Reviewer: Fenixjpb
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2012 - 07:41 pm
Title: Epilogue
Ok I have to say it..I really dislike the story..Im sorry but spike was a right bastard all time, from the star. he never change, he cheat on her he tried her like crap..and he evenr care or say he is sorry..your fic just show that she is one idiot that forgive how bad he tried her and he is a right bastard without heart..Honest and Im sorry I get mad for read it
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 07/14/2012 - 03:30 am
Title: Promise Ring
Story was cute up until Spike & Buffy first got together, but then it fell apart. Needs editing; lots of spelling, grammar, continuity errors...
Reviewer: olinka
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/2008 - 02:01 pm
Title: Epilogue
Dear PsychoPromQueen7,
I just wanted to say how much I liked the way you handled the whole teen pregnancy issue. There are planty of cheesy stories on this site that depict Buffy getting pregnant in her teens as a very happy, positive thing. I always couldn't help but exclaim, 'What's so great about getting knocked up at 16/17?'
In your story, you showed that teen pregnancy can be very problematic and pose a major challange to both parents. I really liked that you were not afraid to voice a possibility of having an abortion. Yes, Buffy didn't go through that as she realized that she simply couldn't do so, but she did seriously consider all the choices she had. That's why this story was more realistic than many others I've read.
Reviewer: shadowgirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/12/2007 - 10:11 am
Title: Epilogue
You know, I don't mean to be ruden and I DID wnjoy reading this, but I honestly think Buffy ended up with the wrong guy. Spike treated Buffy sh*t and pivlicly humilliated her, NEVER once apologizing. When she became 'hot' he decided he needed to have her and for some reason she just automatically forgave him, even when he showed no signs of remorse for acting the way he did. then, she gets pregnat, freaks out and thinks about getting an abortion but realizes her mistake and what does Spike do? He again acts like a jerk and CHEATS on her, NEVER once apologizing or showing any remorse.
Finally, he calls her a reailer park mum and a slut, NEVER once apologizing or showing any remorse. So, what does she do? Runs back into his arms.
I really do like your writing, but by the end of the story Buffy seems really stupid for being in love with a guy who has no redeeming qualities and constantly acts like a jascka**.
Again, this is not meant as a flame and I'm sorry if it's harsh, but you might think about making Spike more remorseful and likable and Buffy less of a pushover if you ever decide to redo this story.
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2007 - 04:38 am
Title: First Dates and Broody Spikes
Sorry i put Jake wen i ment Ryan - who is an amazing character
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2007 - 04:31 am
Title: Sunnydale Mall: The Second Hell Mouth
Love the story so far, I kinda want Jake to keep buffy @ the mo though as Spikes being such a major jerk! Wicked so far!
Reviewer: MadBrillianT
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:40 pm
Title: Oh
i don't like ryan anymore.....bloody git
Reviewer: MadBrillianT
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:30 pm
Title: First Dates and Broody Spikes
i love that they call each other by their last names. my boyfriend through high school always did that!
Reviewer: MadBrillianT
Anonymous
Date: 01/20/2007 - 06:09 pm
Title: One Summer and Public Humiliation Can Change Alot
well, gee, i like ryan already!
Reviewer: ellie
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2006 - 02:20 pm
Title: Promise Ring
omg that is just...the sweetest endin!!! n wen she woke up n sed hu r u all ? i just wanted 2 hit u! thats sooo crule.. i love it!
Reviewer: buffy25122003
Anonymous
Date: 09/04/2006 - 08:20 pm
Title: Ketchup, Mustard AND Peanut Butter?
your gr8 do u get money for this be/c ill tell u what u should, i love this story yay spuffy
Reviewer: Faithwills22
Anonymous
Date: 03/02/2006 - 12:53 am
Title: Epilogue
just wanted to say that I've loved this story... is there going to be a sequel of some kind?? maybe one of maddy at buffy's age?? seriously though keep up the good work... I love a good plot... :)
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2005 - 03:51 am
Title: Angel Don't Preach
"stupid bitch"??? she's a pregnant sixteen year old! sheesh, spike's still a major prick *sighs* meaningless sex indeed, what a moron, i hope buffy kicks his ass good time *crosses fingers and hopes* thanks for writing!
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2005 - 07:41 am
Title: Wait, WHAT?
lol, another lil typo "you love me sister" i think is "you love my sister?!!" :D if you still need a beta feel free to contact me jemima@gmail.com . thanks for writing :)
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2005 - 07:37 am
Title: Oh
ouch. ryan's a dick *shakes head* what a moron. anyhoo, awww "goddess" indeed :) thanks for writing!
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2005 - 07:09 am
Title: Tigers and Bears and Flashbacks Oh My!
huh?!!! how could he treat her like that? no way! she's his friend's little sister! i have a big bro and if any of his friends did that to me well... no way! as if spike didn't know her name! bethy indeed *shakes head* what a jackass, buffy better make him pay with flesh! lol, i know i know, i'm vehement. off to read more, thanks for writing!
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2005 - 09:35 pm
Title: A Little Liberation
aww.. that's okay, i like buffy n ryan, it's all puppy lovin' :) as long as there's some spuffy luvin' eventually... ;) off to read more! thanks for writing :D
Reviewer: claudia
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2005 - 09:31 pm
Title: One Summer and Public Humiliation Can Change Alot
nice start :) ryan actually sounds kinda cute :) and spikey's all jealous. good stuff, karma!
Reviewer: Stine
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2005 - 01:44 pm
Title: Friends? Riiiiiggh
NO she should have said no to him and wait, because if he really wanted her or wanted to be her friend then he should not start with " i want to be your friend" he should start with
" i am really sorry for all that i said to you last year can you please try and forgive me?" that would have been so much better for him self. heh=0)
Reviewer: Stine
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2005 - 01:37 pm
Title: The Gossip Column Knows All
What a bitch! Alright it could have been worse, she could have used their names and she could have made something really bad up to pepper the story up, but still who that women think she are?
Reviewer: Stine
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2005 - 01:26 pm
Title: One Summer and Public Humiliation Can Change Alot
Uhh.. yir baby go you. You are really on to something. The story is great i if you could make Spike REALLY sorry for ALL the bad things he has done to Buffy then it is perfect all the way around. =0)
And just for you´r infomation if i could chose loved insted of liked then i would have;0)
Reviewer: tori
Anonymous
Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:17 pm
Title: Epilogue
omg!! i loooovved ur story sooooooo much!!! i cant wait to read your other fics!! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: baby spikes
Anonymous
Date: 07/02/2005 - 08:11 pm
Title: Epilogue
aww such a cute story... a story worth reviewing for... hmm... darla winifred's site thingi did't work... o well... great story... i luv it!!!
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/2005 - 09:23 pm
Title: Ex-Girlfriend
Yay, more No Doubt! When I read the first lines of this song and the other one, I immediately went to iTunes to play them. I'm listening to ex-girlfriend right now, and I was thinking a great idea for a fic would be based on Bathwater, yet another No Doubt song... Take it or leave it, but I think that would be a very fitting Spuffy storyline. I'd write it myself, but I'm not very good at that stuff.
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 06/29/2005 - 06:53 pm
Title: Just A Girl (And It Sucks)
I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!! And No Doubt in general! Hmm... now I'm very happy with the progressions of this fic and that you used one of my fave songs! Ok, I'm going to continue reading now.
