Reviewer: AgentKalGibbs Signed
Date: 05/25/2015 - 11:15 am
Title: Chapter 4
Many lols. :)
Author's Response: yay!
Reviewer: Sigyn Signed
Date: 05/11/2015 - 02:52 am
Title: Chapter 1
Don't know about the thank you at the end of section two. On the whole, the exchange seemed more fond than I remember from cannon. Inner thoughts and feelings aren't nessessarily the things we say and do, and I think you could have made it more subtle and still gotten the message across. But on the whole, a good story -- it does clear up why they kept Spike as long as they did, and made some wonderful jokes about the "spell" they were under. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed most of it. Don't know if I explained in summary or not, but it was someone else's comments about those two moments after the spell that sparked the bunny. I did look at the dvd before writing it to see if it would work, and sure enough, the smack was half-hearted and she touched him on the shoulder. It's not much, but enough to build a story on. :)
Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 11/02/2014 - 04:45 am
Title: Chapter 4
Very sweet, but definitely feels unfinished.
Author's Response: I think you'll find that many/most of my fics, - especially those set in early seasons where to continue means to rewrite the season - end when I have Buffy and Spike in what seems like a good, or hopeful, place. Sometimes a plot bunny will pop up later and there will be a follow-up fic set in whatever AU situation the first story has created, but not often or always. Usually I will leave them when they are either in a relationship, or obviously in a good place from which a relationship could develop. The focus is more on whatever twist of canon events (or purely made-up events) might conceivably make a relationship possible than it is on exploring how that relationship might change the rest of the season. I hope that works for you on these shorter fics that don't seem finished. They aren't meant to be endings, but beginnings. :)
Reviewer: nmcil Signed
Date: 01/01/2014 - 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 4
Love It -
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed
Date: 12/29/2013 - 01:42 am
Title: Chapter 4
Awesome story, I loved it. Is there going to be more?
Dani
Author's Response: Thanks. There could be more, obviously, but I'm working on another one from that era right now. But someday....
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 12/27/2013 - 01:18 pm
Title: Chapter 4
As always with your stories, really good.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 12/27/2013 - 12:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Nice interaction.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)