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Very sweet; I enjoyed it very much. Although the writing could use polish (several spelling & grammar errors, as well as some awkward wording in places) you have a real talent for storytelling.

Good chapter, but some other grammar errors, including a few instancesof the word "then" (meaning "after" or "following"or "next") that should be "than" (indicating a comparison).

I loved this story!

i liked this, very much so. it was a great length - not too short, but not too long. i liked how the old characters were woven, and i think the name mahalia is beautiful. so glad angel and riley weren't able to come between william and buffy. and so glad xander and william survived. very sweet story!

I loved this story immensely. I was hooked from the first chapter and read all the way to the ending. What a fantastic journey! I am a huge fan of all historical romances, and this had a special appeal for me.
William's temper was very entertaining to watch, and his anger towards Buffy's disregard for his feelings back in the past helped fuel his ruthlessness as a military officer. Liked the relationships intertwined throughout - it was saddening to see Fred and Gunn's hopeless romance, but the introduction of Jesse and Mahalia were extremely loveable and refreshing. It angered me to know that she had stood him up several times in Boston, but since it was revealed that she was going to in the end, I was pacified. Xander coming clean about his part in destroying what they thought was thier last chance was forgiveable, given the explanation. He only had their best interests at heart. How was he to know Hank was just as bad as Riley.
To see Ethan as a redeeming character was original. I was scared once I saw Caleb was the other local minister that he would show up and be all fire, brimstone and downright evil. Glad to know he was just a passing mention.
Glad to see that William was going to face his punishment, it made me certain that he was a man of great character. Buffy was a strong and independent individual, especially for that part of history. The twins were a nice addition, too!

Author's Response: Thank you. I had almost forgotten this story...odd since it was one of my favorites to write! I am going to re-read it tonight and maybe that will give me a push to finish the long, overdue WIP's I've still got on the site. Thanks again Spufete

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. I just love it! I really like that it was played out in 1778, I've never read a time piece before but now you've got me hooked. But I guess that's a good thing seeing as a read your profile and you seem to have written quite a few of those. The only thing that sadens me is that I haven't seen you update in a while. I really hope you do cos you're an amazing writer and I would love to read anything that you put on this site.

I am liking it, I hope they get to be together soon

Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry, this Spuffy and of course...well, just keep reading. spuf

I'm enjoying reading this fic even if it has been posted a while now It makes a pleasant change to the norm.... I'll skip off to the next chapter now....

Author's Response: I've been so remiss in my responses. I'm sorry. Thank you and I hope you continue to read. spuf

Great story! Loved it... very cute touch at the end as well ;) xx

Lovely story. I'm no expert of the period of this piece but it felt realistic to me. Not really sure how strict the american high society was compared to european counterparts at the same time.

Loved the characters and that even though Finn was a bad man he died doing something good, gave a real nice depth to them that they had so many sides to them.

This was one of the best stories I have ever read. I loved the ending. Can't wait to read more from you! Keep up the great, great work!

I'm loving this fic SO much. I'm so frustrated because I have any free time from work to dedicate to reading, but thankfully tomorrow is sunday and monday is a holiday too here i Italy :D YEAH! I can't wait to see what'll happen next. *Back to reading before the bosses come back*