Reviewer: Lyzzybelle Signed
Date: 06/23/2012 - 03:51 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Excellent!
Reviewer: Zeitsu Signed
Date: 12/21/2011 - 11:09 pm
Title: Chapter One
Yum nuff said :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much, zeitsu!
Reviewer: sweetprincipale
Anonymous
Date: 04/18/2011 - 04:09 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
AMAZING! So vivid and lovingly written. Excellent job.
Author's Response: thanks so much, sweetprincipale! I'm so glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed
Date: 05/05/2010 - 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
ok, that was HOT. seriously, you got me already at the beginning with Spikes banner.
you wrote this story so beautifuly and the characters were brought to life even if there wasn't much conversation. it was all going on in their minds.
i enjoyed it, really. and the end was perfect. now that they've finaly had eachother in their embrace, they could get to know eachother. :D
Author's Response: Hey Shardallinee! Yeah, the banner was hot!! At times, I got distracted just gazing at the marvel which is Spike. I appreciate your review and enjoyement
Reviewer: total_geek Signed
Date: 03/24/2010 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
ok now i need a cold shower... hmmm or even better a hot shower with spike in it :D awesome fic i really enjoyed very well written and very sexy its a pity its over
Author's Response: Thanks Total_geek! Sorry it came to an end, but all good things must!
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/07/2010 - 12:12 am
Title: Chapter Seven
*Claps* Wow, very hot! Their coupling didn't happen the way I thought it would, but that doesn't mean I'm disappointed. Those two didn't want to waste one more second, did they? lol Did I mention it was hot? :P
I really enjoyed the the story, hon, bravo! *smooches*
Author's Response: I'm glad that you were not disappointed. I knew there was such a big build up and I didn't want the end to fall flat. I'm glad that you enjoyed!
*hugs*
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 10:51 pm
Title: Chapter Six
I like how you went back to tell the drawing class scene from Spike's perspective. And I love that he was getting hot while posing from thinking about Buffy lol He's such a naughty boy! Is there any situation in which he couldn't get a stiffy? hehehe
Ordinarily, I'd say that any real interaction between them would probably prove to be a big letdown for them, because of their numerous fantasies and how they'd built each other up into mythic creatures in their minds. But this is Spike and Buffy we're talkin about lol Anything is possible with those two :P Go get 'er, Spike! :D
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing both POV in this story. I felt that it was needed. There is only so much of Buffy's thoughts that one can write or read. I hope that them meeting won't be a let down for them nor the readers! Here's to hoping!
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter Five
heehee Yay! I had a good feeling I knew what Spike's part-time job was once you mentioned the class Buffy was heading for :P I love that scenario: picturing him striking a classic pose in the nude... *drools* while she lovingly draws his form. Mmm-mm! Kudos to her for being able to sit there and draw him for any amount of time without either running away or jumping him lol
Loved it! *huggles*
Author's Response: Imagine if that class was for real, there would be years of a waitlist to get in there to get a gander at naked Spike! Yes, Buffy showed amazing self-control
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 09:37 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Wooo that was one hot dream Spike was having :P I thought he would've tried calculating what apartment Buffy lived in after he saw her, and then going to see if she really did exist (and if she was peeping at him lol).
I can't wait for these two to meet and be in the same room as each other! They have tons of chemistry and lust already without the benefit of being in the same building lol :D I'm havin fun reading the story, thanks again for rec'ing it *smoochies*
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying Pagan! Being miss spuffy smut yourself, it is a great compliment!
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 08:42 pm
Title: Chapter Three
Busted! lol I love how the tables were turned at the end, and that Spike was likewise taken with her *activities*. Their first conversation is gonna be awwwkward lol You know, I was expecting a scene where Buffy's all ready to watch him only to see him bring another woman in the bedroom with him lol Luckily for her, that didn't happen, but she's still got a big problem to deal with now that he's seen her. Spike's gonna find out who she is and want to have a chat, no doubt heehee
Author's Response: Yeah...her free peep show is over...or is it?
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter Two
My, oh my, you certainly paint a pretty picture :P Those were some smokin' hot glimpses at the platinum blonde neighbor. Buffy's reactions to his body and his *actions* were great too. I would so be spying too if were her lol I'd feel guilty for spying, but hey, I'm only human :D I need to get an apartment in her building heehee
I'm loving this very naughty version of Rear Window thus far ;) Though I hope the only crime she sees being committed is an awesome babe like him having to make do with pleasuring himself lol Great job! *smooch*
Author's Response: No crime except being a peeping tom on Buffy's part. But who would arrest her for looking at that!!!
