Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 06/23/2012 - 01:59 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
Sweet. Such a melancholy tone, but a lovely tale of eventual healing...
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 05/02/2010 - 09:57 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
awww. i loved the last line. very sweet. good story. felt so bad for buffy's hardships but i'm glad she let spike in. and ya u were easy on angel lol i so woulda been waaay meaner lol but then i have this irrational dislike for him. great job :)
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 08/11/2007 - 06:09 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
Such a sweet and perfect ending. I'm not sure if you read these reviews now, since it's been awhile since you posted this, but I wanted to tell you how much I liked this story :)
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 08/11/2007 - 05:31 am
Title: Chapter 3
"Wanna go to the park with me? We could run around a lot. Get really tired." --haha.
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 08/10/2007 - 10:28 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Great scene where Spike is observing the three generations of women and wonderful description of the glimpse he gets of old Buffy peeking from underneath the hat. So sweet that Spike sees them as a family and is willing to fight their "dragons". Loved the back and forth between the two of them on the computer and of course that he's there for her at the end of the chapter.
Reviewer: jnharrow Signed
Date: 08/10/2007 - 09:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1
I loved this chapter. Spike was so patient and sweet with Mrs. G and then with Dawn and Buffy. I wasn't feeling very sympathetic towards Buffy (because she was using Spike), but then you neatly switched to her POV and I couldn't help but feel bad for her, as sapped of energy and incredibly stuck in a bad situation as she is.
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/2007 - 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
Thank you for writing this story, I loved it!
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 07/26/2007 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 2
What a great premise for a story between them. I can't wait to see how it turns out! Fabulous!
Reviewer: Toni
Anonymous
Date: 05/25/2007 - 08:17 pm
Title: Chapter 2
I must've read this story 3 or 4 times already but come back to it every so often. This is my favorite line in this chapter.
"Where had all the air gone? Because suddenly he couldn't breath."
Reviewer: Spuffy
Anonymous
Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:58 pm
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
An awesome fic, the old woman's character has seemed good to me, has been funny and something sad.
Buffy had a terrible life, until Spike appeared.
I have liked very much the fic, I hope to keep fics on reading yours.
Reviewer: Sandra
Anonymous
Date: 04/22/2006 - 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
I read this as a Random Fic and am really glad to have done. Hadnt seen it coming about Goldie and thought the shole story was sad, funny and romantic and lovely read.
Reviewer: Jessica
Anonymous
Date: 04/17/2005 - 02:04 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
I liked this story a lot. And the bit at the end - "Spike loves Buffy and Buffy loves Spike. That’s just how it should be". I loved that. So few people get that that is how it always should be.
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 02/22/2005 - 09:24 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This fic was great! I so never saw itcoming that it was gonna be Spike in the end who she'd been chatting wih all along! They were so great together at towards the end! Have you considered writing a sequel?
Reviewer: Jaime
Anonymous
Date: 02/15/2004 - 12:07 am
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
you've opened my eyes a little. bad things are happening..nothing horrible or life threatening, but they have done their number on me all the same. Your story has taught me that letting go of older things is okay. It's taught me that you should just "focus on the big things, you should also watch for the small moments, b/c sometimes those small moments are the most important." Thank you moxie. Never have i read a story that i have taken so much from. I look up to you, and how you write. I absolutly love it and wish to be as good as you and Williamsgirl someday...after im only 16. I still have time to grow...I've also picked that up from one of your stories. Thank you for teaching me so much. Please keep writing so i can keep learning from you. Wonderful, wonderful story.
Author's Response: Jaime, first of all thank you so much for those kind words. I'm sorry that things may not be so good but that was a very mature response from you. Sounds to me like you have a good head on your shoulders and the ablilty to find in life stuff that will help you through. I wish you all the best and feel free to mail me if you ever want to talk about stuff you've read. :-))
Reviewer: Magan
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2004 - 11:56 pm
Title: Chapter 5 , Epilogue
This was a very good story! I liked that Buffy and Spike finally got married.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading , all the best
moxie:-))
