Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 01/06/2013 - 02:27 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Very sweet ending !
Reviewer: Manson101 Signed
Date: 01/13/2012 - 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for an amazing story, pet! :)
Reviewer: spuffy28 Signed
Date: 08/04/2011 - 08:04 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Hay, imagen if like Buffy, Willow died like for two seconds. then Buffy got called too. So that both Willow and Buffy where both slayer. That would be a great thing to do, for a sequel. What do you think?
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 05/26/2010 - 02:41 pm
Title: Chapter 5
i find it hilarioius that Buffy, the chosen one, is the ONLY one in sunnydale who DIDN'T know what was going on as far as what goes bump in the night
Author's Response: Um, yeah, Buffy's not the Slayer in this one. If that's what you're looking for, you're reading the wrong story.
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 11/26/2007 - 04:46 am
Title: Chapter 15
Read it in one hit and really enjoyed it. Thanks.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/11/2007 - 11:08 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Wonderful fic! Loved it!
Reviewer: txjmfan
Anonymous
Date: 11/11/2007 - 01:44 am
Title: Chapter 15
Excellent story! Loved it!
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2007 - 02:41 am
Title: Chapter 15
I just love this!!! You're brilliant!!!
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2007 - 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 15
Aww... I love that you ended things on a happy note. Thanks for the great read... Wonderful story! :D
Reviewer: Squid
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2007 - 08:49 pm
Title: Chapter 15
It was really good! Don't ever worry about the mushy - that's why we all come here. To get our happy ending. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2007 - 06:51 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Hey,
I loved the fic and followed it to the end faithfully.
I do feel it ended up too abruptly.
You're a pretty good writer, sucking us right into the heart and angst of the story.
However, I DO hope you work on how to end stories like this, wrap them up, so to speak. The ending to this somehow just didn't feel right, didn't feel finished. Yet, it didn't quite feel like something aching for a sequel (at least w/o being totally syrupy. Once Spike & Buffy defeated Angelus, the antagonist of the story was gone, ie that which kept the speed of the story going. Don't get me wrong, loved the loving between the two of them but it just wasn't going anywhere by then end of the fic.
(It was kinda like the line by Willow in 'Once More With Feeling', "...This line is mostly filler..."....)
There were directions the tale could've gone--- Buffy could have filled the shoes of various characters---slayers die and are called all the time...especially with there being a "Chosen Two", per se.... She could've been called ( know ,
She could've been a replacement of Faith or...? Or could've picked up magick in Willow's stead, since W. was interesting enough to be the Slayer called in this fic.
Or Buffy could've turned out to be a Key...
Anyway, it's done. All this said, I DID like it, and am kinda sorry to see it finished. But I DO thank you for it, and enjoyable read. Will look forward to any and all forthcoming fics from you, and am hoping you already have something new in the works!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 11/09/2007 - 06:49 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Oh that was a good ending,
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/09/2007 - 04:56 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Enjoyed the ride so to say. :) (the read)
Fluffy is good to read after reading an angsty story.
Reviewer: Pet
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2007 - 01:32 pm
Title: Chapter 15
I was surprised when I saw "the end" at the bottom of the page, I didn't expect that already. But what a lovely ending! So sweet! Really liked this story, well done! :)
Reviewer: trish
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:58 am
Title: Chapter 15
really great, i loved this story!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2007 - 11:10 am
Title: Chapter 15
Kudos Tammy that was very good
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 11/08/2007 - 05:13 am
Title: Chapter 14
Awww... I just love how happy Spike and Buffy are. :D The Willow bits of the chapter were fun... lol! Great update!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 05:19 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Really loving this fic! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: my_perfect_muse
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 05:18 pm
Title: Chapter 14
LOL! Buffy is too cute! Loved the update :)
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 11/07/2007 - 05:05 pm
Title: Chapter 14
It is good that Willow is supportive of Buffy. And I can't believe that Riley and Walsh to good.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/07/2007 - 03:35 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Good that the Initiative situation did get sorted out by itself :)
Staking-happy Buffy was fun.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 03:24 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Lolx. Love stake happy Buffy. Very adorable when I picture it. Riley and Walsh? Talk about EWWWW!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 12:04 pm
Title: Chapter 14
wonderful wonderful update, but riley and walsh, ugh
loved the characterisation of willow and spike
Reviewer: trish
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2007 - 11:52 am
Title: Chapter 14
very sweet, i like that they're all patrolling together.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2007 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 13
Love all the twists! Can't wait for more!
