Reviewer: lindsay
Anonymous
Date: 08/31/2016 - 02:53 pm
Title: Chapter 1
I love this!
Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 1
20160131 junda
Reviewer: DidiSummers Signed
Date: 11/20/2013 - 11:15 am
Title: Epilogue
Hi!
Just found your story, I like it... Great ending, I really believe B and S were dust, thanks it was not true... =D
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/17/2012 - 01:46 pm
Title: Epilogue
Interesting lark, but I had problems with this story. Spike's way too vicious and unfeeling for me (even when he was full evil on BtVS he wasn't all Angelus-esque like he is here). Xander's also unbelievably vicious here, in his own way.
The writing itself could use a good clean-up, too; several spelling/grammare/etc. errors and confusing syntax.
Reviewer: Emi
Anonymous
Date: 06/27/2009 - 04:11 pm
Title: Epilogue
Interesting choice with the soul/chip thing, going with the chip as everyone thought in the beginning. Two things annoyed me a bit though, first its the daughter/son thing, and then there are all the bloody questionmarks, why are they there, in the middle of scentences? O.o
Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed
Date: 02/06/2009 - 11:39 pm
Title: Epilogue
very interesting...different from the others but i liked it a lot! i hope you would write a sequel.
Reviewer: Elena
Anonymous
Date: 12/09/2008 - 11:01 am
Title: Epilogue
Interesting idea. I'm surprised more authors haven't written of Spike returning without the chip rather than with a soul. I know you said that this was one of your first pieces--maybe sometime you would expand it to go into more detail of Giles and Anya being supportive and perhaps a confrontation with Willow. You don't really say--are Buffy and Spike evil or do they still fight demons when the occasion arises? Also, big continuity error-Buffy tells Spike they are having a girl in chapter 2. I know sonograms can be wrong on gender, but ????
thanks for sharing your story and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
Elena
Reviewer: Cate
Anonymous
Date: 11/03/2008 - 08:00 pm
Title: Epilogue
I don't know what's up with the negative reviews. I absolutely loved it! I really love how you write, and how you wrote Spike is just so sexy abate just a little creepy lol!
The only thing I don't get is didn't Buffy say they were having a daughter? Is there a reason for this or just a lapse in memory lol. What I think ould be wonderful would be another fic on this to go into morre detail about their lives post the ending before the epilogue and just try to hash out some of the confusion.
Again always a pleasure reading your work. Well Done!
Reviewer: anon
Anonymous
Date: 06/21/2007 - 09:17 pm
Title: Epilogue
I loved this story! So glad you didn't soul up Spike. I saw the response to a review that you'd decided to make the baby a boy for the epi's sake, bt I have to ask... Buffy was 5 months preggers when she was turned, so why did it take her a "year or so" to give birth to the boy? Was he a second child maybe? Anyway, I loved the turned Buffy aspect, and am perfectly happy to believe their baby survived the experience. I would love the hell out of a sequel though!!! More.. More ... More, please?
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 01/04/2007 - 11:16 am
Title: Epilogue
I realy love it but in the second chapetr you said it was a gilr but in the eplouge itš boy, not that I complain but i just wonder what hapennd whit the girl
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:17 pm
Title: Epilogue
Interesting werry interesting I like it
Reviewer: sc
Anonymous
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:28 am
Title: Epilogue
i liked this story even though it goes against the usual plot line. i think thats what i liked about it.
Reviewer: Jags
Anonymous
Date: 10/17/2006 - 05:04 pm
Title: Epilogue
That was really good but uh weren't they supposed to have a girl? Still very good.
Reviewer: vicki
Anonymous
Date: 09/01/2006 - 02:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1
i don't usually leave a review that is negative, but i have to with this story. it had great potential but i feel that you just reallly totally dropped the ball with this one. and seriously? spike vamping buffy while she was pregnant and that didn't affect the baby? just can't see that happening EVER - Hellmouth or no! I actually wanted this story to be a lot darker than it was. and the ending with their son (you did indicate they had a daughter) visiting dawn - it was just a totally limp way to end this story. sorry. like i said, this story had a lot of potential. maybe you could take a whack at re-working it? but i give you props for writing and posting - that's more than i do.
Reviewer: StrawberryJam Signed
Date: 04/04/2006 - 02:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. Intense argument, well written.
Reviewer: zoe
Anonymous
Date: 09/19/2005 - 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 1
I honestly don't much care for it. It' s not because spike isn't "nice". It's because Spike isn't spike. I don't feel that killing any of buffy's friends is something spike would have done, and I don't think it' ssomething buffy would have tolerated...remember, when someone in the scooby gang goes evil, they help them.
The first chapter...parts of it were believable...he DOES tend to lash out when he's hurting...but it went above and beyond who the character had become...hell he was more human in season two than in this story. I just don't buy it.
Reviewer: Brittany
Anonymous
Date: 07/13/2005 - 06:39 pm
Title: Epilogue
that was a little dark yet cute fic and i love it!!!! i wish you would write more to it!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Aseret
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/2005 - 06:15 pm
Title: Epilogue
Er, I'm really confused... Didn't you say that the baby was a girl?? And if Spike went to Africa didn't he get his soul??Cause then he wouldn't be that mean.. or did he just get the chip removed?? And why did they want Dawn to think they were dead? Anyways it was really good, a bit confusing in some parts, but an overall good job ;)
Reviewer: Melly
Anonymous
Date: 06/07/2005 - 12:54 pm
Title: Epilogue
I can't believe that it has taken me so long to read this one. I loved it!!! I want to suggest that Buffy and Spike telling bedtime stories to Robert's children would be a great way to fill us in on the past 60 years. This one really begs for a sequel if you should ever have the time and/or inclination. And a really big THANK YOU for killing Xander, my only complaint is that it wasn't painful enough!
Reviewer: Marissa
Anonymous
Date: 05/09/2005 - 11:42 am
Title: Epilogue
Good ending but inprevius chapther you wrott their child was a girl, no a boy.
Author's Response: Bad my, you caught that...sorry but I decided to go with a boy because of how I wrote the ending. Thought it would be more fun to have a male Spike clone pull the wool over the last Summers living!
Luv, Spuf
Reviewer: Ariel Dawn Signed
Date: 05/09/2005 - 08:44 am
Title: Epilogue
Nice ending! totally liked the whole pull one over on Dawn thing.
Author's Response: Thanks, the epilogue is new. I rewrote this older fic of mine and added it.
Luv, Spuf
Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed
Date: 05/09/2005 - 07:36 am
Title: Epilogue
I could have sworn I reviewed this...anyway, really loved this little story. Tricksy kids, letting Dawn think they're dead, lol. Very sweet. =)
Author's Response: Thank you. I added the epilogue to give it closure.
Luv, Spuf
Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever
Anonymous
Date: 05/09/2005 - 02:57 am
Title: Epilogue
loved it
Author's Response: Thanks, I love naughty Buffy and Spike!
Luv, Spuf
Reviewer: Julia
Anonymous
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 2
Cool story. Different from the others. I kinda like Spike all evil.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/02/2005 - 04:12 pm
Title: Chapter 2
This Xander deserved what he got .... Glad that the child will live; I thought Spike would have killed his child in turning Buffy. :)
