Reviewer: nae
Anonymous
Date: 10/31/2007 - 10:29 am
Title: Chapter 23
This is so incredibly excellent. Your writing really is one of the few that is so good. The emotions are wonderfully intense. I'm really excited to read more when you next update.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2007 - 03:23 am
Title: Chapter 23
Killing me a little that it ended there. He gave her one extra day and in that time she even managed to move. She's really done a good bit of productive thinking there, and I'm glad Fred was able to help, too. Hopefully she can use the right words and get her message across before they get too mad at each other. Another great chapter. Please, update soon.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 10/24/2007 - 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 22
Stupid thing ate my review. I shall try again...
It is quite a lot to think about. Though I can think of worse eternities than hanging by Spike's side. Spike so convinced that Buffy will never lover him... and eternity at Buffy's side. Poor Spike. Hopefully she will come around before the end of the world. Amazing chapter.
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/21/2007 - 07:10 pm
Title: Chapter 23
Fred is right. Buffy and Spike have to sort everything out together. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Pyro63
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 09:47 pm
Title: Chapter 23
Awesome update. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 08:02 pm
Title: Chapter 23
Maybe a mild, semi-platonic, co-habitation will ease some of the doubts in Buffys mind. Great update, will watch for another!
Reviewer: asha
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 04:32 pm
Title: Chapter 23
ahh u cant leave it like that i wanna see what happens next! cant wait for more, very well written
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 02:08 pm
Title: Chapter 23
I love Fred. And she makes really good sense, Buffy, so keep listening to her.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 11:49 am
Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad she got the apt and Spike came back now I wonder how thier talk will go.
Reviewer: sue
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 11:42 am
Title: Chapter 23
With all her long-way-round logic, it takes the objectivity of a relative stranger to Buffy's life, to sort things out for Buffy. A few simple words and there it is: a problem halved is a problem solved ...... in other words, girl, work it out with him rather than without him.
And now Buffy has a firm footing. A job and a home. And she doesn't hesitate to invite him in.
Now your gettiin' it, Slayer.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/20/2007 - 11:29 am
Title: Chapter 23
Buffy is insecure about what to do and not to risk to be hurt again. I love Fred's logic to figure it out together or And it will continue to be complicated until you uncomplicate it :)
But Buffy really wants to have her time; I think we'll get to know in the next chapter what Spike thinks about that. ~ Till then!
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 10/20/2007 - 09:05 am
Title: Chapter 23
As usual.. a lot of Buffy babble and battling her feelings about .. Spike in particular. And then finally deciding.. about a job, a place to live, and Spike.. Come in - means much more than just the simple gesture of a good hostess..
Reviewer: jeanieofoz
Anonymous
Date: 10/16/2007 - 11:00 am
Title: Chapter 22
*massive grin* read the first part of this a while back and then lost track of it while you were busy. found it again and am glad i did. hope you update again soon :D
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/2007 - 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 22
I feel for Spike but I also understand Buffy's view of things. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: kirstie
Anonymous
Date: 10/14/2007 - 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 22
hey,
i really like what you've done with this so far. I also really hope that Buffy gets a taste of her own bitchiness. Really, she's being horrible!!! And I know that you know that, just don't let it go unnoticed in the story... Because Spike deserves to yell at her for being so damn stupid.
Reviewer: Nicki
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2007 - 10:28 pm
Title: Chapter 22
She needs a good knock on the noggin' although I understand she's thoroughly wigged. Spike is sooo trying.
Reviewer: blondiebear
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2007 - 03:15 pm
Title: Chapter 22
loved it soooooo much. buffy's so freakin' selfish though. i mean, i get that she's is conflicted. hell, i would be too but she's not the only one who has to deal with this and she needs to realize that spike is really there for her.....contrary to what she may believe. hopefully, her one night away from him will be enough for her to figure out what role spike is gonna play in her life. she can't have it both ways. he was dru's whipping boy for over a century. i don't think it would be right or fair to have him move on to being buffy's. especially with the claim envolved. great job. more soon.
Reviewer: Kelly
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2007 - 03:14 pm
Title: Chapter 22
Poor Spike!! Stupid Buffy!!! Loved it will wait for more.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 09:05 am
Title: Chapter 22
Bittersweet chapter, in a way sad. Very emotional...
Buffy is struggling with what she became (part of a claim) and Spike thinks she doesn't love him? Think of being caught in a marriage without love for eternity...
I hope time will help them; Spike thinks it won't at last not soon. ~ Looking forward to more. *tries again*
Reviewer: kim
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2007 - 06:46 am
Title: Chapter 22
Oh, poor Spike.....with a woman again that doesn't love him though he loves her. And really really stuck this time.
And she's still grieving, and still very young......and very very stubborn.
Reviewer: smlcspike Signed
Date: 10/13/2007 - 04:31 am
Title: Chapter 22
Oh I love it, feel sorry for Spike and Buffy both in a way.
Reviewer: janice
Anonymous
Date: 10/13/2007 - 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 22
wow. that was so beautiful :) you evoke really intense emotions in your readers (a.k.a ME). ive forgotten how much i love this story; thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: Suzannabanana
Anonymous
Date: 10/12/2007 - 03:02 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Wonderful! I'm so glad I found this story again and it was updated. Please put more up!!
Reviewer: PhotographyNut
Anonymous
Date: 10/09/2007 - 10:35 pm
Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: asha
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/2007 - 11:58 am
Title: Chapter 21
ooh i like, great chapter. i can't wait for more, i love the mates thing, i wanna see where u go with it
