Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/30/2007 - 08:40 am
Title: Consider Me Gone
So it's truth time soon. Maybe Buffy will start with Willow after she found out what she waned from her.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 09/29/2007 - 06:58 am
Title: Consider Me Gone
Oh that was good, I wonder what Willow wants to talk about.
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 09/04/2007 - 06:56 am
Title: Chapter 4: Aiming for the Bed
Interesting concept and I'm admittedly curious as to why the Council wants Buffy & Dawn and why they should spring for a 3rd person to make the trip without specifying who. Glad to see Buffy accepting Spike as a 'boyfriend' now she knows Dawn knows about them and accepts him, although I'd prefer them not to keep it a secret, I always enjoy seeing Xander's head explode when he finds out. You might want to get someone to look at your grammar though, your tenses sometimes go a bit wonky.
Author's Response: Sorry about that...I believe it's only in this latest chapter that my tenses went Wonky as you put it... Back when I originally wrote it, I wasn't paying attention of which tense I was really writing in & therefore so called Wonkyness ensued! I tried to fix what I could without completely re-writing the chapter & I thought I got most of it, but apparently not enough. :( Again, I apologize!! I believe the rest of my upcoming chapters are in the right (or at least SAME) tense. I'm currently waiting on some time to myself to update! Hopefully you'll stick with me & the story!
Thanks for your review! & Don't hesitate to continue your helpful criticism! It's appreciated!
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 09/03/2007 - 07:53 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Aiming for the Bed
Very sweet
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 09/03/2007 - 01:01 pm
Title: Chapter 4: Aiming for the Bed
Mmmh it really looks like as if somebody sent some extra vamps to fight their way. Getting locks was a good idea :)
Till next time (chapter)!
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 08/02/2007 - 11:14 pm
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
Very cute, it is a shame season six did not go this way
Reviewer: SpikesBabyAngel
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/2007 - 10:45 pm
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
hm. loving it so far. can i plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz see some more :D
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/31/2007 - 12:58 pm
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
Hehe, typical siblings :)
Giles didn't tell for whom the third airline tickets was; so Buffy can decide? Or there's a third letter.
Caught, huh? So the secrets is out but the third ticket isn't claimed yet. Both Buffy and Spike were quick confessing to Dawn.
~ *check* Ah you changed your pen name. The story wasn't finished there at BSC as it looks like (BSC is still wonky) but I hope you'll post all chapters here and write more :)
Author's Response: I intend to post as many chapters on here as are done so far, as well as the future chapters I have in process. I FINALLY went through all my random notes for all my stories & should be on my way to writing more for this one in the VERY near future!
Hope you'll stick with me!!!
Reviewer: TammyAsh666
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 10:08 am
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
I think I remember reading this before in the other BS Central. Was it ever finished?
Author's Response: Yeah I think it was or might still be over on BS Central. No, still haven't finished it, although I did go though all the random notes I have for all my stories & I should be well on my way to writing further in the near future!
Hope that you'll stick with me!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 08:29 am
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
I like this a lot , you write very well and I like the fact that Buffy is'nt playing denial girl as far as Spike goes . Very humorous chapter too, I loved how they reacted when Dawn caught them .
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 07/30/2007 - 08:04 am
Title: Chapters 1 - 3
Did you start this before, cause I remember reading it before.
Author's Response: I had it up on BS central & I believe on ff.net as well, but Bs central has gone wonky & ff.net isn't so popular anymore, so I decided to post on here to gain some more & new readers.
