Reviewer: Anonymous
Date: 04/02/2009 - 01:54 am
Title: Chapter Six
Reviewer: spikes_wish Signed
Date: 05/27/2006 - 05:36 am
Title: Chapter Six
wow this is really good. please update soon!
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/20/2005 - 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter Six
Great new chapter. I can't wait for Buffy to figure it out and rescue Spike. Awesome job so far...more soon please!
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus
Anonymous
Date: 11/10/2005 - 07:24 pm
Title: Chapter Six
At least Spike is free and has some information now. Can't wait til he catches up with the immortal and cooks his goose (and of course for Buffy to accept that it's really Spike alive and ready for some lovin'!) more please.
Reviewer: ZoeGrace Signed
Date: 11/08/2005 - 01:31 am
Title: Chapter Six
"Yeah, and maybe all vampires have decided to go vegan. Andrew, how on earth did you and the other two dweebs make an invisibility ray? You're even more cerebrally challenged than my sister!"
LMAO! this rocks! Fantastic!
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/07/2005 - 03:51 pm
Title: Chapter Six
The dream was better than the reality, huh? Seems as if Spike was able to flee. I'm glad :)
Reviewer: Carri
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2005 - 12:07 pm
Title: Chapter Six
I hope Dawn can convince Buffy soon about Spike's presence. Great chapter, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I think actions are going to end up speaking louder than words in this fic, so hang on to something ;)
And I do try to update as fast as i can - alas, the time eating capacity of real life!
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2005 - 11:50 am
Title: Chapter Six
Excellent attention to detail in this chapter. It was descriptive and flowed well from scene to scene. I'm looking forward to learning The Immortal's nefarious plot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review - a critical eye is always welcome. I'm hoping that I succeed in actual storytelling, so please do keep letting me know how I'm doing *grin*
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/2005 - 09:40 am
Title: Chapter Five
Great story.
Reviewer: Esther
Anonymous
Date: 10/19/2005 - 12:37 am
Title: Chapter Five
Hot damn, great update!!! I agree with Dawn on one thing....crap, Spike's been caught!!! Oh mama, the drama's coming, and I really can't wait for more!! BTW, WAHOO!!! Dawn kicks butt!! Hehe....
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2005 - 06:33 pm
Title: Chapter Five
Stupid Buffy. Spike captured! Either the Immortal will hide him from Buffy, or try to get her to kill Spike because she thinks it isn't him.
At least Dawn's thinking rationally. She needs to call Buffy and have her listen to Andrew.
Reviewer: ZoeGrace
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2005 - 06:16 pm
Title: Chapter Five
are they going to try to press spike? i just worry about where this is going lol. Great chapter...great fic. I'm with the pup about killing the immortal. And I very much hope Buffy comes to her senses soon. How did she survive this long? :)
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:46 pm
Title: Chapter Five
Sorry - but I think Spike is right with the remark he made about Angel at the begin of the chapter. Oh no.. they got Spike - the Immortal's men? I assume. Oh my - really bad timing .. Buffy is away to meet the Immortal. But maybe she'll find Spike there? We'll see. :)
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 10/18/2005 - 03:41 pm
Title: Chapter Five
Another good chapter. I really hope that Buffy believes Andrew. Great job so far!
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 10/18/2005 - 03:03 pm
Title: Chapter Five
Dawn's surly reaction to a hungover and blubbering Andrew was funny and in character. Poor Spike, kidnapped again, his predatory skills are sorely lacking! Can't wait to read what The Immortas in store for him and Buffy!
Reviewer: NEO_trinityknot Signed
Date: 10/18/2005 - 02:59 pm
Title: Chapter Five
Hope to see more soon!
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 10/17/2005 - 10:28 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Oooo! I'm hoping the Dawn can smack some sense into Buffy and they can foil the Immortals plot. Awesome job!
Reviewer: TheTruth
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2005 - 11:35 am
Title: Chapter Four
Is this one of those fics where Buffy has a sexual relationship with the Immortal? God, please say it isn't. I can't handle that kind of betrayal. Spike has been through enough; he doesn't need the burden of knowing that the Immortal had Buffy too, just like he had Dru. I know sex isn't everything, but when it comes to love, it's pretty damn important. Please, please let it be just the chaste stages of dating with Buffy and the Immortal. Let Spuffy love be untainted and pure this time around.
Author's Response: Don;t panic, there will at no time be any mention of Immortal/Buffy intimacy :)
And it will all come out in the wash - if you're keen on knowing what needs to be in this fic, drift over the Bloodshedverse and check out challenge #3 ;)
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2005 - 05:10 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Gee, Buffy being irrational again. For a shape shifter to do a really good mimic, they have to have heard, seen, and smelled the person they are copying. If you want to be sure if it's Spike, ask him something only he would know, instead of running away like a dumb ass. Spike can prove he's a vampire just by bouncing off her doorway. Demons don't need an invitation.
Author's Response: Bless her, she never had much common sense, and she's in denial. To be fair, I think Spike kinda brought it on himself by faux-hunting her in a graveyard though...*giggles*
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/13/2005 - 04:32 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Yeah.. Buffy really does miss Spike. I hope Spike can get through her - means that she'll notice he's not a shape shifter :)
Reviewer: Brunettepet
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2005 - 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter Four
Buffy's hopeless longing for Spike was nicely written, as was Spike's assertion that Buffy really did love him there at the end of Sunnydale. The Immortal's scheme is intriguing. I can't wait to learn what he's up to and how he plans to keep Buffy from interfering.
Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed
Date: 10/13/2005 - 02:25 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Well, that's just a stupid stuborn buffy for ya. Poor Spike (and dawn). More please. I really like it so far.
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 10/13/2005 - 05:20 am
Title: Chapter 3
I think Buffy's reaction is believable. I'm really enjoying this fic. Awesome job.
Reviewer: blue Deja
Anonymous
Date: 10/11/2005 - 10:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Ooooo I really like this can't wait to see where you take this great first few chaters.
Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/11/2005 - 04:40 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Oh .. she really didn't believe that this was Spike. No wonder she reacted in this way... And GIles doesn't seem to know that Spike is back :)
Author's Response: Andrew actually managed to keep his mouth shut for once ;) And since when has Buffy ever believed anything good will happen for her?
Andrew bashing coming up next ;)
