Reviewer: lily
Anonymous
Date: 11/21/2009 - 06:53 pm
Title: 1
Aww, this is nice, I like it. Made me smile and made me sad, but that's a good thing, especially bc it's so short. Love it! :)
Reviewer: rogue
Anonymous
Date: 07/16/2007 - 02:37 pm
Title: 1
now that was good i think there should be more please let there be more
Reviewer: dinadrama
Anonymous
Date: 01/08/2006 - 12:23 pm
Title: 1
I like the style of writing in this. I can easily relate to the style cause sometimes I think that way...not that I'm schizo or anything lol.
Love the story btw if I haven't said that already. I liked the way you symbolized Spike without mentioning his name. It opens up numerous possibilities.....it is Spike.... isn't it?
Other than that I think this story is best left as a one shot. I just have a thing against sequels. Must be the paranoia of it becoming jinxed and turning horribly bad like movies lol but if you have a really mind blowing continuation then don't stop the sequel on my account. I'm sure it'd be as great as this one or even better.
Author's Response: lol. No, definitely not schizo. *coughyesyouarecough* Kidding. :p
Yeap, it's Spike. I would have made it to be Giles, him being English and all, but that would be...eeww.
I have a great idea for a sequel but I still have to really think about it. I too have the paranoia of it sucking so I'm not sure if I want to take that risk (yet).
Reviewer: Mali
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2006 - 12:59 pm
Title: 1
Oh, this is so beautifully sweet, I actually took a break to put a box of tissues next to me in case something unfortunate happens. I agree, this fiction doesn't really need a sequel, it contains hope within the characters, gorgeous.
Author's Response: Thank you, Mali. Thank god someone finally got it. :)
Reviewer: Mariana
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2006 - 10:29 pm
Title: 1
really loved the way you wrote it...wouldn't mind a sequel...just for the happy ending... but it's nice this way too... you should write some more...you have talent!! thanx so much...hope to hear from you again soon ;)
Author's Response: I have written some other stuff if you check out my profile. But thank you, I was a bit worried about the writing style. The cliff hanger is part of the beauty of the piece actually, because you don't have the cushy promise of a happy ending. You just have to have faith.
Reviewer: daisy
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2006 - 03:09 pm
Title: 1
interesting idea and i don't want to sound mean, but have you thought about doing this as a whole story. you know telling her back story and if she ever gets out and the truth is revieled? i like what you have though and can't wait to see if you do a sequel. just think about this as a whole story its pretty original and i would defenitaly love to read it. good job.
Author's Response: Don't worry; you don't sound mean. I'm actually very happy that you'd like to read more. And yes, I have thought about making this a whole story but this is partly in poem format so like I said in the A/N, I kind of like it the way it is. I am worried though that people would just get tired of the schizo-like talk on this. But I am contemplating about making it an actual story.
Reviewer: Mac 1
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2006 - 02:01 pm
Title: 1
Doesn't this seem like an awful lot of backstory and plot for a short one-shot?
Author's Response: You're right. It does have a lot of backstory for a one-shot but having a short story doesn't mean the plot has to be lacking. I'm picking a particular time-frame in her life but it doesn't mean nothing has happened to her before this.
