Reviewer: Lambean
Anonymous
Date: 09/25/2012 - 02:15 am
Title: Chapter 12
This was really, really good.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 09/06/2012 - 02:12 am
Title: 37 minutes
Has potential, but really needs a vigorous editing. Poor punctuation, grammar, syntax, etc., makes this very difficult to read.
Reviewer: riz Signed
Date: 02/16/2012 - 12:42 am
Title: Chapter 12
i loved this story!!!!!
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/2011 - 10:34 am
Title: Chapter 12
Enjoyed reading this. Glad you finished writing it - obviously in a good way!
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2011 - 09:36 pm
Title: Chapter 12
GREAT story - I loved the evolution of the characters and the angst. I wish there was more to read about them I can't stop thinking about the story - I really loved this one - Thanks.
Author's Response: thanks so very much, truth be told it was over a year since I updated it (along with my others) so I focused on giving it an ending because I couldn't get back into the flow of ideas. Im so happy you enjoyed and reviewed, thanks again
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/24/2011 - 06:51 pm
Title: Chapter 12
Enjoyed the spuffyness - and the way it ended. :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/24/2011 - 06:45 pm
Title: Chapter 11
I liked Spike coming for Buffy's defense.
And good to see an update :)
Reviewer: Melly
Anonymous
Date: 06/22/2011 - 05:15 pm
Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Thanks for such a great story!
Author's Response: thank you so so much :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/21/2010 - 06:54 am
Title: Chapter 10
Good update - and good talk. Time will help them figure out what they want (even if I think they already know).
Have fun at the Con / concert. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, and i def. will!!!
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/20/2010 - 05:15 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Look forward to your next update. Have a great vacation. You deserve it girl!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much!!! I will def be thinking of everyone on this site when I see him lol!!!
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2010 - 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Just read all 9 chapters, very , very good , i like it lot's . I had promised myself i would only read completed fics this year and here you come along and made me break my promise, but i don,t regret it.
Author's Response: Wow, that's such a compliment, thank you for breaking your rule for this and I hope I can keep you happy with it :)
Reviewer: GrammarGirl
Anonymous
Date: 08/17/2010 - 04:49 am
Title: 37 minutes
Hi, I'm really, really liking this story, but just want to point out a bit of a grammar thing, I hope you don't mind.
When it comes to your use of quotes, don't forget the punctuation at the end. When the quote is part of a larger sentence, it needs to have a comma inside it.
For example, you have: "Genius actually” Buffy answered and turned so that she could see him while they danced.
This should be: "Genius actually," Buffy answered etc etc
And when you have a quote that's all on its own, it still needs a full stop.
For example, you have lots of single lines like: “I thought about you too”
These need a full stop inside the quotation ("I thought about you too.")
Similarly, when a quote is at the end of a sentence, there still needs to be a full stop, but this time outside of the quotation mark.
For example, you have lots of lines like: He ran his tongue over his canine, “I know”
These should read: He ran his tongue over his canine, "I know".
I know this seems really anal and nit-picky of me, but I'm a sucker for punctuation and hate to see a great story get muddled with simple mistakes... please don't take offense!
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Firstly - I take no offense whatsoever. One of the main reasons I lack punctuation - which I do on purpose and forget to rectify - most of the time at least I am in no way near perfect grammatically - is because it capitalizes the word immediately afterwords and that's my pet peeve lol. I will do my best to remember to go through the chappy before I post but I have quite a few stories going so I may forget. Thanks for taking the time to read and to care enough to point this out, Again, no offense has been taken, I appreciate it :)
Author's Response: LOL I am so retarded, no wonder I always get capitals, I'm hitting the period key instead of the comma, thanks so much for your help, really! I can't guarantee total satisfaction for you but I will make an effort.
Reviewer: Spuffy_obsessed Signed
Date: 08/17/2010 - 12:36 am
Title: Chapter 9
Loved the ending to this chapter, epic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/16/2010 - 10:04 pm
Title: Chapter 9
That is hilarious!! Anya always livens up the party doesn't she? Thanks for another great chappy.
Author's Response: She is by far one of the best characters ever created out of any show I've seen. She was always just so funny to listen to, and thank you for another great review!!!
Reviewer: Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/2010 - 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Got to love Anya. That was hilarious I even started to tear it was absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: We really do, she's just awesome, I wish I had an Anya to bring with me everywhere
thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/16/2010 - 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter 9
A good morning with all the visits. And the idea to invite the others.
Anya's questions are priceless ;))
Author's Response: Thank you, I had a lot of fun with this chapter, she's one of my fave characters!
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/13/2010 - 09:26 am
Title: Chapter 8
Now that was some damn hot phone sex! I am so glad you updated. Can't wait to see what happens next. Love where this is going. Love the narrative flow. Much smooochies.
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you, you're so nice to me - I'll try not to let it go to my head lol!!! xx
L.
Reviewer: behind blue eyes
Anonymous
Date: 08/11/2010 - 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 8
hot chappie! Phone sex is always of the good!
Author's Response: lol thank you, and I concur :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/11/2010 - 05:49 pm
Title: Chapter 8
Awe, Buffy is such a tease.
And see now Buffy was able to sleep. :)
Enjoyed the update / naughty Buffy.
Author's Response: I think I would pass out too lol, thanks for the review CK, much appreciated :)
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 08/03/2010 - 10:26 pm
Title: Chapter 7
I am so glad you updated this story. I absolutely love it. You have let's just say a definite way with words. LOL.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I appreciate the review. This is one of my favorite stories so far and I'm hoping to keep it Spuffy but true to the characters too. Glad to see youre still with it :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/03/2010 - 02:30 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Welcome back! It's good to see the story updated. :)
Awe, a very hopeful chapter that maybe there will be more in the future, relationship-wise. They are getting along well.
Enjoyed - and I hope to see more or the story again. :)
Author's Response: When all else fails, you don't. Thank you for another kind review CK it really means a lot to me,
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 08/10/2009 - 06:03 pm
Title: oompa loompa drinking tequila at noon????
Loving this! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: immortalangel08 Signed
Date: 08/09/2009 - 03:03 pm
Title: oompa loompa drinking tequila at noon????
Lol your welcome but I think it worked out really well. I even thought that was where you were going with it but not totally sure. I love how Spike is slowly realizing his feelings and Lorne is amazing and gave Buffy some great advice!
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2009 - 02:48 am
Title: oompa loompa drinking tequila at noon????
I absolutely adore this story. Can't wait for the next chappy but I wouldn't mind if the angst dragged on a little more too. :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 08/09/2009 - 12:09 am
Title: oompa loompa drinking tequila at noon????
Yeah, wondered about that myself, but it does lend itself quite nicely to the flow. And it does help wheedle away at her denial. Leaving the car was a physical manifestation of a freudian slip. She totally needs him. And Lorne is fantastic. RIP Andy.
Author's Response: Physical manifestation you say....yes! That's what i must have been going for (shifty eyes), all a part of my brilliant plan lol. I truly love Lorne too, and am heartbroken that he's gone, he was a very talented man. Thanks for the wonderful review!
