Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 06/10/2010 - 02:17 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Another cool story. Liked the whole Buffy Liz Spike William deception. Totally cool
Reviewer: Shardallinee
Anonymous
Date: 04/01/2010 - 04:49 am
Title: Chapter 9
by the end of this chapter i was grinning like crazy :D amazing job! i loved it how things went throughout the whole story! :D the whole Hank being police officer that pulled him up was hillarious :D
great job!
Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 02/22/2010 - 02:24 pm
Title: Chapter 9
haha that was a good read. luved it.
Reviewer: Kiera Thornton Signed
Date: 01/09/2010 - 04:14 am
Title: Chapter 9
Awww! This was totally one of the cutest things I've ever read. :D Loved it!
Reviewer: Adrianna
Anonymous
Date: 12/08/2009 - 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 9
Nice ending to a good story
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: callmekitten
Anonymous
Date: 12/01/2009 - 06:22 am
Title: Chapter 9
sorry it has taken me so long to read and review, but I really like what you did at the end. RL has thrown me for a loop lately and am slowly crawling back.
I know you have several new stories and I am planning on getting to them soon too... even writing a bit of mine *wink* keep up the good work, and I hope school isnt still kickin' your ass :P
Author's Response: Heehee, its all good, hon! Glad you enjoyed =D I totally get the whole RL thing, sometimes it gets so budy, you don't know what to do with yourself lol. School has ben... eh. lol I'm doing alright there and I'm getting the hang of it again, so it's not kicking my ass anymore lol. I hope to see more of BSNM soon!! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kristy B
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2009 - 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 9
Sexy and straight to the point, just the way I likes 'em!! Another awesome story and VERY special props to your banner. That picture of Spike is absolutely gorgeous! Sigh.. makes my heart all aflutter!
Author's Response: Heee, glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reviewing! lol about the banner. I looove that pic of him too, is why I used it =P Makes my heart go pitter-pat too lol.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2009 - 07:04 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Really loved this! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! You're very welcome for sharing. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: xaphania Signed
Date: 10/30/2009 - 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 9
Hehe, Hank being the cop worked out well, in the end :D I loved this ending, and the whole fic. Good job and yay for finishing! *hugs*
Author's Response: lol thanks Amy, your idea worked out well. I'm so glad you liked the fic! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2009 - 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 9
so glad they finally found each other. Lovely story. Well played case of mistaken identity. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: PaganBaby
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2009 - 02:47 am
Title: Chapter 9
lol Omg I thought William was dead when he started telling Hank about meeting Buffy at the party! heehee Thank goodness he didn't get too detailed about what he and she did that night!
But everything turned out the way it should have. Great story and a lovely, satisfying ending that had me smiling :D Don't get much better than that :)
And I gotta say, I'm in love with that banner lol *hugs & smoochies & lurve*
Author's Response: lol! I was going to have a big thing about Hank and William, but I decided to keep it like it is. I'm glad you enjoyed it, hon, especially the ending. I always get worried about having a good ending, so I'm glad it worked out. Thanks so much for the review and compliments on the banner! *hugs and smoochies and lots of lurve*
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 10/30/2009 - 12:50 am
Title: Chapter 9
Aww...what a sweet ending. I loved that they're together and happy. They both apologized and everything is fine between them now. LOL ...I love Hank the cop pulling Spike over.
Loved it Chan! *squishes*
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! lol The idea about Hank being the cop was great, xaph was awesome in prompting it. Thanks so much for reviewing! *hugs*
Reviewer: le
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2009 - 12:34 am
Title: Chapter 9
coolness!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 10/29/2009 - 09:58 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Your story made me smile! I've been having a really crappy week and this chapter was a nice pick me up. I love satisfying endings. Would have loved for you to draw it out for another smutty chapter, but I love love all the same for making William's day. Maybe when you have time you'll gift us with an epilogue with spuffy smut (hopes).
Author's Response: I'm glad I made you smile =D I hope the next week is better for you! I'm also glad it was satisfying. I was worried that I didn't get it right, but then xaph told me it was good and then I thought it was good, so I posted. I was going to draw it out more, but it was only supposed to be a 4 chapter fic to begin with lol. I like your idea of a smutty oneshot epilogue thing... so maybe one day =P I'm so glad you liked and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sanityfair
Anonymous
Date: 10/29/2009 - 08:04 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for another lovely little story, sweetie. Hope things are going well for you in school. Don't be a stranger. Please write more.
Author's Response: You're very welcome! I love writing. Now that I'm more busy with RL, the updates will be less frequent, but I'll get the fic done. Things are going awesome in school actually! Taking a Writer's craft course which is awesome =D And I won't be a stranger, I still have loads of stories to tell =P Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/29/2009 - 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Hope you feel better now. :) And good to see an update. Even if it means that the story ended now. I didn't expect Buffy to be the one that went to William saying that she was sorry when she still must have thought that he'd been with Faith. Yet I'm glad she did otherwise they wouldn't be together now.
