Reviewer: leilei3915 Signed
Date: 07/28/2017 - 08:36 am
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
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Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 01/03/2007 - 09:40 pm
Title: Epilogue
This story has a lot of good points. The plot and basic story are good, but there are a number of inconsistencies and writing and grammatical mistakes that would be helped with a Beta review. For instance - you said when Spike was held prisoner that only W&H could release him from his chains because of a spell on them, but this didn't deter the rescue team in any way - what happened? There were a few things like that in the story that seemed to detract from the storyline. There were other things like referring to "the Immortal" as just "Immortal" that were distracting to read. A little polish would make this a much stronger story. I really liked some aspects of the story and your ideas, but got somewhat frustrated reading parts of it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your feedback. I appreciate your honest criticism. It really helps me to improve in the future. And to the questions you asked... I meant to mean that the chains were magically bound and cannot be broken by the prisoner (Spike) himself. Maybe I didn't explain it properly. And the Immortal vs Immortal thing was a mistake on my behalf. It was not intentional. I would have really used a beta for my story but the two betas I had contact with disappeared after chapter 6. And I didn't want the readers to wait for me to find a beta. So I released the stories. If someone offers to beta it for me, I would resubmit it again. I do understand your frustration as I do get frustrated myself like that when reading some stories. I'll try to be more consistent in my future storylines. In your opinion, should I write a sequel?
Reviewer: spikespuppy
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 02:46 am
Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed tis story...well done...would love a sequel, and all te misadventures of te Scoobies reunited!
Author's Response: Writing a few other stories now. Once done with them, I will get back to this to follow up on a sequel.
Reviewer: huh?
Anonymous
Date: 12/10/2006 - 04:58 am
Title: What Really Happened?
Uh, you need a beta for your grammer and phrasing. I'm just wondering why no one tore into Andrew for hiding Spike's return, and instead let Andrew reprimand them? A little too unrealistic, some loopholes here and there, but if you get a good beta to read through your fics 1st, I believe you will become a good writer.
Author's Response: I really appreciate your honest criticism and I thank you for it. I did have a beta but she failed to continue after 7/8th chapter so I had to go on without her. I apologize for the grammatical mistakes as English is my 2nd language and not the 1st. And as for Andrew, many people made mistakes. Like Spike not telling, Angel not telling etc. And everyone knows Andrew cared about Spike. So when he lashed on, nobody objected it as everyone felt some kind of guilt over what Spike said. Atleast that is what my POV of the situation was. You might notice that Andrew didn't play a big part after the battle. So maybe in the sequel I can tie up that loophole.
Reviewer: Domnique
Anonymous
Date: 12/09/2006 - 11:28 am
Title: Epilogue
yes a sequal is in order
i absolutly love this story as it doesnt have that fake air about it
i like it because it seems like joss wrote it
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. That was what I was aiming for and your review made me feel like I achieved it. Add me into your favourite authors if you are interested in receiving alerts about my upcoming stories. I have a few WIP for the moment.
Reviewer: cheysma
Anonymous
Date: 12/03/2006 - 08:15 pm
Title: Epilogue
I really loved this. I like post series happy endings. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Me too. Please read the other story I have started to write and leave reviews.
Reviewer: Jamila
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:16 pm
Title: Epilogue
You should do a sequal I loved the story and would love to read more
Author's Response: Writing a few other stories now. Once done with them, I will get back to this to follow up on a sequel. Please find a moment of your time to read my other stories and leave reviews.
Reviewer: jane
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 03:15 am
Title: Epilogue
Great fic really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 11:14 am
Title: Epilogue
Absolutely loved this fic! Would love a sequel!
Author's Response: I'm motivated for a sequel too. Need to think of more plots to go with it. However, I have other ideas that are WIP at the moment. Add me into your favourite authors and you will be alerted once I add a new story. Thank you for the constant support.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 10:11 am
Title: Lovers’ Quarrel
this was a great chapter, glad xander isn't the stick in the mud that he normally is. Also happy that they made it through a fight and made up in little time. of course the battle has to interupt that.
