Reviewer: Beth
Anonymous
Date: 07/25/2012 - 10:36 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
Love the story so far I know that's it been awhile since you started this Fic and I would to hear what happens next
Reviewer: spike4buffy
Anonymous
Date: 10/01/2006 - 04:16 am
Title: He's not staying here!
Im luvin it update soon
Reviewer: luvver21
Anonymous
Date: 03/16/2006 - 08:36 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
I think this is a great story so far and you could definitely do some interesting things with it! Can't wait to read more. Great job!
Reviewer: katina
Anonymous
Date: 02/06/2006 - 05:33 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
Love the story , but I think you may have left out some words. Cant wait to read the next part. Dont be too long..
Reviewer: sirc
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:38 am
Title: He's not staying here!
interesting start :)
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2006 - 12:12 am
Title: He's not staying here!
good story so far
Reviewer: ???
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2006 - 09:10 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
too hard to read, not in character, and i'm already bored to tears that i couldn't even read the whole thing, this needs a lot of work.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:15 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2006 - 04:08 pm
Title: He's not staying here!
You might want to put a space between each paragraph and/or set of dialogue so that it's easier to read. Also, there are a lot of punctuation marks that are either missing and should be there or are used incorrectly, especially in dialogue. You might want to get a beta to make sure there are less errors, too.