Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/27/2015 - 04:07 am
Title: Loose Ends
Having a great time reading your series again -
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/26/2015 - 11:01 pm
Title: Loose Ends
Glad to see that Nathan has not turned out as a weak vampire slave to his demon and can think for himself and make his own choices.
Feel sorry for Dru even with all her evil darkness - she is after all a tragic victim of Angelus.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/26/2015 - 09:16 pm
Title: Loose Ends
Poor Spike - I hope your Nathan does not turn out to be a plant and traitor, it would be great to have another vampire who does something good to go with Spike.
What about Xander? can't imagine that Spike would go with the draining, but I can see Xander offering him the blood he needs. Of course, shades of Giles' torture comes to mind.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/26/2015 - 01:35 pm
Title: Loose Ends
Always love the Spike Great Cook - like how you handled the Buffy much deserved financial change - imagine the CoW with all their financial resources not helping finance their Slayer.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/25/2015 - 07:19 am
Title: No such thing as coincidences
NICE - except for the three way shagaton - guess I just too conventional.
great reading this again -
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/07/2015 - 08:53 am
Title: No such thing as coincidences
I really like your version of super intelligent and experienced and resourceful but I think a little more of the same - say from Giles and Wesley would be a good relief for Spike.
Still - I always disliked when the series decided to go with the dumbing down Spike.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/06/2015 - 11:32 pm
Title: No such thing as coincidences
Probably mentioned this before in my reviews but I love the poetry - and NICE with this softer Xander-Spike.
Reviewer: nmcil16765
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/2014 - 08:33 am
Title: New beginnings
Agree - it was great that you did a tribute for Joyce - great chapter -
Reviewer: nmcil
Anonymous
Date: 05/09/2014 - 10:24 am
Title: No such thing as coincidences
Looking forward to reading the entire series - wonder what kind of response you had to your sexual triad. While I understand that this was indeed something to show the emotional growth of Spike and a perfect opportunity to bring in the hot sexy scene and resolution to the Buffy-Angel love story not sure that it is a particular good reflection back on the relationship between Buffy and Spike. It comes across to me with a big statement that Buffy is still very much wanting that former connection with Angel. Nor doI think that Buffy would engage in this kind of sexual encounter but I could even accept their triad but I can't help thinking that if Buffy really loved Spike full out she would not have wanted sexual connection to Angel.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 05/08/2014 - 09:14 pm
Title: No such thing as coincidences
Your Spike is both so heroic and so weak - wish that he had a little more control sometimes with he need to give Buffy all his love.
Reviewer: fitz
Anonymous
Date: 12/31/2012 - 04:23 pm
Title: No such thing as coincidences
This fic started off good. It has an interesting concept but, for me, there was too much Dawn and I really hated the threesome w/Angel. Just so out of character for Spike to want that. I actually stopped reading at that point.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 12/11/2012 - 10:43 pm
Title: No such thing as coincidences
Enjoyed this very much - looking forward to reading the other parts. Well, I enjoyed everything with the exception of the triad shaggaton. But as you state, it will be important later on. Just on a personal basis, cause we all have different ideas about sexual behavior, but I personally don't like Buffy being so willing to have sex with Angel and Spike in this situation - nor do I like that Spike would accept this sex triad either. To each their own however.
Reviewer: jadefrost Signed
Date: 07/27/2012 - 01:09 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Absolutly loved the whole 'verse. One series I am sure to reread over and over.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Puddin
Anonymous
Date: 07/25/2012 - 01:40 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Quite a feat. Note just the last chapter in your story, but the last chapter in your 'verse! What an accomplishment! Congratulations on a job well done!
Author's Response: Thank you Puddin - and thank you for your assistance, which has been immeasurable.
And congrats on your awards!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/22/2012 - 06:31 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Ah it was THE SlAYER - not especially way in the future. So it's sad that Dawn is gone now - even if she had a good life. And a quite long one.
I don't mind the long epilogue - I appreciated it especially because it may be the last in this 'Verse.
