Reviewer: Kez
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2007 - 08:01 am
Title: Fourteen
wow this was amazing, loved every bit of it.
well done in writing - truly amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: nae
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2007 - 04:32 pm
Title: Fourteen
awww. that was a cute story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: GoldenUsagi Signed
Date: 11/18/2007 - 05:37 pm
Title: Fourteen
My hat off to you! I hardly ever ready post-series fics, because I hate wrapping my mind around season 7, but this one sucked me in. The SITs were not annoying, the original characters were wonderful, and Spike and Buffy were perfect. I also loved the fact that Spike shanshued, but got vamped again, because I'm selfish and love him as a vamp!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you broke your own rule to try it. And that you liked it. Yay! :)
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 11/18/2007 - 05:43 am
Title: Fourteen
loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it! loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you. :) I'm so glad you did!
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 11/17/2007 - 09:23 pm
Title: Fourteen
I loved this story from start to finish. You did such a great job with the new characters. They really added depth to the story and with the development of their relationship with the traditional players. Loved the writing and the premise. Outstanding job. Thanks ever so.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I"m glad you think I made it work. :)
Reviewer: k
Anonymous
Date: 11/16/2007 - 03:43 pm
Title: Fourteen
Good story - liked the kids and I didn't think you drew it out too much with the spuffy once spike was back. Sorry for Lucy, though :(
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked how it worked out. Yes, it was sad to lose Lucy, but somebody had to go. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed
Date: 11/15/2007 - 07:41 am
Title: Fourteen
I love how Buffy trusts Spike 100% now.
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: SinisterChic Signed
Date: 11/15/2007 - 07:21 am
Title: Thirteen
I'm glad you didn't show Angel anywhere in this story. Makes me not care when Angelus dusts.
Author's Response: LOL - so, that's the secret? Don't show Angel and nobody will care if he dies?
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 11:45 pm
Title: Fourteen
OMG that was one of the best fics i've read in a while. The whole premise was fantastic,fantastically written ,plot everything . Enjoyed it immensely.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 08:31 pm
Title: Prologue and Chapter One
I just started reading this , and i'm sobbing like a baby , OMG ,I'm going on an emotional roller coaster ride aren't I . I'm going to read the rest now ,but you mentioned in your A/N that this is finished on other sites ,can you tell me where so i can read the whole thing, pleeeaaassssse!
Author's Response: Hee! It's finished everywhere now. Including here. I have to go in and mark it "completed". I always forget to do that. I hope you enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/14/2007 - 12:30 pm
Title: Fourteen
14
They won :) Joy is indeed grown; Spike missed a lot. She'll have to learn what to say to him now. ;-) She'll take time to get used to have a dad that will complain about her boyfriends/dates *g*. But it would be truly helpful to be able to make fire when it comes to vamps.
Ah Joy and Will were watching Moonlight? Haven't seen this one yet. ~ Grown-up stuff? Good excuse :) Though I wonder too where Spike has been all this long years if he wasn't checking on Buffy what wasn't often.
Good to know that they are back together again, the whole Pratt Family. (I wonder if Buffy had Spike pronounce dead / he has a death certificate, is officially dead. Otherwise they are still married legally anyway.) But so much wasted time...
Enjoyed reading. It was good to know the story had a happy end (and that I could read all the chapters one after another); hard to read the first chapters without it (for me). ;-)
BTW: The story was marked as unfinished when I read the last part :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the steady reviews, CK. And for the reminder about the completed thing. I always forget that! :)
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 10:40 am
Title: Fourteen
Great story. I love happy endings.
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad I could please. :)
Reviewer: Opal
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 09:42 am
Title: Fourteen
Just read it from start to end, great storyline to read and definitely enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you did. :)
Reviewer: anon!
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 08:34 am
Title: Fourteen
Perfect! I especially loved the ending. It wasn't too angsty, and we didn't have to hate Buffy. She acted rashly, but with a reason - and as mentioned, Spike COULD have stopped by sooner. But, now it's all good, thankfully!
Bravo! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I"m glad you thought it worked. I never wanted anyone to hate Buffy. :)
Reviewer: gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 07:57 am
Title: Fourteen
Very enjoyable read. Your idea for this fic was very inventive. Hope you continue with more since your fics are always so entertaining.
