Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 08:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1.
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Reviewer: wengdongdong
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/2015 - 05:13 am
Title: Chapter 13
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/03/2013 - 12:47 pm
Title: Chapter 16
Really enjoyed this story. Hope Buffy can keep her powers...just because I think she'd miss them, and she'd hate not being able to help if something came along.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/02/2013 - 01:38 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Still a good story, but there are a number of plot holes in this chapter:
1) Clem says he has never heard of Jansen, but at the end of chapter 10, Jansen's minion had talked to Clem about him when Clem was at his friend Aaron's apartment. Clem ran to the crypt in chapter
11 to tell Spike and Buffy.
2) Anya says that "no earth magic" affects Jansen, but then Willow, along with Tara and Anya, are able to use earth magic against him. Would have been better to say that he is *nearly* impervious to earth magic rather than entirely unaffected. I get that you're showing that Willow has become stronger than even Anya could predict, but then that should be made clear before Willow succeeds... either Anya, Tara or Willow should explain that what they're doing (or what they just did) will make them able to override Jansen's protection from earth magic, or that they're using Salano magic or something.
3) Clem shouldn't be the one telling Xander how much Giles hates Spike... Clem wasn't even at the Magic Box, Xander knows better than Clem does at this point in the story.
Other than those little things, the story is really good... glad Jansen's dead.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/02/2013 - 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 10
Loving the story, but man, neither Clem's nor Giles' thought processes in this chapter make any sense... their logic runs in circles!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/01/2013 - 07:41 pm
Title: Chapter 9
OMG, that scene was soooo hot. I'm completely flushed and aroused.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/01/2013 - 07:11 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Oh, I am liking this story so much, but not sure Spike coming up with the solution makes much sense at this juncture. Minutes before, he's so convinced Buffy dislikes him so much he lies about a mate, suddenly he believes she loves him enough to make him a stand-in for the loved one in the prophecy. As a device, it would have been better if Anya or Willow or even Clem, who would have the knowledge of claiming and would have realized Buffy's feelings, had suggested the solution. But then, of course, it would have taken more time to get to that point in the story, perhaps drawing it out longer than you might want. I do love how this chapter ends, though, with Buffy's realization about the chip. Plot twist!
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2008 - 06:51 am
Title: Chapter 12
evil giles is weird. Great sfic, can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Lady_Spuffy77 Signed
Date: 04/24/2008 - 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 16
a really good story. But i didn't like it ending with Spike. I was thinking, epilogue in iceland.
but great job!!!
Author's Response: Hi honey. I was a little disappointed in the ending too - maybe another story revealing how Iceland works for them will help to bridge the gap - I will see what I can do babes.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/29/2007 - 06:23 pm
Title: Chapter 16
It makes sense that the Council wants to get rid off Buffy because she thinks too much on her own.
Mmmmh Joyce has a plan. That's what you meant in your answer to my last comment, huh? Joyce is taking action.
I didn't expect Angel to be so helpful; but this one has his own life, build without Buffy. Ah he convinced him indeed. And Giles inner watcher won with the new opportunities for him.
Retirement for Buffy? What will that mean for her? Being a normal human? Even if Spike will love his Buffy with or without her strength Buffy will have a hard time to keep up with him. They could get hurt even if he didn't want to do that.
That question is open for me. Otherwise? Enjoyed it, sometimes more than other times when you had me really, really, really worried *gg*.
Author's Response: Hi Cordykitten, my angel. You are without doubt one of the best reviewers I have ever known. You think about the stories you read, and you always leave such lovely comments. You will always be my star
Reviewer: MrsP
Anonymous
Date: 12/29/2007 - 03:34 pm
Title: Chapter 16
Great story, really really enjoyed it.
Lots of loose ends though, does that mean you're going to treat us to a sequel? (crossing my fingers now).
Author's Response: I might MrsP, I just might. I was ended the readers to make up their own ending - as long it was happy, then I was happy too.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 07:32 pm
Title: Chapter 16
It would be great to have the sequel take place in Iceland, Wow
I remember all the uproar you caused when you had us think he was claimed, what a ride that was, LOL.
Author's Response: Hi JO, you know what a sneaky bint I can be LOL. Pretty soon there will be loads for you to read and enjoy - and I promise I will finish LFS very soon too.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter 16
Gilly it's finished! aww i don't want it finished I was hoping it would go on and on like a t.v serial. All kidding aside though it was a wonderful story and the ending was unusual does this mean they'll be a sequel? Because i want an encore.
Author's Response: JO, my angel. I know I kind of left the story up in the air, but I wanted the readers to have a chance to build their own ending. There might be a sequel to this - but it will be quite a long way off. I have something like TLATL in my head and I just HAVE to write it soon. LFS will be finished soon too, but the epic will start in March....I hope....
Reviewer: Sandy
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 07:13 pm
Title: Chapter 16
I loved your story. Ever consider writing a sequel?
Can't wait to see what you have for us next.
Author's Response: I must write a sequel, but if I do then this little tale would become a series as it's a sequel itself. I will be concentrating on Love For Sale now, as I have an epic that I just have to write and I dont want any distractions. Thanks for taking the time to read and review, and I am really really pleased that you enjoyed it
Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed
Date: 12/28/2007 - 05:14 pm
Title: Chapter 1.
wonderful ending, glad they made Giles see the light. poor Buffy loosing her powers. she'll have a finite life and Spike will eventually be left on his own. Loved the strong Joyce and the fact that Buffy and Spike will be taking Joyce and Dawn with them.
