Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2012 - 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 11: Heroes
I love the additions that you made! It was nice reading more detail about how she is starting to feel about William! The friendship between the two are developing nicely.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/08/2012 - 12:01 pm
Title: Chapter 10: Science Projects
Liam is such a jerk! Good for William for being brave enough to save a girl that was in trouble.
Dawn ure is a character. I wonder if this life will be enough for Buffy or will she miss the slaying?
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/07/2012 - 04:50 pm
Title: Chapter 10: Science Projects
Nice.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/06/2012 - 05:42 am
Title: Chapter 9: School Woes
A nice slow build up.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 05/05/2012 - 02:23 pm
Title: Chapter 9: School Woes
Oh right, monopoly! Ha, sorry. I love the slow development of William and Buffy. This story is so sweet.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/02/2012 - 04:47 pm
Title: Chapter 8: Bronzing
It's nice how she tries to get to know William.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/29/2012 - 06:19 am
Title: Chapter 7: Just an Art Project
Good Buffy thoughts.
Reviewer: Guest
Anonymous
Date: 04/29/2012 - 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 7: Just an Art Project
Sorry but really, what they had for dinner?? Drying their clothes is this really all there is in her life??
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 04/28/2012 - 09:00 pm
Title: Chapter 7: Just an Art Project
Again, I really like the sister bonding.
A happy Dawn is a non-whiny Dawn, lol.
I like how you gave Buffy the talent of an artist. I liked imagining what her drawing would have looked like.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/26/2012 - 05:18 pm
Title: Chapter 6: Sisterly Bonding
The bonding was nice to see. It's also good to see Buffy realize things she has to change if she gets back.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 04/26/2012 - 06:06 am
Title: Chapter 6: Sisterly Bonding
I really liked this chapter because those two really did need some bonding!
Reviewer: Veronica
Anonymous
Date: 04/25/2012 - 08:38 pm
Title: Chapter 5: Movies and Ice Cream
You know, I've always wondered what Spike's response would have been to Buffy's question about finances. Makes sense that Spike would offer and Buffy's refusal based on pride. Seems like William would be in love with Buffy no matter what alternate universe they're in! Please keep writing, I'm really enjoying this. =)
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/25/2012 - 06:23 am
Title: Chapter 5: Movies and Ice Cream
Nice to see how Buffy tries to fit in in this new world.
Reviewer: A
Anonymous
Date: 04/24/2012 - 12:28 am
Title: Chapter 5: Movies and Ice Cream
Even with having parents together and going to college it seems like Buffy starting to miss being a slayer. I know this is Buffy's wish world but I would like to know a little more about William and what he is thinking? Good job.
Reviewer: sallyntmare
Anonymous
Date: 04/21/2012 - 09:20 am
Title: Chapter 4: What Grounded Means!
I loved the edits you made! Also, thank you for the kind words. I am happy to beta for you.
There has been a lot of wishverse stories, but yours is unique, I think. I havent read one that made everyone all human. I'm anxious ot read how Buffy and Spike's relationship grows!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/20/2012 - 11:41 am
Title: Chapter 3: A Carefully Planned Rescue
She reall hates this situation, as expected.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 04/19/2012 - 06:35 am
Title: Chapter 3: A Carefully Planned Rescue
Ha, I'm really enjoying this story, Hope to read more soon.
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 04/19/2012 - 06:33 am
Title: Chapter 2: True Faces
Dawn having a crush on Angel and not Spike? There's a new one, but that'll change when she meets William probably!
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 04/19/2012 - 06:30 am
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
I really like this idea for a story. I'm a sucker for shy William :)
Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed
Date: 04/19/2012 - 06:28 am
Title: Prologue: The Wish
I like the first chapter!
Reviewer: Photographynut Signed
Date: 08/20/2011 - 06:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
Just found your fic and am loving it! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 08/20/2011 - 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
now this is interesting. so sorry anya had to go through all that pain.
here's to hoping buffy realizes what a gift she's been given, and not to take it for granted, or be smug about it, or something along those lines ...
looking forward to more!
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 08/19/2011 - 10:12 am
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
I like the potential of this story! William needs to be more confident, like the Spike he was born to become. I hurt for Anya and the memory of her pain from HB. Look forward to more!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 08/19/2011 - 07:30 am
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
Buffys wish changed the world to an everyone is a human one, I wonder if she really will like that.
Reviewer: Less
Anonymous
Date: 08/19/2011 - 03:37 am
Title: Chapter 1: Is This a Dream?
Very cute! I want to read more!!
