Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 01/02/2014 - 07:55 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
Wonderful two part series - so glad that you chose to do a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 01/02/2014 - 07:34 pm
Title: Nineteen and Twenty
love your last Angel line -
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: ILoveLamp
Anonymous
Date: 10/03/2012 - 07:21 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
That line of Angels', something like "I don't have a chip, just a soul same as yours" was perfectly stated and innocuous while also being ominous as hell.
I loved that Giles didn't just let his theory about Spike an his chip drop here like he did in the show. It always bothered me that he seemed to hold onto the anger after Spike dismissed him the first time. It was almost like he took his ball and went home after Spike didn't immediately grab ahold of hi olive branch.
I mean where was his watcherly patience.
The thing that i always dug about Buffy and Spike is that they seemed to understand each other (maybe at times they didnt want to but...) in a way that no one else got either of them.
While you made that understanding much more obvious than any ponit during the show, I feel like you still hit the more subtle nuances of that understanding.
It was a fun read, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm quite fond of this little fic and get all excited when someone likes it. :)
Reviewer: Sam
Anonymous
Date: 07/29/2012 - 07:15 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
Loved loved loved it. So glad I found it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you found it too. :) Thanks for telling me you liked it.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 07/24/2012 - 01:12 am
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
I love this so much - have read it several times. Love the friendship turned to lovers. Loved Lorne in this story. Love how they fight together as partners and equals. Wish Buffy had officially broken up with Riley sooner. Love Angel's line near the end to Riley that he doesn't have a chip; just a soul, same as his. Beautiful.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for telling me so. It's one of my favs, but it doesn't get much attention. :)
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/25/2011 - 03:21 am
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
Great story, I like that Angel came to help.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/25/2011 - 03:07 am
Title: Nineteen and Twenty
The last thing Angel said here, that was perfect.
Author's Response: Glad you approved. :)
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/24/2011 - 03:50 pm
Title: Nine and Ten
The bittersweet sadnes feeling in these chapters is done in a very good way.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you thought so. :)
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/24/2011 - 02:53 pm
Title: Three and Four
They did get a really good time, but they must be cursed with bad luck since Angel managed to be there that day.
Author's Response: Ah well, they had fun anyway. :)
Reviewer: cia
Anonymous
Date: 12/29/2010 - 04:41 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
really really enjoyed, but felt there could be another chapter, possibly a bit in the future so i know how stuff works out for them! so good tho :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for telling me so. :)
Reviewer: yubi
Anonymous
Date: 06/20/2009 - 08:22 am
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
wonderful story. i really enjoyed it
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you did.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:53 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
Got what he wanted. A lovely ending. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:38 pm
Title: Nineteen and Twenty
"It’s just a soul. Just like yours.” Guess some souls are better quality than others. Gotta say that Spike's wins hands down. Glad he's getting his comeuppance.
Author's Response: Yup. Much comeuppance! :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 01:29 am
Title: Seventeen and Eighteen
Well, it seems the cat is well out of the bag. Gotta wonder how they're going to curtail this whole Riley situation. Quite interesting indeed. Past time for bed. Saving the rest for later.
Author's Response: I hope you like the rest. :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 01:14 am
Title: Fifteen and Sixteen
The way things should be. Fabulous.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:52 am
Title: Thirteen and Fourteen
Riley needs to be out of the picture, and Buffy needs to have a serious reality check where that's concerned. Poor Spike.
Author's Response: He'll be alright. I promise. :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:34 am
Title: Eleven and Twelve
“I need to know if what I’m feeling for you is me or the claim.”
“Which do you want it to be, Buffy?”
Damn, thats some emotion going on there. Gotta wonder myself too. No girl should turn away that vampire. Just isn't right. And Riley is an oaf. Just throwing that in.
Author's Response: LOL He is an oaf. Which will become clear quite soon.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:18 am
Title: Nine and Ten
Who's there!? That cant be good. Loved the whole, “Me William, you Buffy,” part. To bad it can't be that simple.
Author's Response: Yes, sigh. It's too bad they couldn't do that.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/25/2008 - 12:00 am
Title: Seven and Eight
Poor thing having to realize an ending to their perfect summer. Never could be easy between those two. I wonder what Joyce will say. Glad I found this again.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading it again. It's one of my favorites, but it doesn't get much attention. alas.
Reviewer: Ariadne Signed
Date: 08/26/2007 - 05:00 am
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
Loved your story from the beginning to the end! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so. I'm quite fond of this one myself, but it doesn't get much attention, so I've been afraid I was the only one who liked it. LOL
Reviewer: unknown
Anonymous
Date: 05/21/2007 - 05:24 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
I LOVED THIS STORY! OMG! It was perfect! And i liked the presquel as well, but this was much better!
Author's Response: Thank you - nothing like a bit of plot to make a story better! :)
Reviewer: kitty fluffakit
Anonymous
Date: 05/14/2007 - 09:17 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
but buffy hasnt said "i love you" to spike! how can it end?!
Author's Response: I think he pretty much has the picture - what with her accepting the claim...She'll say it eventually, I'm sure. Thanks for reading. ;)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/2007 - 01:15 am
Title: Five and Six
Another lovely chapter. Hope maybe she decides he really is the one for her. More to read later. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Awww - what other choice can she make...eventually? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/2007 - 12:46 am
Title: Three and Four
Of course she is. And leave it to Angel to try to ruin any fun shared by her and Spike. Great chapters.
Author's Response: LOL thanks!
Reviewer: sta
Anonymous
Date: 03/05/2007 - 07:39 pm
Title: Twenty-one and Twenty-two
I love everything that you have written and this story was no exception. It was so entertaining and engaging from start to finish. You really know how to keep the right balance of angst and joy to keep the story interesting and compelling. I love your ability to speak so clearly and accurately in the voices of the various characters - you capture them flawlessly. My one critique would have been to ask what happened to Dawn, but you fixed that up with a reference toward the end. Please keep producing more stories. I am utterly gleeful at the prospect of reading more of your writing, but the stories are so good that often I would rather read one of your stories again then some of the new stuff I find.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness! What a wonderful thing to say! I'm so glad you are enjoying my stories. I hope you continue to do so. :) Thank you so much for your comments.
