Reviewer: Evie
Anonymous
Date: 05/19/2007 - 12:46 am
Title: Passion and Force
White hot with a beautiful ending. Top notch.
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 05:09 pm
Title: Passion and Force
I like it, especially with the poem at the end.
Reviewer: hwesta
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:59 am
Title: Passion and Force
very hot story with a sweet ending :)
Reviewer: Kimmie
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:23 am
Title: Passion and Force
That was spectacular ... especially the ending. Joss sure could have used you.
Reviewer: annefan
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 07:27 am
Title: Passion and Force
great job, loved it!
Reviewer: Lisa
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 05:34 am
Title: Passion and Force
I fail to understand why so many people think crudity is 'hot'.
This is not erotic it is simply poorly punctuated, badly-written vulgarity. If you spent a little more time on your writing and a little less time trying to cram in as many crude terms as you possibly could it MIGHT have stood a chance of being a decent fic.
Reviewer: sue
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:49 am
Title: Passion and Force
Well done. You mixed all the elements just right: the passion, hate, passion, struggle, passion, dominance, passion, submission, passion - with the slightest touch of tenderness that ultimately retreats as she falls asleep, and the wide-awake Spike, stunned by the rapture and the overnight events, and fearful of knowing that it could be all downhill from here. Before, hope sort of sprung eternal; now, he'd reached that peak. Was she going to topple his dreams?
I love the Yeats poem. Spike whispers this heartfelt entreaty and here is the man reacting to the woman. Unfortunately, as we all know, it is that crude, unnecessary comment from the vampire to the slayer, that he utters a few hours later, which causes Buffy to do her worst. "Convenient" is the word she uses to tread on Spike's dream, followed up with slugging him in the mouth and leaving him behind.
A great piece, the tone very reminiscent of the scenes from Smashed and Wrecked. Thanks!
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2006 - 03:25 am
Title: Passion and Force
Really enjoyed this, especially how it ended. Had a lump in my throat!
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:53 pm
Title: Passion and Force
absolutely loved it
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:40 pm
Title: Passion and Force
if only spike's big mouth hadn't ruined the morning after. not to say that buffy didn't say anything hurtful either but....anyway, great job. loved it.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:22 pm
Title: Passion and Force
Damn that was hot...that's exactly how I pictured it happening. You're a fantastic writer and I am really looking forward to reading more from you.