Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 01/22/2013 - 10:30 am
Title: Chapter 26
So sweet, so cute. I really like how, when angst cropped up, they would eventually talk it out. The foundation of a mature, successful relationship. The smut was really good, too, coulda used lots more!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 01/22/2013 - 05:02 am
Title: Chapter 10
Loving this story (love high school fics), but wanted to let you know that you've called William "Spike" in the 4th paragraph of this chapter, but have only given that nickname to the guitar so far (I think).
Author's Response: Thank you! I will fix that
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 03/30/2012 - 06:02 am
Title: Chapter 1
I'm stalking your stories! I'll be reading this one too so be prepared to look for my reviews. I normally don't read highschool fics where they are both teenagers, but with your writing style I can make an exception. Really liked this first chapter.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/27/2010 - 06:18 pm
Title: Chapter 26
YAY - they have Dru's thread on video. That was a great idea.
Awe, I'm glad that Buffy is staying. :D
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2010 - 11:32 pm
Title: Chapter 26
Glad she decided to stay. Even if it's not for him, it's silly to switch schools midway through your senior year. But it is also good that she did stay for him. Basically she made the right decision, boy or not. Love Dru getting her own, too. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2010 - 01:01 am
Title: Chapter 25
Love Lorne. Wonder what she'll decide. Either way, Somehow they will find away. Even if it's 10 years from now. Poor sweet William, I do wonder what he has planned. Looking forward to more. Update soon.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/16/2010 - 07:49 pm
Title: Chapter 25
Mmmh-hmmm so that's why Buffy had to stay that long with her father. A father that's not home often. She can have the same at home with her mom.
But she really seems to think about.
I wonder how she'll decide; the way she reacted I'm not sure.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/04/2010 - 01:31 am
Title: Chapter 24
So Angel is still trying to end their relationship? Doesn't really seem like he has much chance of that. And black mail video on Dru. I do wonder why she is staying with her dad, though. Surely there is something to be made of this visit. Looking forward to finding out what it is. Update soon.
Reviewer: Rose
Anonymous
Date: 03/03/2010 - 08:48 pm
Title: Chapter 24
Is Buffy pregnant? She's sleeping all the time and her jeans are tight on her stomach?
Author's Response: I don't usually respond to reviews, but I want to nip this in the bud I guess. No, she's not pregnant. Just coincidence. Thank you for commenting and reading :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/03/2010 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 23
I had the wrong window open, missed this.
Now I see why Buffy was still with her dad.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 03/03/2010 - 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 24
My guess is still not to trust Angel. Ah see.... Angel's reaction seems to show it's right not to trust him completely.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/27/2010 - 08:14 pm
Title: Chapter 22
Definitely a bump in the road. Got to wonder what the specifics are of Hank and Joyces relationship. And Dru is clearly plotting something, though what she knows and how she knows it remains to be seen. A good question indeed is what side is Angel really playing for. Hoping to see how these things play out. Update soon.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/26/2010 - 07:08 pm
Title: Chapter 22
When I've heard that Hank is a politician here I feared he would make difficulties. But it sounds now as if Buffy isn't Hank's daughter....
I hope that won't Buffy keep from going back soon.
~ Till next time!
Reviewer: BlueEyes
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2010 - 07:04 pm
Title: Chapter 22
This Joyce seems quite the bitch. I am having a hard time liking her although I admit there was times I was upset with her like the whole egg thing or the not understanding Buffy's desire to cheer and offered yearbook and most importantly the leave and don't come back moment. So I guess its realistic but I like the softer side of Joyce not this craziness I mean really from what you describe of George (gross).
Reviewer: scaryscouse
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2010 - 07:04 pm
Title: Chapter 22
ooh I have a feeling this visit is not so cut & dried as it first seemed, and is Spike going to be left on his own to the mercies of Dru--a nice twist to the story
Reviewer: Rose
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2010 - 01:10 pm
Title: Chapter 22
Looks like Joyce the self-absorbed Mommy isn't going to be getting what she wants anytime soon. No sympathy from me.
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2010 - 12:00 pm
Title: Chapter 22
seriously, her parents are ridiculous, and way more immature than the kids are. it's horrible of joyce to bring her there for this, she's not a very good mother at all. i think buffy should just disown both of them, as for drusilla, she's planning something, i'll never feel sorry for her, she brought all this on herself.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/24/2010 - 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Angel is annoying, disturbing all the time.
But I'm not sure if he can be trusted.
Sorry - had the other window with the old review open - this is for ch. 21
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/24/2010 - 06:05 pm
Title: Chapter 20
Angel is annoying, disturbing all the time.
But I'm not sure if he can be trusted.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/23/2010 - 11:05 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Pretty well done. Tender and sweet, and they got through all the important parts before Angel interrupted. And by getting all that done, William had even more reason to believe Buffy over anything Dru would have to say. And the idea that Angel realized the silliness of working with Dru, and now wants to align with Buffy is pretty interesting. And the idea of bringing down the queen sounds like a pretty good plan. Can't wait to see how this works out. And clearly, the only one that knows how to get through to this wicked witch is Buffy. Can't wait.
Reviewer: BlueEyes
Anonymous
Date: 02/23/2010 - 08:00 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Thank you I am so glad that they are working together. I partly question Angel switching sides is he a spy it this part of Dru's plans or is Angel actually being honest. I hope he is but you never can tell and it did happen pretty fast. At least they finally had protected sex. Ya. Look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/21/2010 - 09:03 pm
Title: Chapter 20
Big lug really is a tool. Hope our couple find a way to stay immune to their plots. Love their bout of rhyming, too. And I'm glad that Spike came clean about the past. Has to be good for him to get it off his chest. Looking forward to more. Update soon.
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/21/2010 - 11:58 am
Title: Chapter 20
:( i know it's for the good of the story but can i punch angel please? or maybe knock some sense into Buffy and William? i mean come on angel is being so obvious he just barges in then walks away? he's not even coming up with and excuse for being there. grrrr. men
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/20/2010 - 05:33 am
Title: Chapter 20
Mmmh-hmmm no lock on the door, huh? Bad move not to lock it with Angel there. Buffy should try to explain to Joyce what happened with Angel when she locks and Joyce complains.
Tough situation William was in with his family. Doesn't sounds as if things get a lot better very soon.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/20/2010 - 05:26 am
Title: Chapter 19
Ah... moving in with Buffy? Not a good idea at the moment Joyce had there. I hope Buffy has a key to lock her room. *sigh*
Not sure how much support William can give in this situation.
