Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/25/2015 - 07:19 am
Title: Chapter 9c
NICE - except for the three way shagaton - guess I just too conventional.
great reading this again -
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/07/2015 - 08:53 am
Title: Chapter 6a
I really like your version of super intelligent and experienced and resourceful but I think a little more of the same - say from Giles and Wesley would be a good relief for Spike.
Still - I always disliked when the series decided to go with the dumbing down Spike.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 08/06/2015 - 11:32 pm
Title: Chapter 4a
Probably mentioned this before in my reviews but I love the poetry - and NICE with this softer Xander-Spike.
Reviewer: nmcil
Anonymous
Date: 05/09/2014 - 10:24 am
Title: Chapter 9c
Looking forward to reading the entire series - wonder what kind of response you had to your sexual triad. While I understand that this was indeed something to show the emotional growth of Spike and a perfect opportunity to bring in the hot sexy scene and resolution to the Buffy-Angel love story not sure that it is a particular good reflection back on the relationship between Buffy and Spike. It comes across to me with a big statement that Buffy is still very much wanting that former connection with Angel. Nor doI think that Buffy would engage in this kind of sexual encounter but I could even accept their triad but I can't help thinking that if Buffy really loved Spike full out she would not have wanted sexual connection to Angel.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 05/08/2014 - 09:14 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Your Spike is both so heroic and so weak - wish that he had a little more control sometimes with he need to give Buffy all his love.
Reviewer: fitz
Anonymous
Date: 12/31/2012 - 04:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1
This fic started off good. It has an interesting concept but, for me, there was too much Dawn and I really hated the threesome w/Angel. Just so out of character for Spike to want that. I actually stopped reading at that point.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 12/11/2012 - 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 9c
Enjoyed this very much - looking forward to reading the other parts. Well, I enjoyed everything with the exception of the triad shaggaton. But as you state, it will be important later on. Just on a personal basis, cause we all have different ideas about sexual behavior, but I personally don't like Buffy being so willing to have sex with Angel and Spike in this situation - nor do I like that Spike would accept this sex triad either. To each their own however.
Reviewer: 862
Anonymous
Date: 03/30/2012 - 01:10 am
Title: Chapter 1
Next time, you should probably put a warning before making a threesome with Angel. Otherwise the story was interesting with a lot of great humor
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/09/2012 - 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 9c
Interesting world you've created here. Interested to see how all the prophecies pan out in the future. Also, I did enjoy their little threesome. Seemed like a good way to set things at peace, and I look forward to seeing what kind of a role it plays in the future. Thanks for sharing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, BuffyRat. It's always a delight to receive a review for this fic. It was my first and I know there are flaws. I hope you go on to enjoy the sequels...
Reviewer: spuffy28 Signed
Date: 07/26/2011 - 03:49 pm
Title: Chapter 9c
i loved it, but got to admit the angel sex wanting part from a curtain blonde. really not liking. i mean i understand it, i get it. but i'm glad she's moved on to someone a hell of a lot better.
Reviewer: Puddinhead
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/2011 - 04:23 pm
Title: Chapter 8
I had to come back to review this chapter :D I felt badly that I just plowed through them and didn't review and this one really stood out for many reasons but mainly - the conversations with Travers were brilliant. And the bit where she invites him as boyfriend instead of bodyguard (and his trepedation just before the invite was wonderful) Go you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed
Date: 04/09/2011 - 01:00 pm
Title: Chapter 9b
I won't pester you by commenting on every single chapter of a story that you wrote years ago, but I had to say something about this one.
I think you were very brave to tackle this and I hope that the community didn't give you shit about it. Just writing about a threesome is tricky - keeping track of everyones limbs and emotions - to say nothing about the balance of emotions with these three in particular. Great job! (I couldn't have done it!) Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! I went through a lot of soul searching before including it, but the plot bunnies simply refused to be denied.
Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed
Date: 04/08/2011 - 07:29 pm
Title: Chapter 4b
My favorite thing here was having Spike and Dru enter dance contests in the Great Depression. It fits perfectly :)
Author's Response: I thought so. Not much entertainment around in the depression and we all know how bored Spike can get...
