Reviewer: Photographynut Signed
Date: 07/06/2011 - 07:06 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Just found your fic and already love it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/05/2011 - 06:26 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Buffy likes to tease :)
Till next part.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2011 - 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 5
I like the premise of this story, but there are numerous basic grammatical mistakes that make it difficult to read. I'm not trying to be rude, but I just wanted to let you know. You should look for a beta. He/she could help you with that. Or at the very least be a second pair of eyes.
Author's Response: it's not rude at all, and thank you for the suggestion, I'll definitely ask around, and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2011 - 04:41 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/03/2011 - 08:01 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Good that's neat, Spike staying next door.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/03/2011 - 06:29 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Oh more of this story - good to see :)
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/2011 - 02:15 am
Title: Chapter 4
=D
Reviewer: Anna
Anonymous
Date: 07/01/2011 - 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed
Date: 08/24/2010 - 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 2
good thing they changed the bet :D and either way...they are going on a date :D
can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/15/2010 - 03:21 pm
Title: Chapter 2
I see the banner already. :)
Heh what a list Buffy made, some arguments were really important. ;)
Enjoyed the update.
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/15/2010 - 11:36 am
Title: Chapter 2
Cute chappie. The banners are really nice. Only one thing, at the beginning you said Angel was on the team, but his pic isn't there. Gunn's pic is, but wasn't in the line-up. Sorry to point this out, just a little confusion. Otherwise looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you one for pointing out the mistake (Gunn was originally going to be a character 'Ballistic' and Angel, well I just forgot lol) I'll fix it as soon as I can, and for the review, I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/15/2010 - 11:29 am
Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. I like the brashness of Buffy.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: KTC10 Signed
Date: 08/14/2010 - 01:03 am
Title: Chapter 2
I love the friends all howling in reaction to the kiss! This was a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you lol I'm glad you're still enjoying!!!
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/13/2010 - 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Very hot, very hot indeed. Did I mention HOT? Look forward to practice time. HEE HEE. Gee, I wonder what fine print those contracts will have? Thanks for the update. Liked the banner, glad the Wesley one wasn't poncey!!
Author's Response: Lol thank you! I think Wes is hot, so long as he's later Wesley and not tongue in Cordy's throat Wesley lol ;)
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 08/13/2010 - 03:30 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Great second chapter! Looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much
:)
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/13/2010 - 09:47 am
Title: Chapter 1
This is gonna be a cool story. I really like everything about it. The nicknames you gave everyone was a great touch. The banner is to die for. Maybe there will be one with Spike I mean the guys on it. LOL. Oh and shit brown eyes-nice touch. Really liked the comparison. The whole Spike oozing sex at first sight was really good too. Glad he kicked some shit brown eyed ass too. Good for him. Now, will Buffy's team and Spike's be going up against eachother? I'm thinking so. Love ur story girl. Always something different and something great. Much smoochies.
Author's Response: LOL I love your reviews, thank you so much! Coming up with their 'track names' was my fave part really, I tried really hard to make them suiting to the person (none perhaps as good as Screech - Dawn's screaming scenes always left me half-deaf for a few days after watching) Thanks about the banner, I know it's nothing spectacular but trying to find all white background pictures of them was uber hard so I really appreciate you noticed it :) The guys banner will be posted next week with the second chappy.
Thank you so much for the last line - that just made my day - you really are too sweet.
xx
L.
Reviewer: IT
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 10:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning - looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: thank you :)
Reviewer: Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 06:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1
You have only seven guys and eight girls how will that match up. But very intrigued.
Author's Response: Ah, but there's someone in Sunnydale who will step up to the plate wahahaha. and thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/10/2010 - 02:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Oh you're really busy writing. :D
I definitely love the start; looking forward to where it will lead.
Reviewer: KTC10 Signed
Date: 08/10/2010 - 01:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Love this idea! Although in my league, men and women's teams aren't allowed to compete against each other, it might be different in other areas. I can totally imagine Buffy and Spike as totally BA jammers. I love the names too! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I admittedly don't know much about it - i assumed men vs women would be something not allowed but for the sake of the story I decided it was ok lol. If you have any advice about Roller Derby i would love to hear it, and i think it's awesome that you play!!!
Reviewer: TJ
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 11:04 am
Title: Chapter 1
A roller story. Love it. Please do go on.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 10:22 am
Title: Chapter 1
Go Team Spike! Team Spike!
Author's Response: LOL
awesome, thanks!
Reviewer: lunna798
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 09:17 am
Title: Chapter 1
I love this. And your nicknames are so spot on!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!
I actually took some time trying to make them fitting and I'm happy someone mentioned it (ego boost lol)
Reviewer: Nana
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2010 - 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 1
I like the humor and cutting remarks you have added to their characters. I also like the fact you have brought him in as a gentleman and her as a young lady even though they are in a hard sport like roller derby.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, I figured I'd keep the violence and tempers in the rink for this fic lol, that is of course unless someone pissed them off outside of it - which is bound to happen ;)
Reviewer: spike4buffy Signed
Date: 08/10/2010 - 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 1
Wow I am really interested in this story. Loved the first chapter and am very excited to follow this story. Can't wait go see the competition between Buffy & Spike ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
It excites me and propels me to write when others are excited too :)
