Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 05/30/2009 - 08:55 am
Title: Chapter 31/Epilogue
great story! i really liked the references to the buffy before she came to sunnydale and to your other stories
Reviewer: BlackFire
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2009 - 11:00 pm
Title: Chapter 29
Ahh, sorry I haven't reviewed since chapter 1, but I just seriously could not stop reading. Seriously amazing. Now I understand why chapter 1 was at such a fast pace. But I personally think it would help a lot if you still slowed down the overall pace. But I understand its really hard to pace yourself when you have all these ideas jumping out at you, believe me. I'm really happy she's finally being referred to as Buffy. Beth just....it doesn't work the same, you know?
Reviewer: BlackFire
Anonymous
Date: 03/25/2009 - 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Well, I just read the first Chapter, I felt that the story line was really interesting, but it was really really rushed.
Author's Response: Chapter one is supposed to be rushed, this is a spuffy story and he doesn't show up till season 2. I didn't want to spend too much time in Season 1.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 16
The way Cassie handles Angel is exactly how I wanted Buffy to handle him,
Cassie kicked Angel in the shin. "Quit brooding," she hissed. "It's your own fault that Spike and Xander don't like you."
I really do enjoy the friendship between Xander and Spike, it suits. I'm getting curious about Dru and the memory dust, see you think I might have forgotten but I haven't! See, look at me, all paying attention to plot points and whatnot! I deserve a cookie. And of course you deserve cookies as well, a whole plate of virtual cookies or a flowering onion.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 16
The way Cassie handles Angel is exactly how I wanted Buffy to handle him,
Cassie kicked Angel in the shin. "Quit brooding," she hissed. "It's your own fault that Spike and Xander don't like you."
I really do enjoy the friendship between Xander and Spike, it suits. I'm getting curious about Dru and the memory dust, see you think I might have forgotten but I haven't! See, look at me, all paying attention to plot points and whatnot! I deserve a cookie. And of course you deserve cookies as well, a whole plate of virtual cookies or a flowering onion.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/24/2009 - 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Faith and Riley! I never really liked either one - well, I liked to dislike them - but them together is very nice in an odd way. I think this line might have made that entire scene a favorite of mine;
"Ma'am, Finn's from Iowa. He doesn't swing that way."
Also, I really like the way you are slowly and subtely interweaving the normal storyline of season three, bits of seasons four, and the chances in Beth/Specter and Spike.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2009 - 11:16 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Memory dust? See, I was going to got to bed but you have me clicking the 'next' button.
You must be evil.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/23/2009 - 11:02 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Ohh, I just love it when people play with dimensions! This is containing so many of my favorite themes. I am curious about Anya/Giles/Xander.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 11:54 pm
Title: Chapter 12
Heavenly chapter! I'm not sure what bit I loved most but these were just amazing;
* Dalton calling Beth Miss Beth
* Cordy at the sleepover
* Spike thinking Miss Edith is possessed
* "Hell should be full of nice fiery flames right? He couldn't have tripped into one head first?" The visions in Spike's head made him smirk gleefully.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 11:40 pm
Title: Chapter 11
You are tuning me into a Speth shipper or a Spikter shipper, not too sure of the correct termonology here.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 11:24 pm
Title: Chapter 10
The description of Spike at the bar and the ending of him being torn was priceless. Also, still in love with Dru. You have a knack for writing her.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:37 pm
Title: Chapter 9
The Specter spoke! And Spike is gone! I need to read more right now (work is, for lack of a mature term) stupid - as I have to leave now.
Brilliant by the way.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 8
It was a great touch having Spike left handed.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:26 am
Title: Chapter 7
"...criminally insane piece of artificial intelligence" has a very nice ring to it, I just like the way it sort of rolls around in my head.
Curious how far you are going to wind up going seasonally, if we are going to get to Faith and if she would in fact be the called Slayer - especially with a big hunk of the plot dependant on Dru.
Really good so far, I'm sort of hooked.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/22/2009 - 01:13 am
Title: Chapter 6
I'm simply in love with your Dru!
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed
Date: 03/21/2009 - 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 5
Your Dru was perfect, the diction was spot on. Love how you have Spike almost pushing Dru towards Angel a bit as well.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed
Date: 03/21/2009 - 12:00 pm
Title: Chapter 4
I just loved this chapter. Spike's efforts are both endearing, sweet, and true to character.
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed
Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:44 am
Title: Chapter 3
I was slightly nervous about the little girl outfit but you made it touching and adorable.
I shall no longer doubt you :)
Reviewer: olinka
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/2009 - 04:20 pm
Title: Chapter 31/Epilogue
it was quite interesting, though.. too sugarly, I'd say. Anyways, points for originality :)
Reviewer: msspikester
Anonymous
Date: 03/20/2009 - 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 31/Epilogue
I finally finished!!! I loved your use of the many episodes of BtVS, and the whole Spike and Specter relationship. Well done in my book! GL in all future endeavors. Looking forward to more of your fics!
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2009 - 07:32 pm
Title: Chapter 31/Epilogue
fantastic story, loved every word of it..stayed up late just to read it....
thanks for sharing
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2009 - 03:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1
i can't think of words to say how brilliant this story is...love every word and off for more
Reviewer: jamies_lady
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2009 - 12:18 pm
Title: Chapter 11
great twist...loving this and off to read more
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2009 - 11:22 am
Title: Chapter 2
Last chapter I was intigued, now I am hooked. I wasn't expecting Luke but it works - I am so happy you didn't go with Spike or Dru, I was originally all about Penn for this.
I'm very interested in the speaking in tounge bits that only seems to happen as the Spector - Beth's two halves warring with eachother? Spike can understand her because on some level he understands her as a person? Shooting in the dark wtih these.
Off to read!
Reviewer: ArabellaElfie
Anonymous
Date: 03/19/2009 - 11:01 am
Title: Chapter 1
So far this is an excellent bit of plotty goodness!
I really enjoyed the way you broke down most of season one into smaller paragraphs and did a side by side comparision of Beth and Cassie.
I also believe that Cassie is working out very nicely, the combination of her personality with the same external forces that made Buffy so different from other Slayers makes her sort of a askew Buffy if you will. The quotes that get that little tilt or the action of a more obedient Slayer than Buffy was just works for me.
Onto the familiar bond with the Master, which I did not see coming by the way, brilliant! I'm curious who it is. I'm sure we can write off Angel and I want to say it isn't Darla as she has been with the Master for the last few years in canon (which you seem to be following for most of the plot, it's just with a twist), so that leaves Dru, Spike, Penn, or a random minion. As it's just a relationship with the Master it is not necessary for them to be descended from the Master-Darla-Angelus-Dru/Penn-Spike line.
Off to read more, I need answers!
