Reviewer: Shay Signed
Date: 11/26/2011 - 02:06 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
Will there ever be another update?
Reviewer: Shay Signed
Date: 11/26/2011 - 12:09 pm
Title: Chapter Two
That was oh so very hot!
Reviewer: serinah
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2008 - 07:17 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
i see that you haven't updated in a while, that's a shame. I hope you'll start writing again soon; it's a great story.
Reviewer: DoWnEr
Anonymous
Date: 01/12/2008 - 03:34 am
Title: Chapter Thirteen
Damn... what a whore. And no i don't think of women that sleep around as whores or sluts. I only save those names for women that really deserve it, like women that cheat and women that think just because they carried the kid for 9 months gives them the right to keep the father out of the kids life. That the father can't love their kids as much as they do because we didn't give birth to him/her.
Unless the fathers some abusive redneck drunk or into criminal activity the father should always be allowed to see his kids if he loves them. Women that think that way make me sick. They should be put down like the bitches they are.
Reviewer: spuffygurl
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2007 - 12:35 am
Title: Chapter Forty
This is a really great story. I have read the first 40 chapters before and I just finished reading it again. I noticed that it has been awhile since you have updated. So I wanted to tell you how fabulous this story is in hopes that you may find your muse again and be able to finish it.
Reviewer: Amanda
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2007 - 05:16 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
Oh I loved the updates sorry on not commenting on them sooner. This has been one crazy new year.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 10:56 am
Title: Chapter Forty
Good that they (like with their humor) are on the same wavelength.
Good move.. only let Faith now she was there. And she paled.. so she is guilty.
Someone no both are very happy with how the date went :))
Reviewer: Tina
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:00 am
Title: Chapter Forty
Awwwwwwww! Finally after all the angst buff gets a break XD
Reviewer: Dirktavian
Anonymous
Date: 01/19/2007 - 02:59 am
Title: Chapter Forty
Fabulous update! Thanks for the chapter that helps us all relive that giggly, schoolgirl feeling.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
good update i loved it
Reviewer: vs in nj
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:24 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
What a cute chapter. I loved it. Thanks!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 06:58 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
Glad they're making some headway in their relationship. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: J
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:13 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
That chapter was really cute. I wonder what's going on with Faith though. Anyway, loved the new update and can't wait for another!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 04:05 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
What a wonderful date! Great update and so glad William is being so "good" (not grabby or pushy) just letting Buffy set the pace for the end of the date! More please.
Reviewer: Suzee
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
So maybe it doesn't actually apply to this chapter so much as the last, but I lke the little development with Faith.......and how Buffy decided to let her know she'd seen them....
William and Buffy are so cute in this fic--even in all their screwed up-ness (which is getting better, by the way)..Thanks for updating :)
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:10 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
Awww... What a sweet closing scene! Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more. :D
Reviewer: Jenna Signed
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:30 am
Title: Chapter Forty
Oh I love this story! Please, I need more soon! You have me hooked! :)
Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed
Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:43 am
Title: Chapter Forty
Excellent! Really well written chapter. =)
Reviewer: gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:37 am
Title: Chapter Forty
So glad you updated this one. I love giggly Buffy.
Reviewer: Caroline
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:43 am
Title: Chapter Forty
"William’s metamorphosis from “Spike” the rebellious kept man, to William, the wondrous little boy that just wanted to make things right with undertones of “Spike” hidden underneath."
Really liked those lines. And i think you portrayed his journey very well.
I loved that their evening ended with a wonderful kiss and just that.
Don't forget the power of a kiss. :)
Reviewer: Nichole
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 07:24 am
Title: Chapter Forty
great update..love this story..look forward to more soon..N
Reviewer: rosie
Anonymous
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:37 am
Title: Chapter Forty
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter Forty
awwwww!!!!! lol. so cute. loved it soooooo much. faithy got's some 'splainin' to do!!! actually, i could really care less of what she has to say. i just hope buffy gives it to her good the next time they meet. more soon. loved it. lots.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/15/2007 - 06:06 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-nine
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2007 - 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter Thirty-nine
Well, Buffy sure let's her guard down when she's angry. William now has quite alot to think about. more please.
