....LOL and his telling her about it a hoot and with his leg rubbing against hers I'd say he was working a bit a seduction mojo himself.....and I bet his wallet is safe and sound in the car....LOL....Go girl write more give Spike the woman he needs that can accept an already made family that can grow.......
Reviewer: chris
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 04:16 am
Title: Chapter 1
Hehehe....she's a bit forward isn't she *grins* I think this will turn into one hot fic,please carry on
Reviewer: Dannii
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2005 - 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 1
OHH I LOVE IT !!!!!!!