Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/2011 - 12:04 am
Title: Chapter 10
would be great to see more of any of your stories :-)
Reviewer: Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 06/16/2010 - 11:13 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I am loving this story I just hate that it ended. Please continue how do they fix things and what will come of Angel and for that matter Hamilton and Knox may they get what's coming.
Reviewer: RRaineTerra
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2010 - 10:53 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Now this is an original storyline. I like it. I do hope you will be finishing this one.
I have wondered about that moment of madness when Spike becomes corporeal again. Good to see it interupted.
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2010 - 08:11 am
Title: Chapter 10
it would also rock if your muse decided to finish this story :-)
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2010 - 08:11 am
Title: Chapter 10
it would also rock if your muse decided to finish this story :-)
Reviewer: MarzBar Signed
Date: 04/26/2009 - 06:26 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I'm getting antsy waiting for more of this. I also love "The Truce" and hope you and/or your must don't forget either or both of these fab tales.
Reviewer: ScoobyDoo
Anonymous
Date: 04/07/2009 - 08:25 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Very interesting character development and plot. Hope you'll pick up this great story again.
Author's Response: Will do SoobyDoo although everyone seems to prefer The Truce right now. This one is my first ever fic so I have a special fondness for it even if I didn't really know what I was doing when I started it.
Reviewer: Cate Signed
Date: 03/23/2009 - 09:04 am
Title: Chapter 5
lol must have been awkward.... you know in a really hot kinda way lol. So sweet, even the feral coupling in it's own way :P
Author's Response: My first sex scenes - my Mum would be so proud (Not).
Reviewer: Cate Signed
Date: 03/23/2009 - 08:49 am
Title: chapter 2
Wha?? Lol sounds cool. I loved the last scene. It was such a "Spike and Buffy" thing to do :D
Author's Response: Thanks Cate.
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2009 - 08:40 am
Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love it. There is no messing around with you girl, you just go *bang* right into the action (hehe action... I'm so immature :P). I love Angel's jealousy and pettyness, in which I always like to see with the Angel/Buffy/Spike love triangles. I'd like to see how you get Spike out this, I just hope you didn't let him off too easy (yeah I'm late with my readings lol) xx
Author's Response: Yes I like seeing Spike squirm too. Thankyou for giving this one a try Cate.
Reviewer: Olwen
Anonymous
Date: 04/15/2008 - 10:12 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I love the ideas you come up with. I hope you'll be continuing this one and The Treaty. You've got real story telling skill.
Author's Response: Thanks Olwen. Nice that you gave this fic a try on the strength of the other one. I will be back to it I promise.
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 01/14/2008 - 02:59 pm
Title: Chapter 10
I loved how you added a bit of levity to the chapter, Dawn's remark about how cute Spike would look in a Boy Scout's uniform really made me laugh... lol! And a bear showing again was totally unexpected, I loved it! Wonderful chapter, and welcome back! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. Now that my life is less disordered I should be adding new chapters much more frequently.
Reviewer: Pet Signed
Date: 01/14/2008 - 07:48 am
Title: Chapter 10
I just read the whole story so far and I'm really interested to see what happens next. Really good story! :)
Author's Response: Thankyou for that.
Reviewer: ashmo21
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2008 - 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Brilliant! This was absolutely brilliant. I can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 01/13/2008 - 04:20 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Glad to see you updated :) I still haven't managed to read you other story (The Truth) so good you posted that here too. Now I have to read ;-)
~ Loved Buffy's declaration that she trusts Spike. :)
But at last Dawn was able to get away. But you ended on a cliffhanger again :-D A bear? Hopefully you can update soon.
Author's Response: I know - evil cliffhangerer that I am. Thanks Cordykitten.
Reviewer: Jo
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2008 - 03:16 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Well welcome back , i think it's been since August you last updated , right? any way glad your still writing this and this latest chapter was great. The first chapter is still my favorites, I wanted to kick Spike ass after reading it.
Author's Response: Has it been that long? Sorry Jo.
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 01/13/2008 - 01:56 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Oh how I've missed this story! I was afraid you weren't going to go back to it! I just want to let you know that I love this story, and it's actually one of the first spuffy fan fics I've ever read. Please continue! :)
Author's Response: Blushes. As this is my first fic that makes us even. Thanks
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 08/29/2007 - 12:43 am
Title: Chapter 9
Run Dawn run!!! I hope she doesn't get caught again. Great Dawn-centered chapter. I enjoyed learning what's been happening with her and Fred, gotta say I'm really worried about poor Fred though. Good update!
Author's Response: Thanks Midnightgirl. Lola - sorry Dawn is hoofing it down the corridoors as I write. And yes, poor Fred - who will rescue her?
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 08/28/2007 - 01:00 pm
Title: Chapter 9
I haven't been able to read your other WIP yet but I hope to catch up (sooner or later).
Oh bad... Dawn (and Fred) got caught. Dawn is wearing docs? At last they can hit very hard this way *ggg*.
Wow, that was in the docs? I hope Dawn can run very fast now :)
Author's Response: Have never tried running in docs (or in anything else for that matter) so lets just hope they don't trip her up. Will post my other story here too if I'm allowed when I have a few more chapters written. Thanks Cordykitten.
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2007 - 09:28 pm
Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad that you updated and gave us a glimpse as to what's been going on with Dawn.
Author's Response: Thanks B. I thought it was time that Dawn made an appearance. Will be quicker with the next chapter.
Reviewer: JO
Anonymous
Date: 08/27/2007 - 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 9
I just finished rereading this (thru ch 7) last nite (chapter 1 is my favorite) although I hate Spike other or Buffy other ,that chapter was classic, than next day I find yu updated . Hope Dawn gets away,and can help Fred.
Author's Response: Nice to have you back Jo and to know that you even have a favourite chapter.
Reviewer: Amanda Michelle
Anonymous
Date: 07/22/2007 - 12:47 am
Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Just read it all. Very good so far. At first read of the summary it sounded a bit...dull. And it wasn't until I heard the whole Buffy/William/Slayer/Spike thing did I decide I would give it a read. And I'm not disappointed. I love the slayer aspect...very unexpected. And I love how you describe the slayer and the demon, and how they look. Nice.
And I was wondering when Dawn would come up. I had a feeling early on that she was going to end up being in the building too.
Well... I know it's been a while since you updated but here's to hoping that you do soon.
Author's Response: Well I finally have updated, and sorry to leave you hanging like that. You're right about the summary I'll try to make it a bit more appealing next time round.
Reviewer: secretguest
Anonymous
Date: 05/31/2007 - 11:39 am
Title: Chapter 8
Uh oh...that's not good at all. What's gonna happen next? Can't wait to find out! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks Secretguest. Sorry for the delay.
Reviewer: B
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/2007 - 09:46 pm
Title: Chapter 8
I knew something was going to happen to Dawn, she can never keep out of trouble. Thank-you for the awesome story so far and the much anticipated update.
Author's Response: That my updates could be much anticipated by anyone gives me a warm glow - thanks B
Reviewer: MidnightGirl
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/2007 - 01:50 am
Title: Chapter 8
This update was definitely worth the wait, I loved the new plot twists you've introduced. Your take on Angel's soul is so unique... what a great piece of storytelling! Spike's interaction with the Slayer was fun, the duster skiing was such cute moment between the two. :D Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: Am glad you like the skiing Slayer bit. I like her having fun rather than being Ms. Ferocious all the time, a person in her own right rather than just the dark side of Buffy. promise I'll be quicker with my updates in future too.
