Reviewer: diebirchen
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2014 - 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter 22 A Sort of Betrayal
Awwwwww! So well-written.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/06/2012 - 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 22 A Sort of Betrayal
Getting help from Kendra? Hope she will be willing.
Uh-huh.... Joyce and Billy are really in trouble now.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 04/23/2012 - 07:39 am
Title: Chapter 22 A Sort of Betrayal
Been waiting patiently for this update..
Joyce and Billy.. surrounded it seems.. Little Joyce to take the First Slayers place or ?
Now for Kendra?
enjoyed..
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/12/2012 - 07:31 pm
Title: Chapter 21 Charks
I'm glad Spike was there in time; but they do have to talk about it. *sigh*
Author's Response: Absolutely. Thank you so much for reviewing. I am off on holiday until March 26th but will update when I get back. Still revising next chapter.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/12/2012 - 07:28 pm
Title: Chapter 20 The Gift
Uh-huh.... almost a clever plan of Buffy - if she wouldn't have to be killed for it.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/12/2012 - 07:23 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Good to see this one updated :)
Reviewer: tenebrae Signed
Date: 03/04/2012 - 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 21 Charks
So glad you're updating this one.
Author's Response: I'm ashamed of how long it's taken me, but had 2 eye operations so writing severely curtailed. But all well now so back to work with a vengeance!
Reviewer: sss
Anonymous
Date: 02/13/2012 - 04:01 pm
Title: Chapter 20 The Gift
Original, well written story. please continue
Author's Response: Thank you. Hope to update very soon.
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 01/26/2012 - 02:05 pm
Title: Chapter 20 The Gift
So much miscommunication and so much pain. Why can't these people TALK HONESTLY about their feelings? Talk about the generation gap! I missed this story, but it's been so long, I had to go back to the beginning so I could remember all the details. Now I'm all on tenterhooks again, waiting for the next instalment...
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, updating as soon as I have another chapter of Santa Claws posted! Juggling the two stories together.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2012 - 09:15 am
Title: Chapter 20 The Gift
Buffy is on that Death Trip to save her grandkids.. didn't think of that..
enjoying..
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2012 - 07:09 pm
Title: Chapter 19
Thank for updating this fic.. one of my favorites.
Hope the eye surgeries are getting things back to normal..
enjoyed..
Author's Response: So glad someone is still reading! And yes, everything is now working fine and I am back to writing. Decisions as to which story to update first!
Reviewer: time of change
Anonymous
Date: 11/02/2008 - 07:23 pm
Title: Chp 18 Not Playing Games
Wowowow. I missed a few chapters of this. The relationship between Buffy and Shanny rings so true, and is so painful. And poor Joyce...I ache for her.
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2008 - 02:56 pm
Title: Chp 18 Not Playing Games
Uh oh, an angry, unhappy Joyce can only lead to badness. Can't wait to find out how things turn out. And with all the tension going on it's feels like a major family blow-up is in the offing, should be interesting if it does happen. Great chapter as always!
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2008 - 07:40 pm
Title: Chp 18 Not Playing Games
Willow ... ??
And Mama are trying to protect and daughter's think the worst..
Would love for you to just work on this fic... my favorite
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/30/2008 - 06:50 pm
Title: Chp 18 Not Playing Games
Should there be a banner BTW? The link is wrong; see? A *p* is missing from the link: http://pics...
Such heart ache... like mother, like child. Both Shanny and Joyce feel neglected.
And what a cliffhanger to end it; I hope it will be okay. Joyce doesn't think her decisions through till the end. ~ Till then!
Reviewer: kw
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/2008 - 10:49 pm
Title: Chp 17
good update
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/23/2008 - 01:36 pm
Title: Chp 17
Yeah, Buffy and Spike are not the main characters. So sadly you can't post here (I think) even though the story has both of them in it. Them not being involved yet isn't a problem. Otherwise there shouldn't be any xx/other stories here.
Glad to see an update on this one. :-D
Seems Joyce is coming more after Spike indeed. Just as insecure as Spike ("the others like Billy more").
So still no solution...
If nothing helps, maybe Buffy should trust the first Slayer.
~ Till next part, sooner or later.
Author's Response: Yes, for all her powers, Joyce has all the insecurities of her mother and grandfather! Not an easy combination for a young witch!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 07/23/2008 - 09:21 am
Title: Chp 17
I find it very interesting that Joyce can see the First Slayer too, makes me wonder if she can see all the other girls like Buffy can.
And this musing of Spike's... He loved them both, but knew neither understood the other. Buffy loved Shannon with all her heart and soul, that he knew was true. Did Shanny love her mother? He realised he didn’t have any idea. Did she love him?... pretty much summed up their family problems in a nutshell. I hope this family can eventually work things out. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed review. Much appreciated. Yes, this is a family in turmoil and now they are visible to Buffy and Spike, are the twins visible to the Slayers?
Reviewer: Francine
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2008 - 06:17 pm
Title: Chp 17
Well, at least the twins and Angel are visible and inside the house again. If I were Billy or Joyce I'd be a little creeped out by Angel's attention to Billy. He's a little bit of a jackass for only wanting to get to know Billy better, poor Joyce. Now I have to wonder what the slayers want with Shanny (was her name changed from Shanshu to Shannon?).
Author's Response: I think adults, even vampires, can fall into the trap of liking one child more than another. Angel's problem is that Billy looks so like Darla, he can't see any further. And they named her Shanny because she arrived because of the Shanshu!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/23/2008 - 04:17 pm
Title: Chp 16 Not Perfect
Ah no, Buffy didn't think wrong, they are in love. It's just that Spike is very insecure.
Maybe Spike will feel more sure about it now. Both of them bearing their past with them.
Seems as if the First Slayer made an appearance now, hopefully helping to get the kids back.
Reviewer: kq
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 08:23 pm
Title: Chp 16 Not Perfect
good chapter, was that the first slayer at the end?
Reviewer: Devin
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 06:48 pm
Title: Chp 16 Not Perfect
Wow, there she is!!! :) Loved the chapter and everyone's revelations. Especially loved the little window into Buffy and Spike's pre-married life. :) Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2008 - 04:25 am
Title: Chp 16 Not Perfect
Very powerful Spuffy scene, the dialogue and the interaction between the characters was wonderful. I especially enjoyed when Spike and Buffy reminisced about the past, the ring of hair was such a sweet gesture. And it's seems like a lightbulb went on over Shanny's head, loved reading her musings. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 01/21/2008 - 05:18 pm
Title: Chp 16 Not Perfect
Need to go back and reread.. Drusilla?
Hopefully, not Joyce..
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 - 01:06 pm
Title: Chp 15 One to go
Shanny is indeed used to it, huh? Thinking that she is the source of Buffy's anger but she's wrong...
Angel is underestimating his grandchildren, especially Billy even if he had a feeling someone was walking in his mind. Because he thinks it can't be it can't be, mmmh? Oh Shanny won't be happy if Angel tells the children the truth before she can. And it sounds as if Angel will do that.
*pets Spike* There has to happen more before Spike looses his Buffy even if he fears the worst.
~ Till next part :)
Author's Response: thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