Congrats and thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thank hun from the bottom of my heart. I wanted to leave this fic with some questions, and I wanted the readership to make up their own minds on how it should end. I hope I managed that with this ending - I know I wont please everyone, but writers never do.....
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 03:39 pm
Title: Chapter 16
LOVED THIS STORY!! im so glad u finished this fic and loved the ending. im so glad that everything worked out well and that things turned out right. THANX SOO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS FIC, I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT!!
Author's Response: Why Sarah, my pet, thanks from the bottom of my heart. There are still some unanswered questions, but I think the readers can make up their own mind on how they really want it to end.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2007 - 02:42 pm
Title: Chapter 16
Can Buffy live without being the Slayer ?
But love the happy ending.. Iceland ...
Author's Response: Hi Pam. That's the big question isn't it. She doesn't really know anything else - and let's be honest Spike fell in love with the Slayer. Maybe I might need to do a little sequel after all - we will have to wait and see.....
Reviewer: DoWnEr
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 04:04 pm
Title: Chapter 2
God i hate that. So Spike loses himself in bottles and fighting, while Buffy loses herself in fucking other men.
For once i'd like to see Spike as the person that sleeps around trying to forget while Buffy remains a freaking nun.
Author's Response: Hi babes - you are actually quite right. But I'm not sure if it's my story you're reading and reviewing, because Buffy did stay a nun, and Spike got on with his life, determined not to come back. It was Dawn who asked him to return, and it was Spike who didn't want to see Buffy.
Reviewer: _Susy_
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2007 - 11:32 pm
Title: Chapter 15
I couldn’t help it. I had to drop you a line here too.
Even if it’s just to tell you how much I loved the chapter (as well as the entire story)
I’m eager to find out what will happen next!
Author's Response: Hello my angel. Between you and JO, a chapter finally made itself into the fandom. I'm sorry it took so long, but I did listen to you. The next chapter will not take months, I promise
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2007 - 09:20 am
Title: Chapter 15
Im so glad you have Joyce taking charge and dealing with the imbecile Giles, she laying into him but good, and Dawn also ,so glad she speaks her mind and the Spuffy lovin is fantastic, you always do that so well. I think the culprit is Angel and not the council ,but we shall see. Thanks for the update Gilly it was fab.
Author's Response: Hello babes. See - the whining worked LOL. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for giving me the kick up the backside I needed to get writing again. I hope you're not in so much pain now, honey - and one day we WILL be on the tag at the same time
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/03/2007 - 08:25 am
Title: Chapter 15
Joyce can be very dangerous when in defending mood. Clever to tell he others (Willow) that Buffy would come by to talk. So she still has time = can do it later.
Mmmm fun in the shower... and reconnecting. It's good for them to have some time for themselves. *gg* Even if they didn't notice that the others were back already. Dawn was very evil, teasing Spike and embarrassing him ;-)
Uh-huh... Joyce is on the warpath now :-D
The Council or Angel won't know what hit them.
Author's Response: Hi babes. In my opinion, Joyce was a great mother and if she could she would have done her best to keep her babies safe. If that meant that she was happy with Buffy's creature-of-the-night mate, then so be it. The best is yet to come from our fave mom......just wait and see
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2007 - 12:27 am
Title: Chapter 15
YAY IM SO GLAD THAT JOYCE IS ON THEIR SIDE AND ALSO THE COUNCIL IS SUCH BULLSHIT,I CANT BELIEVE THEY TOLD GILES THAT!! i LOVE this story. i cant believe that giles is being so unreasonable and i cant wait to see how joyce takes on angel and the council. i really hope tha giles finds out the truth and that everyonerebuilds their relationship so theyre on good terms.PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read, more. THANX
Author's Response: Aw Sarah, what can I say. You have waited so patiently for this fic update, and I hope it was all you wanted. And I have to agree, an angry Joyce is just what we all want to see
Reviewer: serenity Signed
Date: 11/02/2007 - 09:02 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Ok, so I typed out this long and eloquent review and lost it when the site didn't take it for some reason. Boo. Anyway, the gist of it was that this was a great update, glad to see everything going fairly well for our blonde duo. Loved the nasty little remarks Dawn kept throwing in, such a little sister thing to do.
Hope things are going well for you over in your neck of the world. Glad to have you back!
Author's Response: Hi babes. I have been up to my eyes lately, but saying that I hope to be back on track soon. I've not even had time to read your new one 'FP', but I promise I will very very soon. Congratulations on your nominations babes, you really deserve them (Feeling Love Awards is hosted on my website, so I know ALL about them )
Reviewer: MrsP
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/2007 - 05:15 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Oooh welcome back! I'd been wondering where you'd been and whether you were going to update this story.
Feels like this one is coming to a close? Just need to sort out Willow and it'll be there.
Great writing as usual.
Author's Response: Why thank you, as always, for your kind words of encouragement. Real Life kind of hit me where it hurts for a few months there, but things are definitely looking up. I have to thank you for sticking with my little tale, more very soon
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/2007 - 04:32 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Love the Spuffy! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank hon. I'm sorry you had to wait as long as you did, but I am back with a vengeance now - or at least I hope so (GRINS)