Unexpected but good twist with Hank being a police officer.
Author's Response: Thanks Cordy. Not feel 100%, but I think I will be all better tomorrow or the next day. I'm glad you enjoyed the end. I was going to redo it, but decided that I liked it as is. LOL I laughed so hard when xaph thought of Hank being the cop that pulled him over. I knew I was gonna get him pulled over for speeding, but Hank as the cop was like.. the cherry. I might revisit these two, because I had troubles ending it lol. I wanted to drag it out further, but still felt this was the ending. So... maybe one day =P Thanks for commenting all the way through another of my fics! You're wicked!
Reviewer: PaganBaby
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2009 - 01:19 am
Title: Chapter 8
Faith surprised me by not being a total hose beast! lol She was very cool about William's feelings for Buffy :D
And - oh snap! - Cordy torched Buffy's ass with that parting comment :P Oh the angst lol I don't mind it though, I'm curious to see how this gets resolved :)
*hugggles and smooches*
Author's Response: lol Yeah, I wanted Faith to do that random insightful/wise thing she does like on the show lol. But hey, even I know that Faith wouldn't want to come in second, especially to Buffy =P Oh, haha, yeah Cordy did get all grr on her. There was a line I was going to have in there, but I changed it because it was a bit too mean. The angst is going to get cleared up though lol, more coming soon, prolly tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!! *hugs and squishes*
Reviewer: PaganBaby
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2009 - 12:29 am
Title: Chapter 7
Darn it! I can understand William wanting to get validation, to know that some women would still want him even if Buffy doesn't, but Grrr! lol Can't wait to see how Buffy handles this.
And I love when 'Jizz In My Pants' is used in a story :P Gave me a big giggle! hehehe
Great chapter, babe! *smoochies & hugs*
Author's Response: lol I was going to use the Why Bunnies are Great song, but it wasn't as good as Jizz in my Pants lol. I have it as my ringtone too lol. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing! *smoochies and lurve*
Reviewer: guest
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 03:48 pm
Title: Chapter 8
I love Cordelia and Faith in this chapter. Faith making Spike understand why Buffy might have said what she did. Still wasn't cool but now he understands. Cordelia calling Buffy a coward was great. I agree with her. Buffy is running away rather then talking to William. Sounds like Buffy alright. LOL
Author's Response: Yep, Cordy is great in this fic, I feel I have kept her characterization the same in each chapter. Faith was great too, I love how I wrote her. I'm glad you liked them both too. lol Yeah, it is a lot like what canon Buffy would do, lol. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sanityfair
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 08:51 am
Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the update, and I'm looking forward to the make up.
Author's Response: No problem, I love to update my fics. I love the reviews too, feedback is always nice. The last chapter is coming right up, hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/04/2009 - 12:46 am
Title: Chapter 8
That darn Buffy, really so ready to give up things. But I still gotta say that I love Faith in this. Girl really has a way with explaining things. Glad she was respectful of what William needed. Hope he can get to Buffy before she leaves. Know that they both want this. Once in a life time... Great update, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Well, its just like her though lol. Run when things get a little tought. And yeah, I sorta love how I wrote her in this fic, pulling the understanding card on him. I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing, and more is coming soon!
Reviewer: AMI Signed
Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:04 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Thank God Faith and Spike didn't do anything and that Faith wasn't a skank and opened Spike's eyes. Still lovin' Cordy. Buffy is running like usual. I want to know what she wrote in that letter.AGH!! Now Spike needs to find her and fight for her.
This is a great story, can't wait to see the conclusion.=)
Author's Response: lol yeah, Faith was the good girl in this chapter. A lot of reviewers are saying they liked her lol. Cordy is great, I love that I'm able to keep her personality constant through the fic. You will find out what happens next soon, in the middle of writing it right now. Thanks for reviewing hon! *hugs*
Reviewer: TammyAsh666
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2009 - 01:19 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Faith actually being helpful? Okay, I like her a little more now. I could smack William for leaving that message, though. If he didn't, Buffy would still be waiting for him. I'm glad he made the right decision, but now he needs to catch her before she leaves. I really hope he finds her note.
Author's Response: lol yeah, I like how I wrote her too. William was being a typical guy, but I agree. If I were Buffy, I would want to slap him too. Yeah, she would be, but imagine the confrontation that would come from William and Faith showing up. Damn, that would have been a good way to go too lol. I'm glad you are enjoying and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:45 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Aww I hope he gets to her before she leaves, and would like to find out what she wrote, looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: lol don't worry, you will find out soon! I gope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2009 - 12:39 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Uh Oh! Totally understand William's reasons for coming on to Faith but hope him and Buffy work things out with as little confusion as possible lol =D
Author's Response: lol little confusion as possible, coming up in the last chapter! Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reviewing!
