Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 12/26/2013 - 08:57 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
I thought this was very cute. Far-fetched, maybe, but very cute.
Reviewer: Tigerlillyward
Anonymous
Date: 09/09/2013 - 01:21 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
There is a saying if the ending fails to deliver from so many loose ends your story will end up in a deep dark dungeon of disdain. Well I have read a couple of your stories and I am disgusted will the way you have ended them. It's as if you loss interest as your writing and are looking for a quick way to end them. It's a shame as you are a talented writer. It wouldn't taken much to tie up all the loose ends in each of your stories. :-(
Reviewer: Spikeluverfan101 Signed
Date: 10/05/2010 - 09:04 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
very cute and hot :)
Reviewer: buffyconvert
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/2009 - 10:58 am
Title: Part 1. Things Go Wonky
Spike mocking Buffy while wearing her clothes - a new twist to the common theme of drinking her off his mind. but I'm with Spike on the whole she should've put him some place safe from the sun idea. Gee, Buffy, that was heartless.
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2008 - 07:04 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
totally loved it!
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/2008 - 07:58 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Nice story - I enjoyed Spike in all of his various incarnations.... Thanks
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 03:01 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
The title is too funny - love me some blue collar comedy, *winks*. Wheww, thank God Spike was missing her instead of planning to block the claim forever. Funny imagery with the mannequin, giggles. The part where he temporarily contemplated shaggin her upside down was hilarious – very Spik-like. And have I told you how much I like growly aggressive, possessive Spike, whether vmap or AU... oh yeah, loads of hotness of my fav variety. William is great, but the grrr Spike is hotness at it’s best. Damn, the whole chaining and ‘almost’ blow job was nicely done. Damn, that great sex, even if they did cum quickly and yet another heart breaking moment from Spike. I so wanted to slap the shit outa him until you made it clear what he was feeling. This part got me: She really didn’t like this whiny, broody version of Spike. Too close to Angel, she did a mental gag. She hoped her attempts to taunt him back to his old self would work again, like earlier. “You’re a right bitch, you know that, Slayer?” he shot back. She gave a lazy shrug then smirked. “You’re an ass.” Seriously laughed my frickin ass off. The ending was equally as funny, I absolutely adored this fic sweety. And again with me needing to consult you once I’m ready to write vamp Spike.
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 02:22 pm
Title: Part 4. Rock the Halls
Ah, Slayer blood is what did the trick, I see. You had me fooled there for a bit. Poor Buffy, I really feel for her but you did a wonderful job at creating equally sympathy for Spike’s case as well. Way to go Spike for cornering her in the kitchen and, ahem, proving his point she can’t deny she likes him. That was hot when he was begging her to say she still wanted him, I could feel the waves of insecurity rolling off him. Of course all with the grrr, want, take, have Spike carrying her downstairs, oh yeah, it’s getting a bit hot in here. Awwww, Spike/William is trying so hard for Buffy with his present and good on Joyce for helping. A claim? Wow, didn’t see that cumming, er, did I just type that? LOL. This line was awesome: “Lady’s choice,” he purred. “How do you want it an’ where?” NICE!!! The sex and claim was hot but you went and broke MY heart this time, you evil author you. This is truly a wonderful plot and very brilliantly planned out. Remind me to consult you when I go to write my vamp fic, I mean seriously.
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 01:41 pm
Title: Part 3. The Simple Life
YUM, Spike curls, curls of Spike, GAH! OMG, he’s flirting with her, how adorable and how irresistible, even if Buffy doubts him. And the ‘almost slip up’ with the word love, niiiiiiice. Wow, seems despite his memory loss, he’s set on courting her. I wonder though how wise he thinks that is considering when he gets his memories back and all. Buffy knows it and it’s heartbreaking for her to be torn between accepting William’s fawning over her and fighting her attraction. This line right here would have broke me for sure... “All I want is a few stolen moments of your time” And then he cop’d a feel? That is just too much, I was really laughing over that one. Maybe that arm was just possessed. I should slay it, she thought with a mental giggle. Rofl! Ok-wow, I so didn’t see it coming when William picked up on that ‘strange new smell’. How on earth is the gentleman in him going to react the that?!?! My first thought about William is that he’s being awfully bold and sort of out of character for a Victorian guy, but it’s your story and I can tell that’s the way you wanted it – and of course I don’t mind. The intimate scene was great, but oh booooooy, when Spike came back I thought, hmmmm, was Spike just playing her the whole time? Which would explain William’s forwardness. And what about Tara’s reading of his aura? Okay... rushes off to read the next chapter and pray Spike doesn’t get dusted, giggles. A lovely chapter sweety. Smooches to you my friend.
