Reviewer: Lynnette Signed
Date: 01/12/2010 - 03:25 am
Title: Chapter 10: 'The Bronze'
I like it. But is Spike gonna be mean about stuff? I'm sure you'll make it interesting. I wonder how Buffy will deal with all her men. haha. can't believe she's in that situation, a new one as far as I know, but funny.
Reviewer: Ali
Anonymous
Date: 08/18/2007 - 05:40 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
WoW I just found this brilliant fic two days ago and WOW I LOVE IT In fact, it's one of my favourite fics in the world!! Congragulations!! Really!!
Reviewer: Spikes mrs
Anonymous
Date: 06/14/2007 - 01:04 pm
Title: Chapter 38: 'Confrontations'
WHAT NO RAPE IN MARRIAGE IN USA LAW.....What twat thoughtthat one up has to of been a bloody man...
In British Law sex has to be consensal on both parties part in marriage or not or it's RAPE.....Good I hate Angel so much just now........
Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed
Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:50 am
Title: Chapter 32: 'Winning'
I can't believe what a complete bastard Xander is being ....I know he's never liked Spike but this is way out of order......
Reviewer: Jaime
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2006 - 10:43 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
well i liked the story but, i didnt really like buffys character in it. buffy was always strong and she didnt take anyones crap, she seemed like she wasnt all there to me. like she was still a little girl, not all of the time but most of the time.
but other than that it was a good story i liked it.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/12/2006 - 06:57 pm
Title: Chapter 32: 'Winning'
If I wasn't having a good time reading this story it would be quite depressing......the only guy in the story that seemed to be a good guy now just went evil.......everybody's asshole......you gotta love that symetri though :)
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/2006 - 07:30 pm
Title: Chapter 12: 'Cell Phones;The Devil's Play Toys'
No Buffy is not clue less but Spike is pathetic. 10 years, who are we kidding here? This don't fly for shit, people get over and move on....unless you are an idiot or just a masochist (sp?)
At some point most people would cut their losses and get on with their lifes.....He never came across as pathetic......I mean could you imagine Spike haning around for 10 years and yearning for Buffy if she was married to either Riley or Angel on the show? There are limits to what even he will put up with.
To be honest this particular part of the story is what I find the hardest to swallow and really makes it hard for me to read it. Cause I think that all tha characters are in some way pathetic. I know it's bad when I cheer for Xander and hope that he will have a happy ending, I know it won't be a Buffy/Xander ending but I hope the guy gets something good.
In your other stories I usually like most of the characters, even the "bad" guys usually got some redeming qualities but in this story they are just not very lovable. Hell you should just have them in an orgy cause they pretty much all deserve each other.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this story. I know it's a tough read when you love the characters from the show as much as you seem to.
This was my first fiction, ever and I re-wrote it before I submitted it here and on BSC. Alot of the readers felt as you do; that Spike and Buffy were pretty much losers in this one. I had a hard time writing them this way because I loved both of them so much on the TV show.
Spike was always an enigma to me; that's why I wrote him this way. He seemed so devoted to the woman he loved, no matter how she hurt him. This is why I have him 'pining' for Buffy all those years, whereas Buffy is clueless to his feelings.
I'm not sure how much of the story you have read, or if you choose to continue. Please try and maybe the next chapters will explain themselves and our two lost 'souls' Spike/Buffy along the way.
Xander is not what he seems. Spike and Buffy will turn out to be less clueless about their feelings for each other as time goes on in the story.
Thank you for reviewing this and I hope you stick with it.
Also, thank you for reading and reviewing the other stories of mine. Stake Your Claim was very near to my heart and actually is my favorite story that I have written to date!
Thanks again,
spuf
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/2006 - 07:11 pm
Title: Chapter 11: 'Shadow Dancing'
This story don't make much sense at all....first we have slutty buffy shacking up with anything that has a heartbeat but won't do it with Spike because her virtue is suddenly all fluttery or something.
Then I have some serious issue with the pairing of them at all. To me I can't understand how Spike could be "in love" with her 10 years after he was shot down so brutaly. I mean first of all Buffy don't seem to have any redeming qualities at all, she marries for wealth and status, she has shacked up with most of the college campus during her college years and now she is on some revenge trip. I mean she might be hot and I can see that Spike might want to shag her but to be in love with her after all this time is just pathetic. Don't know if it says more about the looser Spike really is or how not very belivable I find this particular part of the plot.
To be honest I think you should have just made Spike interested in having sex with her to scratch an itch and maybe have him develop feelings for her later. Now it's just not very belivable to me. To carry a torch for some one that pretty much kicked you in the balls while in the process of making love. I can't see that type of thing as being very good for the loving a person feels for another.
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 05/10/2006 - 06:22 pm
Title: Chapter 7: 'Xander'
Don't mind the Buffy/other especially not done in this way with very little to none of it described in graphic detail. Not sure I like this Buffy though, seems like a right biatch and I don't know if I like to see Spike end up with her.
