Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 08/06/2012 - 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 31
So excited to see what happens next! Great chapter!
Reviewer: PirateFreak87
Anonymous
Date: 08/05/2012 - 08:02 am
Title: Chapter 31
Can't wait to see how Spike explains the bet to Buffy! Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you're enjoying :)
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/2012 - 03:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Love this story!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, i will try!! :)
Reviewer: LK
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/2012 - 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 21
Are you even an actual human? For the most part your story is very well written. Just some of the social gender and other elements are off and unatural. You have weird issues with drinking, Joyce forbidding Buffy from seeing Spike. She's 17, one year from the age of majority. Plus turning Buffy suddenly stupid for the sake of the story. You have her assuming something very damaging based two men (Spike saying nothing) exchange in a scenario she walked in on half way through. Question mark.
Author's Response: Well personally i can tell you i have no "weird" (or uptight) issues with drinking, though i don't know what you construed as "weird". And I was not turning Buffy suddenly stupid for the sake of the tale. She has jumped into a relationship quickly, and she's crazy about Spike. Therefore a threat to said relationship would scare her very much, and yes she jumped to conclusions, but that my friend is telling of her still immature nature. Also, you have to remember Drusilla was everything to Spike at one point, and Buffy knows that. With what Angel said I don't feel it would be completely irrational for her to think what she did. And as for Joyce, i myself know MANY parents who hold different rules and have restrictive opinions on things they probably shoudn't. And Buffy is still a very good girl, she's always listened to her mom and her mom hasn't had a whole lot of trouble with raising her. As for whether or not I'm human, I can assure you that I am. And many others who (I assume) are also living breathing people enjoy this story and understand where I've taken it. I'm sorry you feel I've gotten sloppy with the plot.
Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed
Date: 07/27/2012 - 01:14 am
Title: Chapter 31
i love this story so much!!! cant wait to see what happens when they talk! thanks for the updates!!! (:
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much, im glad your enjoying the story!
Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed
Date: 07/10/2012 - 02:59 am
Title: Chapter 30
oh my god, what a cliff hanger!!!!! update soon. i love this story!!!
Author's Response: thank you, i will! :)
Reviewer: Erin_Jacqueline14
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2012 - 08:03 am
Title: Chapter 30
Oooowh its getting interesting lol. I love this story its personally a favourite of mine! Plzzz dnt end up being one of those authors that don't finish there stories as this one is a great story! Loved this chapter! Can't wait till the nxt chapter comes!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh no, i promise i will finish it! I was going to do that even if nobody was still interested lol But im thankful you reviewed and that you like this story! working on the new chapter now! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/2012 - 09:59 pm
Title: Chapter 30
I really do love this story. No matter how long I have to wait for updates, I'm still interested when I read it. Please keep it going!
Author's Response: thank you!!
Reviewer: lala
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/2012 - 08:13 am
Title: Chapter 30
amazing chapter :) haven't reviewed cause of pure laziness but this is an amazing story. Loving how you write these characters.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 07/03/2012 - 07:39 am
Title: Chapter 30
I'm certainly still following this wonderful story! So glad you've updated but very worried about what Buffy overheard. Thanks for continuing this fic and please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose
Anonymous
Date: 06/19/2012 - 03:50 am
Title: Chapter 2
Nice background on Buffy's boyfriends. Makes it easy to understand why she'd be afraid of getting hurt. And I love your treatment of Riley! I never did like that guy >:) Great job telling him off, Buffy! With any luck she'll get to smack him later. Ha ha Look forward to meeting your Spike soon. Nice start.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose
Anonymous
Date: 06/18/2012 - 05:54 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet beginning! You paint a vivid picture of cheerful small town life that I find really endearing. It's nice to think of Buffy having such a normal life. I also love what you've done with Dawn. Good use of her character & quite close to the way she was in her first year on the show. "Dawn catastrophe" made me laugh, as did the thought of Xander losing his lunch behind the gazebo. Super cute!
Author's Response: YAY thank you!!! :D
Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed
Date: 06/11/2012 - 04:47 pm
Title: Chapter 29
I'm sorry for your loss. There is no need to apologize. RL comes first. On another note this was a great chapter. I just hope that Spike doesn't mess everything up with Buffy trying to keep Joyce's secret. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you. & im glad you liked the chapter :)
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 05/17/2012 - 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 28
Teenage car sex... those were the days. :) Glad they are getting to feel how very right they are together. Such a shame that he's lying to her bout Drake. Hope that truth comes out soon. Sooner the better with that one. Thanks for the update. Hope you feel better. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed
Date: 05/15/2012 - 09:34 am
Title: Chapter 28
Been missing this story. But then you give us a chapter like this one... And all is forgiven. Lol.
Author's Response: OMGsh YAY! im so glad u liked it! :D
Reviewer: Alyssa
Anonymous
Date: 05/11/2012 - 11:45 pm
Title: Chapter 27
I love it. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Albie
Anonymous
Date: 05/02/2012 - 04:05 pm
Title: Chapter 27
Love the new banner, love the new chapter :)
Reviewer: bikey88chic Signed
Date: 05/01/2012 - 01:36 pm
Title: Chapter 27
Damn a cliffy. I was ready for the unrestrainted passion and urgency. Great chapter. I jus hope we get to read what was about to happen after the pounce.
Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed
Date: 05/01/2012 - 11:14 am
Title: Chapter 27
Yet again another great chapter. I'm anxious right along with Buffy about the circle. I hope that they enjoy themselves there. Update soon we will all be waiting for the smutty goodness. Lol ;-)
Reviewer: Mari
Anonymous
Date: 05/01/2012 - 11:04 am
Title: Chapter 1
oh, I wrote horrible, I'm still a little sleepy. Love the story
Reviewer: Mari
Anonymous
Date: 05/01/2012 - 11:02 am
Title: Chapter 27
I've been reading your story for a while now and I never reviewed it before, so now I tell you that I think it's great, I love the summer/teenager scene, and I always relationated with this song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8W9NJqUu6s
(it's from a Chilean band, the song it's called The Teenagers, it's in spanish but I think it fits perfect with your story, listen to ir)
Reviewer: Embers and Flame Signed
Date: 04/19/2012 - 10:09 am
Title: Chapter 26
Ha! It's hilarious that Buffy told Angel I just hope that doesn't come back to haunt her. As for Spike I think he should've told his dad. Then maybe his dad could've helped a bit more. It's a bad position for Spike to be in. I hope that Buffy understands. I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 04/19/2012 - 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 26
Glad our girl put Angel in his place, in front of his friends, no less. And Charles makes a good bit of sense, hope Joyce comes out before Spike implodes. Update soon!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 04/10/2012 - 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 25
Oh yeah, shit, meet fan. :) Poor Spike. He just has to focus on forgetting it, and politely encourage Joyce to hop to it and spill the beans. Do hope "Drake" is a nice guy. Don't need any domineering demon robot guys for Joyce in this universe. Update soon!
Reviewer: too_many_spike_posters Signed
Date: 04/09/2012 - 09:12 pm
Title: Chapter 24
Please post more and soon! I love how possessive he is!!