Author's Response: Xander had matured in Season 7 compared to Season 6. I just let him mature more in the year of Angel Season 5. Please find a moment of your time to read my new story and write reviews. I would appreciate it.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 10:02 am
Title: Epilogue
well it's done, it;s so sad but at the same time a yeah! because it's a happy ending. this was an awsome fic and i enjoyed it all. i hope you write some more because you are a great writer.
Author's Response: Thank you for your constant support. Any opinion on a sequel for this? I have a few other ideas I'm working on. Let me know on a sequel idea for this. People can co-write it if interested.
Author's Response: I have other ideas that are WIP at the moment. Add me into your favourite authors and you will be alerted once I add a new story.
Reviewer: me
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 09:20 am
Title: Epilogue
very cool. spike and buffy deserve there happy ending. glad angel got one too.
Author's Response: I'm happy how it turned out too. I don't have anything against angel although I find him doing the tortured soul too bland. I just like him as long as he doesn't interfere with Spuffy. :D
Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed
Date: 11/24/2006 - 07:54 am
Title: Epilogue
Nice twist with the new Seer. Awesome story Plague. You da man!
Author's Response: Thanks mate. Really appreciate your support, Will let u know when I release my other WIPs.
Reviewer: SPUFFYRULZ
Anonymous
Date: 11/24/2006 - 07:50 am
Title: Epilogue
I LOVED IT! I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOOOOOOOOOOVED IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the enthusiastic response. :)
Author's Response: PS: Please find a moment of your time to start reading the other story I have started to write and leave reviews. Always welcome your positive response.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2006 - 05:24 pm
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
Glad Buffy caught Spike before he left. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Nerve wrecking tension huh? Wanted to keep the thrill. Hope I achieved that.
Reviewer: SPUFFYRULZ
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2006 - 03:19 pm
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
YAY! ANGEL GOT THE SHANSHU BUT BUFFY IS STILL WITH SPIKE! HOORAY!
Author's Response: What do you expect? Angel can't have everything. Spike deserves Buffy after everything they've been through.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2006 - 09:54 am
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
you are the best writer ever!!! i loved this part and*sigh* it was just amazing. I am SO glad with the whole spike/Buffy together. Can't wait for the epilogue to see how it ends.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You have been a good supporter for me. I really appreciate that.
Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed
Date: 11/22/2006 - 07:17 am
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
Oh thank God, you had me there with Angel getting the Shashu, but Buffy still chose Spike. YES! Interesting idea with "Jenny", I like it. Awesome chapter, Plague.
Author's Response: I thought so too. Didn't want him stalking and brooding around Buffy. ;)
Reviewer: Mark Twain
Anonymous
Date: 11/22/2006 - 07:10 am
Title: Prologue / Final Battle
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!
Author's Response: Thank you for your enthusiasm. :)
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 07:39 pm
Title: The Apocalypse
Can't wait for more! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Please give your feedback in the epilogue. Your comments mean so much to me.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 11/19/2006 - 10:18 am
Title: The Apocalypse
or maybe he;s going to be shanued(i don't know how to spell it). Awsome update and i'm glad you detailed the battle because some don't and it pisses me off. wow this isalmost done, i can't beelieve it is. well i'll write later when you update the next ch.
Author's Response: Maybe. Maybe not. Need to keep the suspence running. Will update soon. Don't have to wait long.
Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed
Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:58 pm
Title: The Apocalypse
Awesome battle!
Author's Response: Thanks again for the constant support.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2006 - 05:30 pm
Title: Calm Before The Storm
Awesome chapter! Will be sorry to see this fic end.
Author's Response: Well, read the epilogue and find out.
Reviewer: spikesangel
Anonymous
Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:39 pm
Title: Calm Before The Storm
thats cute, a little reuion before the battle. can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Next chapters is where the battle begins. Please take a minute to review previous chapter. Will really appreciate it if you do.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 09/17/2006 - 04:51 pm
Title: Lovers’ Quarrel
Loved how Xander's advice was instrumental in getting Buffy and Spike to share their feelings. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Well, I thought he was long overdue for character change. And he was pretty decent in Season 7. So Anya loss would have changed him. :)