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 03:54 pm
Title: Chapter One
Hmm, my review got cut off after the first sentence! I'll try it again:
Omg, can I tell you how much I enjoyed the fresh-from-the-shower Spike scene? lol @_@
Author's Response: vv
Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed
Date: 03/06/2010 - 03:53 pm
Title: Chapter One
Omg, can I tell you how much I enjoyed the fresh-from-the-shower Spike scene? lol @_@
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed! Pretty yummy huh?
Reviewer: annie
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/2010 - 08:10 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Yeah. Sooo... I've put my brain together and I'm gonna try this again.
That was wicked hot and kinda lovely (which is hard to do, with the strangers having sex and all). Loved and hated the ending. Loved it because it was so simple and direct and romantic (if you sidestep the shagging). Hated it because it ended. Why finish? Why not last foreva? Why?
Loved the story allround and crossing my fingers and hoping you'll come up with more of the sorts!
Author's Response: Thanks Annie. Hopefully I didn't incapacitate you for long! As I said before...all good things must come to an end. I feel that trying to duplicate a story like this will fall flat. But I may write something equally juicy on the lines of this in the future.
Reviewer: annie
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/2010 - 08:01 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Oh. My. God. That. Was. Hot. Oh. My. God.
Yes. All I can formulate at the moment.
Oh. My. God.
Author's Response: I'm happy that I have left you speechless! My job was done!
Reviewer: Kristy B
Anonymous
Date: 02/12/2010 - 03:58 am
Title: Chapter Seven
Wow... that was simply orgasmic.
Honestly though I barely made it to the first sentence of the first chapter, so distracted by the pic of Spike I was. That alone garners the story two very enthusiastic thumbs up, as it happens to be my VERY favorite pic of him.
The story only further cemented it's awesomeness. Your talent and passion just comes alive on the screen, amazing.
I'm also really enjoying your references to Greek Mythology, and will find myself pausing mid-story and doing a little background check on the mentioned Gods and Goddesses. My head is now absolutely brimming with knowledge, so thanks for that!
Author's Response: The pic is awesome...isn't it! your review made me *blush*. Unfortunately that's all I can say. That and thank you immensely!
Reviewer: nichbuket
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/2010 - 07:21 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Your mastery of the english language is astounding, and I love how your stories are always full of life.
Author's Response: Aw shucks...I ain't feel that I is that goud! Just kidding! I try really hard to put the crazy thoughts that whip around my noggin into words that flow. I'm glad that you enjoyed!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/11/2010 - 06:42 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Ah thanks. Wondering if she was in the same room as Spike and how she got there was a bit distracting for me. :)
The A/N made it clear.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out my faux pas!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 02/11/2010 - 05:11 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Hot. :D
But did I miss something? Spike wanted to go to Buffy, having her ID Card now (last chapter). But now Buffy is in his room? I didn't see how she came in.
I guess I must reread the last two chapters.
Otherwise - enjoyed. :)
Author's Response: No, you didn't. I meant to add that Buffy was let into the apartment by Spike's roommate while he was in the shower in the end credits and forgot. Thanks for reminding me. Added this thanks in the end of the story!
Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 02/11/2010 - 01:26 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
wow...so hot. and yes i had the wipe the drool several times! nice ending btw. i really liked how there wasnt much dialogue just their inner thoughts. very nice change of pace. thank you
Author's Response: I am not responsible for any failing keyboards! Your enjoyment is a pleasure to hear. Thanks for reading and reviewing my story
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 02/11/2010 - 02:49 am
Title: Chapter Seven
This story was so different from your other work and I absolutely loved it. It worked so well as a narrative with minimal dialogue. Their consummation was done in such a cathartic joining that it pretty much makes up for Buffy's guilt trips of season 6. The transition Spike makes from seeing himself as a fallen angel with the red letter A to a reborn William was seamless. You ended the tail perfectly--normal conversation is a different story. Use of the window brought the characters full circle. Brava!
Author's Response: *squee!* Your review made my day! I'm glad that you enjoyed this and my other works. I appreciate that you believe that I was able to transition 'seamlessly'. As I take my bow, all I can say is thank you!
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/2010 - 11:05 pm
Title: Chapter Seven
Glad they finally got together. Now they just need to get to know each other. Pretty hot. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for enjoying and sharing your review!
Reviewer: mellissa
Anonymous
Date: 02/01/2010 - 05:57 pm
Title: Chapter Six
Oh man. I can't wait til Buffy finally meets Spike. I suspect sparks will definitely fly.
Author's Response: It is coming...
Reviewer: shelly
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2010 - 05:21 pm
Title: Chapter Six
I can't wait til they meet!!!
Author's Response: Soon my pretty!
Reviewer: jen
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2010 - 04:30 pm
Title: Chapter Six
Go get her!!!
Author's Response: Oh, he will!