Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:04 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Great story and update. It appears that Riley is going to be a bigger jerk than he was in the show. Please update when you can.
Reviewer: Hieiko
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2005 - 08:21 am
Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story. I'm enjoying this different spin on Dawn's arrival. Can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: darla
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2005 - 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 2
its VERY VERY good so far. Can't wait to see whats going to happen
Reviewer: Seraiza
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2005 - 04:45 am
Title: Chapter 2
DAwn is a human right? And i cant wait to see what's gonna happen next!
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 02/24/2005 - 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2
damn that was great for just two chapters u already sucked me into wanting to read more and dying to find out wat happens next. i really like this story so far. u definitely cought me by surprise wen u brought in dawn like that. i really liked it. i also like the fact that your making it so rileys bad i like that way better wen people make it xander but that i can understand sometimes. ne ways i like this story and cant wait to read more. please update soon i want to no wat happens next thanx
Reviewer: songgal1 Signed
Date: 02/24/2005 - 11:38 pm
Title: Chapter 2
can't wait to find out how spike has dawn to begin with...
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/24/2005 - 04:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1
wow - will look out for more!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 02/24/2005 - 07:28 am
Title: Chapter 1
Good start. You must continue this story.
Reviewer: Hieiko
Anonymous
Date: 02/24/2005 - 05:41 am
Title: Chapter 1
What an intriguing start! I would love to see where this story is going... hope you update soon! :)
Reviewer: darla
Anonymous
Date: 02/24/2005 - 05:34 am
Title: Chapter 1
I love it so dar, how did Spike get Dawn??? Well I giess I'll find out. It was pretty easy to realize it was down after spike said 'get the fuck away from her' Great chapter
Reviewer: songgal1 Signed
Date: 02/24/2005 - 12:01 am
Title: Chapter 1
oh, well this is a whole new look at the initiative!