Reviewer: Puddinhead Signed
Date: 04/08/2011 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 2
So many bits to like here that I know I'll leave some stuff out! :( The family bit at the end was charming. And the "I didn't know I could fly" bit was very funny. Naturally gentle angel bashing all the way through is the way to my heart. Also the *singing*! Wonderful stuff :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I always love it when Spike sings, I wished they'd let him sing more on the show, James has such a lovely voice. I don't hate Angel, that's why he isn't really a 'baddy' in this fic, but he can be a prize jerk, so I had to get the odd dig in...
Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed
Date: 04/21/2010 - 06:05 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Well,I guess the cat's out of the bag now!! And nobody staked Spike for it?! Even better!! Spike helping Buffy find her inner strength was great - hopefully she can appreciate what he's doing for her and pay him back - somehow!! ;-)
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.21
Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed
Date: 04/21/2010 - 02:12 am
Title: Chapter 2
OH - the begining was soooo funny! I loved Spike cooking - very cool - and Fred - you got her perfectly! I love Spike changing the nappy, too - hilarious! Reading the directions . . LOL !! Then being so sweet and singing the lullaby to Dawn . . .ahhhhh . . .I love that song - especially when Spike sings it! - of course! I'm a litlte worried why Angel is being so nice, though . . . Angel nice to Spike . . . could be
"not of the good" . . . Guess I'll just have to read on to find out! Great chapter! I really liked it!
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.21
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed
Date: 04/19/2010 - 01:46 am
Title: Chapter 1
Great start! All kinds of possiblities - including saving Connor from Holtz and the hell dimension and maybe having a Connor we can all like rather than the one he became in the hell dimension. Great take on the spiked blood too - love that Spike could taste it! And Giles is calling Spike? Cool! And a prophecy .. . wow - lots of avenues for wonderfulness here! Excellent!
-Passion4Spike
2010.04.19
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was my very first attempt at writing anything and I know it has flaws, so your kind words mean a lot to me. When I've finished the last story in the 'Coincidences' 'verse, which is what I'm currently working on, I intend to go back and tidy this one up a bit.
Reviewer: spuffy chick
Anonymous
Date: 01/23/2010 - 11:59 am
Title: Chapter 9c
loved it! i'll definitely read some more of your writings.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! there are 3 sequels so far and a fourth in the works...
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:30 am
Title: Chapter 9c
Bloody Hell That was fantastic! I love your Spike! can I take him home and keep him?
Reviewer: Ivy la Sangrienta
Anonymous
Date: 04/03/2007 - 05:02 am
Title: Chapter 9c
Hi!
Wow, I really liked it! As I was reading the beginning, I remembered reading it before, but I never got past the 3rd chapter (as it was posted on Bloody Awful Gutter group). I must say it got better and better as I read along. There were only a few things that troubled me. But I love the way you've inserted little hints and stuff in the text, all inconspicuous like. I'm sure that Dawn's driving skills, for example, will come in handy as I delve on to the sequels...
Thanks for a great read. I love your Spike. Educated and intelligent yet raw and sexy, gentle and loving as well as insolent and rude all at once.. Not many fanfic writers manage to make him as multifaceted as you. In most fics he is sadly one-dimentional, as well as the other characters.
And I do hope Buffy will tell me she loves him BEFORE he gets his soul...
I'm gonna carry on with the sequels in a bit...
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Joyce
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 10:44 pm
Title: Chapter 9c
I'm not for threesomes particularly... Angel. I think this is out of character for Spike to agree to this What was the purpose anywayl?!. After all, Spike objected to sharing Drusilla with Angelus.
Reviewer: Joyce
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 10:22 pm
Title: Chapter 9a
Angel certainly got an eyeful!
Reviewer: Joyce
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 12:28 pm
Title: Chapter 4b
Uh, Xander is adept at magic. He did a bang up job summoning Sweet! I wonder if there will be consequences re his smashing the crystal.
Reviewer: Joyce
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 12:08 pm
Title: Chapter 4a
The poetry you cited is so apt for the plot line. And I also appreciate your correct spelling. So many fanfics misspell "lose"!
Reviewer: Joyce
Anonymous
Date: 12/25/2006 - 10:13 am
Title: Chapter 2
Another good chappie. One thing I'm wondering about...how did Spike know of Wesley's previous involvement in a triangle? Did I miss something on the show?
