Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/01/2013 - 11:35 am
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Pure fuffiness, silly real Buffy was never smart enough to admit these things to herself. But I do love this!
Author's Response: Thank you. Wow, this makes me nostalgic :)
Reviewer: shana
Anonymous
Date: 10/12/2009 - 09:22 pm
Title: Chapter Five and Six
great story, loved it. one of the best i've read!!
Author's Response: oh wow, thankyou. I'm so glad that you liked it x
Reviewer: spuffy chick
Anonymous
Date: 10/10/2009 - 12:39 am
Title: Chapter Five and Six
that was HOT and sweet! loved it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it x
Reviewer: astrodex
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/2009 - 08:43 am
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
That may be the hottest thing I've read in a long time.
Author's Response: Oh wow. Thanks for the compliment! glad you liked it x
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/2009 - 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Awesome! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, Glad you enjoyed! x
Reviewer: Kristy B
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/2009 - 02:21 am
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Wow! For a first timer you write like a pro! It was engaging, sweet, sexy and very well written. I can tell you have a great future in the Spuffy verse!
Author's Response: Ooh thankyou, I'm so glad you liked it. fingers crossed my muse will come out to play again! x
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/07/2009 - 03:53 pm
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Mmmh Spuffy lovin' :)
I liked it; well done for your first story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked it x
Reviewer: Eddam
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/2009 - 06:18 am
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Awww! It was just sappy enough! You should definetely write more, this was awesome! I'll be looking for more of your fics in the future.
(And the smut is still really, really hot! :p)
Author's Response: Hehe. Thanks, I guess Spike brings out my inner sap! We all know the big bad's a big softie underneath x
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 10/07/2009 - 03:14 am
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Well done. Be proud of yourself. Thanks for sharing. :)
Author's Response: Awww, thankyou. You've cheered me up on an otherwise very dull morning x
Reviewer: Niori
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2009 - 11:08 pm
Title: Chapter Five and Six
This was great. A bit sappy yeah, but it just added to the charm!
Author's Response: lol. Thankyou for reviewing x
Reviewer: sanityfair Signed
Date: 10/06/2009 - 08:49 pm
Title: Chapter Five and Six
Just found this story. I have to tell you I've the day from hell and your little story just made it a little brighter. Thanks so much for sharing! I enjoyed every delicious word!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad that I could help, though a naked Spike would make any day a little brighter! x
Reviewer: Amber
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2009 - 08:06 pm
Title: Chapter Three and Chapter Four
WOW!!!!! Awesome, Amazing, Wonderful, Brilliant, I LOVE it!!!!! Not to mention Very, VERY Hot too!! Plus your doing an Awesome job writing the Spuffy characters and relationship, I definitely Can't Wait to read more!!!!! :) So please keep up the Amazing work, and Thanks for sharing!!!! Take Care, Amber :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, You've made my day, thankyou thats always nice to hear! I should get that printed on a mug for when I need a bit of inspiration! lol x
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2009 - 07:52 pm
Title: Chapter Three and Chapter Four
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thankyou x
Reviewer: Eddam
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2009 - 06:40 pm
Title: Chapter Three and Chapter Four
This is one of the better 'Something blue'-stories I've ever read, and believe me, I've read a lot of them. I can't believe this is your first fic! Coulour me impressed! Update soon, this is really, really good!
(Btw, did I mention the smut was really hot? :p)
Author's Response: Awww. You're my new favourite person! lol
Thanks for the comments, I hope you like the rest x
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/06/2009 - 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter Three and Chapter Four
Oh Spike wants their relationship out in the open? Sounds better than hiding. :)
Hot :))
And it has definitely its advantages when your lover doesn't need to breathe. *gg*
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: lol. who needs oxygen huh?!
Hope you enjoy the rest x
Reviewer: RRaineTerra
Anonymous
Date: 10/06/2009 - 02:14 am
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
Good start, nice and solid. Visually looks like a story, though the '---' and '***' are a bit distracting. Slows the flow a bit. Whilst a bit more of a gap between the chapters, an extra line or two only, to give more a break to show the end of one chapter and the begining of the next. Otherwise don't touch the spacing.
Looking forward to the rest. a good read.
RR
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, hope you like the rest x
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/05/2009 - 04:56 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
Divider is what another author called it. I didn't know another name.
I mean the **********************************************************
:)
Here on TSR most LJ tags work too (regarding the italic). You can find a tutorial here by example.
Will snag the spuffy kisses icons then when it's allowed. :)
Author's Response: Ooh thanks. looks like I've got some homework! x
Author's Response: Ooh thanks. looks like I've got some homework! x
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/05/2009 - 01:58 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
I saw this last night; I won't read on LJ then when I'm here already The font is bigger anyway. BTW - could you make the divider a little smaller / shorter for the next chapters? It forces me to scroll when I want to read.
(Love your LJ icons BTW. Did you make them and if yes, are they snaggable?)
But now to the story:
Ah it's after Willow's 'Will be done' spell. And I can only admire Buffy's ability to fill in the blanks. :D
Sounds as if Buffy jinxed it...now her blouse is torn.
Spuffywise it's good to see that Spike that Spike hasn't forgotten the spell (or better: Buffy) either; that saved her life.
Well done (especially for your first story). Hope you'll write more after this one.
Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. First off - LJ icons totally snaggable, some gifs I made, others were up for grabs elsewhere. I'll be posting thr rest of this fic in the next couple days so hope you enjoy it.
ps. I'm a complete newbie when it comes to posting on sites so can you explain the dividers bit? I was just impressed to work out how get it in italics! lol x
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2009 - 12:47 am
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
Great start. I like it. :)
Author's Response: Thankyou, hope you like the rest x
Reviewer: Niori
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2009 - 12:16 am
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
This is a great start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thanks, will get the rest posted very soon x
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
And young Prince has saved fair Maiden..
Now for the porn .. please..
enjoyed.
Author's Response: Don't worry. Our knight in black leather will be disrobing very soon! Thanks for reviewing x
Reviewer: Jo
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
I really liked this chapter and definitely want to follow how things go from here and what happens next. Buffy's thoughts of Spike in the beginning might have lasted too long, especially as she was supposed to be in the middle of a fight where she was wounded. Spike's voice in his own thoughts and outlook was very well done. Considering this is your first fic, I was surprised at how great the make-out and build up was-- so many new authors are stumbling in those types of scenes or overdo the details or melodramatic thoughts, but you pulled me right in to berlieving what was happening between them, moving forward smoothly.
Great job!
Author's Response: Oh thankyou, I'm glad you're enjoying it x
Reviewer: Sibb
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 06:40 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
Oh....nice beginning! I look forward to seeing more. This is well-written and hard to believe that this is your first fic.
Author's Response: wow, thankyou. I'll be posting the rest really soon x
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter One and Chapter Two
Loving this! More please!
Author's Response: Thanks, more on the way x