Reviewer: buffypurple12 Signed
Date: 04/19/2006 - 10:48 am
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Aw I loved that story! I've spent all day reading it. Great job. I hope thatyou never stop writing Spuffyness!
Author's Response: Thank you. That must have taken a while!
spuf
Reviewer: Natalie Brownell
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2006 - 02:47 pm
Title: Chapter 9: 'Good Will Hunting'
Fab chapter i loved the elevator talk you can tell they so have unfinished business i cant wait until she sees him again and she has to see Cordelia and Riley how embaressing like hell they all seeing someone else if you called it that write soon
lol
Author's Response: Thank you. I've been terrible about responding to reviews lately. RL is still hectic!
spuf
Reviewer: Natalie Brownell
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2006 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter 5: 'Good Girls Don't/But Buffy Does
Revenge is sweet for Buffy any way i wonder if she succeeds of course she will when is Spike comin im missing him
Reviewer: Natalie Brownell
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2006 - 02:04 pm
Title: Chapter 3: 'Buffy Plots/Therefore She Is'
Your doing okay i thought it was Spike but it was actually Riley then why would she get with him and Spike is bad he shouldnt have been taking advantage of her taking her for granted than talking to her so cruelly bad Spike i cant believe i said that i love Spike he better do some thing to make up for that or, or else!
Reviewer: Natalie Brownell
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2006 - 01:52 pm
Title: Chapter 2: 'When Angel's Fall'
Great chapter Bffy should go and teach Angel and Cordelia a lesson i would how horrible though Buffys well prettier than Cordelia blondes rule brunettes suck Spike to the rescue..........
Reviewer: Natalie Brownell
Anonymous
Date: 03/28/2006 - 01:44 pm
Title: Prologue and Chapter 1: 'The Charmed One'
Good so far good opening was interesting what happened with Spike it sounds bad or upsetting and what has Angel done nothing good but if its the Buffy from the tv series she'll handle it headstrong and take him down sort him good proper Spike better be there to help her or i'll be sorting him out
Reviewer: Claire
Anonymous
Date: 09/07/2005 - 12:22 am
Title: Chapter 24: 'Whenever I'm Alone With You'
Okay, so I'm a bit of a doof, but I really liked the two right feet thing.I read that and just couldn't stop giggling. I mean I like the rest of the story, but the right foot thing was just the right amount of silly.
Reviewer: wilson
Anonymous
Date: 08/26/2005 - 01:29 am
Title: Chapter 12: 'Cell Phones;The Devil's Play Toys'
i'm so upset that there aren't more reviews for this story, i absolutely love it and don't understand why all the other people out there who agree with me aren't telling you so. Anyways I have to do some work so i havent finished reading it yet. But it's my something to look forward to at the moment :) Cheers.
Reviewer: baby_goofy1999
Anonymous
Date: 08/25/2005 - 11:41 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Okay, I'm not going to lie. I had a really hard time getting into this story. I almost just went to the last chapter and read that to be done with it. In fact, I started to read it before most of the story. But then, at the mention of Angel being dead, I knew I had to read all of it in its entirety. Now I'm glad that I did. I was a good story, even at the dark points. And long. Way long. But still a good read. I'm glad you finished it and didn't just leave it when it seemed no one was reading it.
Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 07/28/2005 - 09:24 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Overall, a lovely story. I loved the show quotes that were worked into it. Some points seemed less fleshed out than they could have been, given the length. However, the true spirit of Spuffy was there all along--his long-felt love and her search for identity, the complete reliance on each other that echoed late season 7. My biggest gripe? Xander. But it fit your story and he could have taken that turn on the show if things had played out differently. I've seen more than a few bad guy Xander fics and always hated it. This time I didn't hate it; I just wanted to cry for the lousy hand he'd been dealt and the reckless way he played it. Again, a great read from start to finish.
Reviewer: Brat
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2005 - 09:26 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Well done :) Loved this story. Very intense, but also romantic too. Great job :)
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:07 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Awwwww! Amazing ending for this fic - it was perfect! Take care, C ; )
Reviewer: DK
Anonymous
Date: 06/05/2005 - 11:49 pm
Title: Epilogue: 'Thank You'
Very nice ending, it was a good solid story. Enjoyed it and will recommend to other readers.
Reviewer: DK
Anonymous
Date: 06/02/2005 - 10:21 pm
Title: Chapter 47: 'Life's Blood'
Please make sure she gets to keep all of Angels money. That way they don't have to work and spend as much time as they wish together. Really enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: Brat Signed
Date: 06/02/2005 - 09:31 pm
Title: Chapter 47: 'Life's Blood'
whew!! I was worried there for a while!!!
Reviewer: Caitie Signed
Date: 06/02/2005 - 09:14 pm
Title: Chapter 47: 'Life's Blood'
Amazing end to your saga, in fact - I loved it so much! Can't wait for the epilogue, so please post it soon! Take care, C )
