Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 02:19 am
Title: Chapter Four
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Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 01:29 am
Title: Chapter One
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Reviewer: Lyzzybelle Signed
Date: 06/23/2012 - 11:33 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Excellent job!
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 04/05/2012 - 03:19 pm
Title: Chapter Eighteen
I like the story, despite the numerous spelling, punctuation, vocabulary and grammar errors. After a vigorous editing, this story could be truly great!
Reviewer: Lambean Signed
Date: 03/07/2012 - 01:59 am
Title: Chapter Fourteen
I hate him right now. He's being such a jerk. She has a instinctive reaction then immediately tries to reassure him. He however purposely hurts her when he knows she's suffering. I hope he has to ask for her forgiveness
Reviewer: Tester Signed
Date: 12/18/2011 - 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter One
This is a test of the reviewing feature...(Pari)
Reviewer: lilashannah Signed
Date: 02/17/2011 - 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
That was one hell of a ride!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Judyth
Anonymous
Date: 02/03/2011 - 02:19 am
Title: Chapter Three
I love the way you've gotten them into such trouble and managed to keep them in character!
Author's Response: Thanks Judyth! I hope you are planning to continue on, there's much more in store!!!!
Reviewer: Catrine
Anonymous
Date: 04/13/2010 - 07:27 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Great story:):) I read through all of it now and it was extremely good.I would have loved to read more of it:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much Catrine! I'm glad that the story pulled you in enough to read from start to finish!
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 03/09/2010 - 08:55 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Great story! Loved every minute! I'm a bit puzzled by repeated references to 'frozen ground', though. Was Sunnydale having an unusually cold season? Oh, and Buffy's name is Buffy not Elizabeth - but apart from that, great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed. I did't know that Buffy's true name is Buffy not Elizabeth. You learn something new everyday. I lived in Southern California for two years, where it is alluded that Sunnydale is, and it does get pretty cold during the winter. Maybe not on the lines of the rest of the country, but the ground does get pretty solid, at least in the desert. Hence the reference to frozen ground.
Reviewer: -jay-
Anonymous
Date: 02/20/2010 - 09:53 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
that was greatttt =D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad that you liked!
Reviewer: Poodle Signed
Date: 02/11/2010 - 10:39 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This....story..was...beautiful!!!1
Author's Response: Thank you Poodle!
Reviewer: Kristy B
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/2010 - 08:50 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
First off, I loved the story. You've taken what most authors seem to consider a one-shot story idea and turned it into a full length! And not only that, you've managed to make it sexy and engaging with a touch of sweetness.
I will admit to having one small beef. The way you continued to mention the color of their eyes (especially Buffy's) got a teeny bit grating.
Other then that, I enjoyed it very much. It was without a doubt one of the best Halloween Costume stories I've ever read!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed! Thank you for your imput about the eye color. I need all types of reviews, they help immensely. Each one I take what the reader says and use it. This will help tremendously in my future stories! Thanks again!
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 02/09/2010 - 11:18 am
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i've just recently started looking at this cite, and this tale was very intriguing and mesmerizing - not too slow, not too fast, enough time for it to be true to the characters and their soulness (for lack of a better word).
Author's Response: *blush* thanks so much for enjoying my story. Welcome to the site and I hope that you stay!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/08/2010 - 02:36 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
aww that's so sweet. like a selfish cow you know i'd like more fluff lol but i totally loved this story. it was great! well written and good plot. Def different at point where this story has def been written before but you took this story and made it your own. great job :)
Author's Response: That's alright, no such thing for being selfish. I enjoy writing fluff...sometimes. More of an angst girl myself. But hopefully you'll keep reading and enjoy the fluff that I write! I appreciate all your reviews!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/08/2010 - 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty
i guess i was kinda expecting it but wow the imagery of Spike as he feels Buffy being pulled away from him? That was intense. Really great chapter tho. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/08/2010 - 01:21 pm
Title: Chapter Seventeen
wow that was intense. i don't like whatever they sprinkled on the corpses. that doesn't bode well. i got a bad feeling about this Toto lol. great job tho :)
Author's Response: Keep reading you'll see what it is
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/08/2010 - 01:50 am
Title: Chapter Sixteen
lol thanksgiving dinner was too funny. Spike and Buffy are so naughty. and let not doubt that Joyce was def having some naughty thoughts of her own. i mean how could she not? Hello, gorgeous! lol i like this little reprieve before the super angst of angelus being the douche he is. sign guess that fluffy has to end sometime. really liking this story :)
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing Spike as both William the good boy that Joyce would love and the naughty Spike. Whipcream and Spike...say no more!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 - 11:55 pm
Title: Chapter Ten
I think the last comment by Spike is really interesting. it's def foreshadowing some kind of change to later come from him. he get blood and body but u know he's gonna want more.
Author's Response: I loved writing that line! I could totally picture Spike saying that to Angel!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 - 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter Eight
Well that's an interesting twist. what does willow have to do with this and what spell is she planning that crazy Dru? ps i loved the scene of buffy and spike in her room. truly wonderful :) so sweet i loved it!
Author's Response: Keep reading...you will see what the crazy chick has in mind!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 - 09:00 pm
Title: Chapter Four
very interesting reaction she's having to this claiming bond. it's like their becoming parts of one another. there's a way to explain that comment but it would take forever lol. but def saying great job! this is really interesting
Author's Response: Thank you...I'm glad that you are enjoying
Reviewer: shelly
Anonymous
Date: 02/07/2010 - 08:59 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
very nice. thanks for keeping up with it and seeing it through. i enjoyed your story 100%
Author's Response: Thank you for your support!
Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 - 08:19 pm
Title: Chapter One
Ooo that's interesting. I like why she had to change. seriously that costume was redic! but that last line. very interesting. i'm intrigued hehe :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that I have you intrigued...read on!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 02/07/2010 - 04:44 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This has been a really good and wellwritten story. It has an interesting storyline, some sweet moments, some angst and a good ending. I hope you will write more stories.
Author's Response: Magnus374, I will continue to write. My muse will not let my mind rest if I don't. I hope I will see many more reviews on my other stories...hint hint...HEHE!!!!
Reviewer: nichbuket
Anonymous
Date: 02/07/2010 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Truly enticing and lovely tale. Brava!
Author's Response: I blush!