Enjoyed :)
Author's Response: Thanks you Cordykitten - and thank you for your faithful reviews all through this series. Your enthusiastic comments are a large part of the reason I ever managed to get this far!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/22/2012 - 06:08 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Heh - something special indeed - as the only blood drinker with a natural suntan.
Sounds we're are a bit in the future, their future, now, huh?
Author's Response: I just thought of James who is now all tanned - yum!
Yup - we jumped a little way into their future, just for a sneaky glimpse.
Reviewer: Tanjamuse
Anonymous
Date: 07/21/2012 - 07:47 am
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Bravo.
Thanks for writing a fantastic ending (at least for now).
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
:-)
Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed
Date: 07/19/2012 - 05:07 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
I waited so I could be the 100th :)
I think this is a really interesting departure - not just for this story, but for Spuffy in general. Hell, for fiction in general! And I love it. It's scary to take chances like this and I'm proud of you for doing it.
Author's Response: Thank you Puddin. Where would I be without you?
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 07/18/2012 - 10:44 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
such a brillliant author. So much detail. Sorry my details are lacking in detail. I am just really short on time lately. Just want you to know that, like usual, I love this story. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: And thank you for your kind words.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 07/18/2012 - 10:41 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Such a good chapter. The simple scene of Spike making cocoa for Dawn was so cute.
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
Reviewer: KathyH
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/2012 - 06:08 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
I love, love, love your entire Coincidences series! You do such a wonderful job of writing Buffy and Spike, and I love having Tara in the mix too. And while I'm not an Angel fan, you do a great job of capturing his arrogant ego -- and of Angel bashing too!
The series is one of my all-time favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Kathy.
Reviewer: Puddin
Anonymous
Date: 07/14/2012 - 06:00 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
You made some subtle changes to this chapter and I like them. Some of the stuff with identifying her as Lilah - very nice. And, well, dammit, I have to say yet again how much I love your Spike voice. If I write a Spike story, I am so gonna pick your brain. Is that a warning or a threat? ;)
Author's Response: I just can't seem to resist that last minute fiddle... LOL
I'm so happy you like my Spike - he is after all the reason I got into this fanfic world in the first place! Feel free to pick whatever grey matter is still functioning...
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/14/2012 - 10:16 am
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Oh yeah - necro-thingy glass will be neat in (for) the car.
Clever way to get rid of the contract. Lots of rocks should make it safe.
So it all turned out fine - it won't be Angel Spike will fighting with but he has his own fight, now with Cordy's visions back.
And Buffy and Spike? The new location sounds good.
Loved it - looking forward to the epilogue though it will be sad not so see any new stories from this verse.
Author's Response: Thanks, Cordy.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/14/2012 - 09:37 am
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
Almost finished... not a lot to catch up too. (I'll really miss this verse. I know like today I've caught the begin on a Yahoo Group. BTW to you get the nocturnal light newsletter? There is talk that VK files *quote* hope to get those stories up on a site of their own in the VERY NEAR FUTURE. So there is hope (but I forgot if your stories were there, too. Enough ramble for now.
Heh purple hair. Saves having your hair colored at the shop or self made. *g*
But Angel is really in trouble with his contract.
Wonder where Buffy, Spike and Dawn will end if not L.A.
Eirene = the name fits.
Author's Response: I did have my stories at VK, Cordy and was devastated wen it disappeared. I was also following some stories that I couldn't find anywhere else. Here's hoping...
Thanks as always for your detailed revue :-)
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 07/12/2012 - 09:51 pm
Title: Notes from the Hellmouth
I love that Spike is back! :)
I enjoyed reading the bonding of Xander and Spike. Xander isn't so bad when he's not being an ass. You never fail in writing a great chapter.
Author's Response: They'll never be best buddies, but Xander has grown up enough and Spike has mellowed sufficiently that they can get along without too much friction. Besides, with all those girls around, sometimes the men need to stick together...