Author's Response: Thank you. You're very kind. There will me more, no doubt. :)
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2007 - 07:49 am
Title: Fourteen
ahhh, lovely.
would love to see the occasional sequal. really enjoyed this story. thank you so very much for sharing it with us. it was a delight.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm pleased that you liked it. :)
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/2007 - 05:20 pm
Title: Thirteen
wonderful update, really enjoyed. many thanks for sharing this lovely story
Author's Response: Thanks. One more wrap-up chapter to go. Thanks for reading and commenting so often.
Reviewer: Aidan
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/2007 - 04:52 pm
Title: Thirteen
LOVE IT! Epi please?
Author's Response: No epi, but another chapter to follow tomorrow.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/13/2007 - 04:43 pm
Title: Thirteen
13
Oh no... sadly clever of Dru to get a hold on the children. Too late now... Sadly for Lucy too, she got turned. Maybe Joy will be save for a moment but Will... even if he was able to defend himself against Lucy, Dru will be another case; this will be harder. He can thank his father for getting away... too late for Dru to have regrets she tried to take Spike children from him.
Bad luck for Angelus... he underestimated Buffy (thought she killed Spike and how she would take to have her children hurt/killed). Now he had to face Spike.. bad luck indeed. Good to know that Joy is safe now too.
The Pratts make a good team (children included).
PS: There is no epilogue yet (Ch. 14) at last just in this moment. (Chapter title)
Author's Response: Thanks for the steady reviews, CK. And, you're right. There is no epilogue, but there is another chapter to wrap things up.
Reviewer: gotkona
Anonymous
Date: 11/13/2007 - 07:53 am
Title: Twelve
I am so enjoying this story. What a wonderful idea you had. Can't wait for more.d
Author's Response: More just posted. :)
Reviewer: moonchic1023
Anonymous
Date: 11/12/2007 - 07:45 pm
Title: Twelve
Just found this fic today and it's fantastic! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Another chapter tomorrow.
Reviewer: Samara
Anonymous
Date: 11/12/2007 - 06:34 pm
Title: Twelve
Wow, I am so glad you reposted this! You are one of my favorite authors, and as I am one of those readers who never seem to get around to other sites, I was really missing out. Please update quickly!
Author's Response: Well, I debated about it for a while (hence the gap between posts), but I know there are people who only read on here and I had no way of letting anyone know where else to find it, so I caved. LOL There will be another chapter tomorrow.
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 11/12/2007 - 05:58 pm
Title: Twelve
wonderful chapter, hope who ever has the children can run because they aree going to need to :)
loved the spuffy
more please
Author's Response: Another chapter tomorrow. :) Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 - 05:23 pm
Title: Twelve
12
Huh.. Buffy didn't say Spike was her husband, she stopped, instead calling him the father of her children. Why making the difference?
Uh-huh... problems with the air conditioners? Then Spike was right to be suspicious. There is something in the basement I fear. The Principal had better told the Pratts how he put it.
And they better should use Spike's car. Neat possession for a vamp :)
Seems as if Spike used the time he was away to forgive Buffy. Well he had time enough for that. Buffy can call herself lucky. Things are looking up spuffywise.~
Ouch that's bad. The children vanished? The Principal had indeed better told Buffy and Spike about the 'rats'. But now it's too late for regrets.
Author's Response: I think she stopped because she wasn't totally sure where she stood with him yet. Yep, some pretty big rats down in that basement...
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 - 03:10 pm
Title: Eleven
11
Spike doesn't like to stay behind after he was gone for so long... but at last they've found the house. Well Buffy and Faith can be glad that Spike went with them down to the basement. One of them would be dead if he hadn't. After that message I don't think Angelus and Dru will come back to the house. *shudder* That could have been Joy. It looks indeed bad for Lucy.
It looks like as if Buffy and Spike are getting along better now. Because of the pressure from the outside I guess, it makes them stick together for a 'bigger reason' (their children). Maybe it will work in the favor to bring them more together again. If Spike can forgive Buffy what she took from him (it's not as if they could have another child and what's gone is gone = the past of Will and Joy won't come back for Spike to see).
Buffy accused Spike that he didn't say were he went to? That's rich. Spike did indeed what Buffy wanted.
You might have waited around to see if I really wanted it Well that's a totally different case. But how should Spike have known? On the other hand if Buffy had talked about this with her friends Spike would have get to know (Xander). So she could have spared them some miserable years. Must hurt to think about that, huh?
Well the door was closed so even if Spike smelled Lucy that shouldn't be a danger. Except if she got turned and will be back at the school later...
Author's Response: It was all just Buffy being unreasonable. She knows exactly who's responsible for making them both miserable for the past seven years.
