Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 04/24/2017 - 07:39 pm
Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'
Story has potential, but needs some editing.
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 03/28/2017 - 05:24 am
Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'
Poor tortured Buffy and Spike!
Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 01:27 am
Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'
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Reviewer: Connie_3D
Anonymous
Date: 03/18/2015 - 08:32 am
Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'
You are an excellent writer, but you break the third wall to often to be taken seriously as when you do that, you drag the reader away from the story and put yourself in the middle. It is frustrating and annoying. Quite frankly, if it was not for that spark of something unique about your style, I would have stopped reading after the third chapter. Instead, I forced myself to re-engage after each interruption.
You characterizations where good with Xander, Rayne, Gunn, Lynsay, and Joyce. Althought Joyce was more potty mouth that she normally is. Buffy came across whiny and childish, Spike was not slick enough, Angel was too accepting, Willow to eager to bow to Gile and Xander, Giles would not have called in Rayne as he would already know that breaing the claim was impossible. Rayne might have volunteered, but I think he would have been working in the background on the down low, as that was always his mo. In general, Riley was just a piece of shit and correctly portray.
I'll be reading your more recent work, if any, for signs of growth. You have talent, you just need to mold it and learn your craft.
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 09/09/2014 - 04:08 am
Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'
NICE
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 12/17/2013 - 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'
I like your "manly" Spike - problem is that, in contrast, Buffy comes across as rather childish.
Reviewer: Pari Signed
Date: 07/04/2010 - 02:53 pm
Title: Chapter 5: 'Say It Again, Spike'
I have to admit honestly that this chapter (mainly towards the end) completely took me out of the zone I had been in when I started reading this. It kind of ruined it for, sorry but it did.
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 04/05/2010 - 05:19 pm
Title: Epilogue
this was definitely an interesting fic - i can't imagine buffy not living in denial; quite a shock for this fan. But enjoyed the bond between buffy and spike. as for the scoobies (except for oz), i'm surprised but not. after all, giles barely condoned angel and buffy together - not surprised he would do absolutely anything to ensure it didn't happen again; even if he had to sell his soul to the devil. which he did. he had to have know ethan would have his own agenda. as for xander - unfortunately, i can see him doing exactly this. willow - she's probably the saddest one. and poor oz ... i don't blame him a bit for leaving. he was truly a wonderful strengh for buffy and spike. and got such a kick out of the angel/spike dynamics - we got to see the hostility between them (as it was always there), but we also got to see the family loyalty - and that was sweet. it's a shame buffy and spike had to leave joyce behind .. enjoyed this very much!
Reviewer: Spikes KittyKat
Anonymous
Date: 01/16/2009 - 12:40 am
Title: Epilogue
Amazing story. I really enjoyed the ending. I love the way it was summed up in the form of a letter. I was sad to see how Oz disappeared never to be heard of again but I can totally understand why. Willow was misguided. Xander and Giles were just down right cruel. Surely Giles had to know the results before he got started in the whole idea! I enjoyed Angel in this story as well. His part was great. Allowed him to keep his character yet be sort of kind. Spike and Angel bonding was great. Anyway keep up the good writing!
Reviewer: sharon
Anonymous
Date: 12/20/2008 - 11:53 am
Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'
I Love Spike when he is all manly! I can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 11:16 pm
Title: Chapter 14: 'Dying Without Buffy'
I can't wait to see what Spike and Angelus do!
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:38 pm
Title: Chapter 5: 'Say It Again, Spike'
I love the way you ended this chapter!
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter 2: 'We're Going to Have A Chat'
I like it that you made Spike take charge, I think that it was probably the only way they would have talked under the circumstances.
Reviewer: Sharon
Anonymous
Date: 06/28/2007 - 09:23 pm
Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'
It looks like this will be another great story, but you do know that Sunnydale had more cemetaries than three, and that Spike's crypt was in RestField, right?
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 08:19 pm
Title: Epilogue
Oh I love it, I figured Angel was going to bring them back with him.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 19: 'It's Starting...'
To bad you didn't add Dru in this, she would get thru to alot. well maybe
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 06:21 pm
Title: Chapter 13: 'Calls For Help'
Actually seeing it wouldn't be bad it would be the writting it, I would not want.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 05:59 pm
Title: Chapter 11: 'Surprising Allies'
I noctice Angel has been contacted.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 05:35 pm
Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'
Oh we always blame Willow don't we.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter 5: 'Say It Again, Spike'
Oh I love the twist at the end.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 04/08/2007 - 04:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'
Oh I love it.
Reviewer: Fia
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2007 - 07:57 pm
Title: Epilogue
Fantastic Fantastic Fantastic!!!
Reviewer: cheysma2000
Anonymous
Date: 01/22/2007 - 06:26 pm
Title: Epilogue
I just read and loved this fiction. I just wanted to let you know.Thanks, Tammy
Reviewer: Alien
Anonymous
Date: 01/05/2007 - 09:24 am
Title: Epilogue
Nice story but it's a realy fluff But i like it
Reviewer: SpaceLord
Anonymous
Date: 03/08/2006 - 05:29 pm
Title: Chapter 8: 'Ain't Nobody'
Ehh not that I'm an expert but didn't Oz leave and that was the reason for the will be done spell by Willow?