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:59 am
Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
Oh wow. I like this premise a lot. Spike with amnesia thinking he’s William. It’ll be comical when he finds out ‘what’ he is and just how he ‘acts’ these days. Not to mention I can hardly wait to see if Buffy falls for ‘William’. I mean, who wouldn’t? A Victorian gentleman complete with the shy thing? YUM! Xander was funny: “Failing to see the problem here.” And Buffy with the poop in their stockings, frickin hilarious. Wow, that was somewhat heart breaking to read William’s reaction to Buffy telling him about Spike. I think him holding her hand was rather touching and sweet, too. Seems William’s power of perception as to what feelings he has for Buffy is at least clear, giggles. Ok, so I’m totally swooning over his compliment to her beauty and such a shocking tender kiss for her to recieve. Yup, seems I’m right... Buffy is going to have a hell of a time NOT falling for him. You’re writing is lovely darling. Very easy to read and the flow is smooth as silk.
Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:58 am
Title: Part 1. Things Go Wonky
OMG, that was funny imagery, Spike dressed as a woman and what he said? - my uptight ass - ROFL. And I’m all with the awwwwwww, a little William coming out with a puppy as an apology. Giggles about Buffy using the ‘bloody hell’ comment. This was a good chapter sweety, I’m off to read the next.
Reviewer: Taylor
Anonymous
Date: 01/27/2007 - 11:49 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Loved the fic!!!!
Author's Response: thank you ^.^
Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed
Date: 01/02/2006 - 07:48 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Very lovely story! Billy was just adorable, very nice touch! =)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Deyvra
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2005 - 11:09 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Great ending! I felt like we got a story with three Spike's for the price of one. I loved this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you should then start reading Playing House... its eventually going to have three spikes too... lol
Reviewer: Deyvra
Anonymous
Date: 12/28/2005 - 10:45 am
Title: Part 4. Rock the Halls
Nice chapter! Fun and sexy.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Deyvra
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2005 - 12:20 pm
Title: Part 3. The Simple Life
Hot chapter! And very sweet with the date.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Deyvra
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2005 - 10:24 am
Title: Part 2. A Helping Hand
Nice chapter! The Scoobies can be so mean at times,huh. Good characterization of them as well as Joyce and Dawn.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Deyvra
Anonymous
Date: 12/27/2005 - 08:08 am
Title: Part 1. Things Go Wonky
Great first chapter! Love the funny of Spike wearing Buffy's clothes. Very cute description of the puppy,too.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Jessica
Anonymous
Date: 12/26/2005 - 02:34 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
This was a cute little fic. I enjoyed it. Happy holidays.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 12/26/2005 - 02:21 am
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Thanks for the fun holiday read.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Thianna Signed
Date: 12/25/2005 - 11:50 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Yay... good ending. I didn't think it was too fluffy..just right. ^_^
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Greenhair00 Signed
Date: 12/25/2005 - 10:22 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
overall, good job! like i said before, not big on the claim stories, but i still liked this one! happy holidays!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/25/2005 - 01:20 pm
Title: Part 5. Here's Your Sign
Awe - in a way Buffy did chase Spike to get him back - and she was successful :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/25/2005 - 01:05 pm
Title: Part 4. Rock the Halls
*sigh* Spike is back.. but he was able to make an ass of him again, hurting Buffy. Always talking without thinking. *reading on* Oh my.. now he claimed her (promising before he wouldn't leave her an now he is running away. I hope Buffy will catch him.
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 12/25/2005 - 12:31 pm
Title: Part 3. The Simple Life
Mmmm - domestic William :) *gg* Loved the plan William worked out with Dawn's and Joyce's help. It worked! ;-) Oh! And Buffy brought Spike back as it seems!
Author's Response: thank you!
