Reviewer: ImNobody
Anonymous
Date: 10/22/2015 - 08:05 pm
Title: Confessions of a slayer.
This is a lot of fun so far. I find a Buffy who persists with Riley after being introduced to the joys of Spike at least as annoying as the real Buffy, but then I trace the origin of my distaste for canon Buffy to her giddy look of admiration when Riley showed off the experimentation pit at the heart of the Initiative.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/03/2012 - 10:47 pm
Title: Forever yours.
This is a great story; I really,really liked it.
It does need some moreediting,as there are a number of mistakes,including your/you're errors,spelling problems (e.g. should be "cocoa," not coco),vocab problems (interment is used when intimate is the correct word),continuity errors (Spike's mom is said to be Annabel at one spot,and Annabelle in another, and they decide on the name Dawn ahead of time,several chapters before her birth,but then come up with the name anew after her birth),among other errors,large and small.
So,with good editing,this fic could be truly great,as thee plot is very enjoyable!
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/2011 - 12:35 am
Title: Forever yours.
I absolutely loved this story! The ending with Buffy and Spike was so sweet. I'm going to miss this story. :(
On the bright side, I can look forward to your WIPs being updated or a new story coming out.
Reviewer: demona424 Signed
Date: 09/29/2011 - 05:19 pm
Title: Darkest before Dawn.
This chapter made me smile and totally brightened my day! Phew! She's finally out and protected. Ooh, that Travers, can we bring back to life just so we can smack him around. Does this mean this story is going to end. :-(