Reviewer: bitchee
Anonymous
Date: 10/30/2014 - 03:22 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
Great AU fic.... Loved the whole Faith and Willow thing and the way you brought Angel in at just the right time. LOL Really enjoyed both of the stories and the hot Spuffy sex was an added bonus.
Reviewer: LaraHancock
Anonymous
Date: 11/15/2011 - 09:14 pm
Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth
It's great that people can take the mortgage loans and this opens completely new possibilities.
Reviewer: zanthinegirl
Anonymous
Date: 08/21/2008 - 10:53 am
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
You know, I was having a rotten couple of days. Summer cold and a big does of self pity. I re-read both of these stories, and it cheered me right up! ::loves this AU:: You just can't beat Ange walking in on Buffy and Spike, and being mistaken for the first. Even if Xander does make me get all sniffly.
thanks for cheering me up!
Reviewer: Dominion Signed
Date: 08/08/2007 - 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
I really enjoyed this series. I liked that just having Joyce around didn't change things too drastically but enough that it made the last two seasons run smoother. You really did an amazing job on this story. You didn't make Spike too soft or Buffy too much of a bitch. It was well balanced and I liked the redeeming of Faith too, though her relationship with Willow didn't do much for me. Thanks for taking the time to post this. I really did thoroughly enjoy it.
Reviewer: rip aycock
Anonymous
Date: 02/08/2007 - 09:58 pm
Title: Chapter One: Welcome Back to the Hellmouth
I just finished this story, and I enjoyed it very much. The subtle changes that you made to what "really" happened made it better without changing the basic story. Increasing Faith's part in the action was a very good touch, and more in keepng, I believe, with her basic character; Faith wouldn't be content to keep playing second banana to Buffy, despite the older girl's greater experience. She didn't accept authority before she went into prison, and I see no reasion for that to have changed in the ensueing time.
I do feel that the "almost" relationship between Faith and Willow never would've worked, and Principal Wood should have played a somewhat larger part (with the other changes you made to canon, it would've been a great touch to have him be an undercover agent for the First Evil).
The Watchers' Council showing up at the last minute with an army of newly activated Slayers was something that I wasn't expecting, but it made the ultimate descent into the Hellmouth somewhat more believable than Buffy's decision on the show to face down an army of Turok Han underground whil at the same time fighting off a hoard of Bringers in the school.
On the whole, a very good story, fun to read, staying within the parameters and established characters of the characters involved, and a wise decision on your part to exclude some of the origonal characters, thereby avoiding making the story too cumbersome,
Fun to read, and a more satisfying ending than the origonal.Thank you for going to the considerble amount of work involved in creating it, and rest assured that I will be looking for your name on more stories in the future.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all the feedback. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I realize that Faith and Willow together isn't everyone's favorite, and it was never something I intended as the ultimate true love for either of them. But in this story they are both feeling out their positions within the group, as The Girls Who Kill, and it brings them closer together.
I had a lot of fun with this one. Changing the way the slayers got 'called' gave me a lot of freedom to change things.
I hope you'll enjoy my other stories as well, and thank you again for the comments!
Reviewer: meggie
Anonymous
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:07 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
I really loved both stories in this series. It's so nice having a gentler AU S6-7 that actually gives reasons for why things changed. As a Buffy fan, I really can't stand "In this version, Buffy's nice" stories, that never delve into why she was screwed up in the first place or what situations might have altered how she acted. You did a really great job as far as changing a couple of circumstances and showing the ripple effect that that would have on everyone's lives.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know what you mean about stories were Buffy is just nicer 'because' with no real background. I think with Joyce around she just wouldn't be nearly as burdened on her return from the dead. But it wouldn't exactly be perfect either.
I'm so glad you enjoyed them!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:39 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
Loved it could use more to the story like what they do now.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will probably be writing small stories set in this AU. No plans for another big WIP at the moment, but I might tackle an S8-era fic at some point.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:29 pm
Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Eve of Battle
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: JenxGeR
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/2007 - 07:55 pm
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Clues and Other Frustrations
Go Willow!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Jenx
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/2007 - 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter Eleven: Darkness
Hey, why did Faith have to end up being more powerful then Buffy? *whines*
Author's Response:
Hee! Well, she had the cojones to take the shadow men's offer. But Buffy is still the leader.
Reviewer: Tanja
Anonymous
Date: 01/01/2007 - 02:06 am
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
Beautiful sequel, I loved so much reading it. Thank you for sharing and consider yourself begged for more! I can never tire of this wonderful AU you have created. Keep up the amazing work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am taking a hiatus from the giant WIP, but I have some shorter stories planned in this universe and some unrelated fics in the works as well. I hope you'll enjoy those as well. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: rosie
Anonymous
Date: 12/31/2006 - 10:52 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, rosie. I do have some shorter stories planned in this universe, so hopefully there'll be more to the story soon.
Reviewer: kandis
Anonymous
Date: 12/30/2006 - 06:22 am
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
loved it hope for more in this series later and by later i mean soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm taking a break from the giant WIPs, but there will be more from me, including some shorter stories set in the same universe.
Reviewer: zombiegirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/30/2006 - 01:49 am
Title: Chapter Seventeen: The Chosen
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderful, beautful ,well written. I loved the whole series.You write the characters perfectly.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: golddrake
Anonymous
Date: 12/29/2006 - 10:27 am
Title: Chapter Sixteen: The Eve of Battle
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: zombiegirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 09:35 pm
Title: Chapter Fifteen: Visits From Old Friends
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks.
Reviewer: golddrake
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter Fifteen: Visits From Old Friends
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 12/21/2006 - 06:50 pm
Title: Chapter Fifteen: Visits From Old Friends
Love it I never picked up on it was the real Angel. More please.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad I was able to surprise some readers :)
Reviewer: golddrake
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 10:18 am
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Two Slayers, No Waiting
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 12/21/2006 - 06:24 am
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Two Slayers, No Waiting
love it.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: zombiegirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2006 - 11:24 pm
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Two Slayers, No Waiting
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wounderful chapter. I am so looking foward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter posting momentarily.
Reviewer: rosie
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2006 - 08:43 pm
Title: Chapter Fourteen: Two Slayers, No Waiting
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks. More coming soon!
Reviewer: willowmouse
Anonymous
Date: 12/19/2006 - 12:29 am
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Clues and Other Frustrations
this is great, I love the pace, wonderful story
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope to have the next chapter up soon.
Reviewer: zombiegirl
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/2006 - 08:50 pm
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Clues and Other Frustrations
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter. I
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 12/18/2006 - 07:20 pm
Title: Chapter Thirteen: Clues and Other Frustrations
love it more please.
Author's Response: Thanks, more is on the way soon.
