Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 10/11/2012 - 02:22 pm
Title: A Bit of Bad
This was wonderful. Great story!
Reviewer: Stacie B
Anonymous
Date: 06/09/2007 - 10:54 pm
Title: Chapter Fourteen
I am sooo loving this story!
Reviewer: squawks
Anonymous
Date: 01/29/2007 - 08:18 pm
Title: A Bit of Bad
best story ive read in a while
Reviewer: squawks
Anonymous
Date: 01/29/2007 - 07:03 pm
Title: Out of Control
oh god this fic is just too good. just needed to review before I read on
Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed
Date: 10/22/2006 - 08:59 pm
Title: A Bit of Bad
Good story! :)
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:02 pm
Title: A Bit of Bad
Loved it.
I'm not quite convinced by an evil sadistic Riley, but the rest of the story fits in with canon very well, and I'm quite willing to suspend disbelief for such an excellent plotline. I love the 'Spike being tortured to save Buffy' thing, and having Buffy suffer some of the 'experiments' is very realistic and something I would have thought they would have taken much further in the whole 'Initiative' story arc on the show.
Reviewer: Fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 10/08/2006 - 09:27 am
Title: A Bit of Bad
Fascinating twist on the Initiative-captive Spike. I've read several now, by a few others authors than the ones you've written.
I think I'd like to read that sequel....however, not sure how it'd play out...or perhaps how well it'd play out for Spike, the childer, et al....
Can't recall quickly who wrote them but there is a series of 3-5? I think fics in which Spike becomes the Master of Sunnydale, while he and Buffy each run a house for Potentials....eventually, he relocates to the Factory, has several SIT's as assistants (including Kennedy---WHY?), heads up "Team Spike (red & blk)" while in a haze of speed and never sleeping getting in over his head as Master.
All this to say, he finally admits that he is just NOT the best choice for being commander, for thinking thru OR following through on things....
So, even tho' there's just 15 +/- childer, how's he gonna handle them? As a Team Spike? Sure could make a difference in the "future" (should it not already be irrevocably changed in our storyline from canon-ish), especially in the possible Showdown with the First, along with SIT's/Slayers, with the Showdown again WR&H, along with SIT's & Scoobies should that situation arise still, or even make a "difference" in outcome should Glory show ... That is, if the 1st even occurs (since it doesn't seem at this point in an altered timeline that B's death might occur a la' Glory, tho' there IS a Dawn in place, Key-ness unknown at this point; AND if she doens't die thereby not requiring Willow to reanimate/resuscitate her, then the universal imbalance might not occur, or at least not from these factors, precipitating the 1st's move onto the grand scheme of things...
and after that ramble, what about the possibility of Spike's childer returning somewhat to their previous families? They were chosen to be "Officers", to lead. I think the simple lumping of them as sheepish followers a bit much and doesn't say much for their innate strengths. Sure, they're disoriented, probably suffering from Post Traumatic Stress, or should be, will definitely have issues, and need to re-adjust. But they have good folks to talk to, to learn from, and with Giles (and even Angels (shudder to think of his Grand-Pappy routine, and BTW, glad Buffy didn't automatically run for his help) never-ending list of contacts and out-reach programs, help should be available to them.
This could be a good medium for showing just how well the Aurelian blood could prove filtered thru Spike and not Angel/Darla/Dru...And hey, military wives are tough....what's a little undead-ness between spouses....and think of the back pay the military owes these guys....especially to keep it covered up....
Well, my rant's winding down so let me say, I sure did enjoy it greatly, and look forward to more great tales from you.
Thankx,
K.
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/20/2005 - 01:50 pm
Title: A Bit of Bad
Just got caught up on chapters twenty-nine through thirty-two and wanted to tell you what a great fic this was. Awesome job and I can't wait for the sequel!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/09/2005 - 08:53 am
Title: A Bit of Bad
Great ending. Thank you for the great story.
I would have ended it here also. Look forward to reading your other works.
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/07/2005 - 06:10 pm
Title: Sweet Vengeance
I am glad that Spike is finally free. I am happy that Soike did not kill Cordova, but I somehow don't like the solution not that she did not deserve it.
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 08:56 pm
Title: Mastery
you can't just leave it right there! i'm dying to read when cordova gets whats coming to her. i love your story!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! PLEASE?
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 04:48 pm
Title: Mastery
Thanks for the quick update. As usual these chapters were great.
Reviewer: Smitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 04:19 pm
Title: Mastery
HAHAHA shes so gonna pay now!!!! More more more hehe don't leave me here I neeed more :D
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/06/2005 - 04:08 pm
Title: Mastery
Yay! Things seem to be going good. Great job on this ifc so far. I am really enjoying reading it.
Reviewer: Pam S
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 03:56 pm
Title: Mastery
Yea Spike .... let her have it.. Bad woman.
Enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Smitten
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 03:42 am
Title: Limits of Endurance
This is a absolutely amazing and touching and HOt story! It had me glued to my seat from ch 1 can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 11/06/2005 - 01:57 am
Title: Limits of Endurance
based on what i read about what spike and diana did to riley, i can't wait to see what he (spike) does to cordova or buffy or whomever rescues him. i can't wait until that bitch gets what's coming to her. i think it would be ironic if she herself got one of her chips installed in her brain! ha. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Reviewer: Sandy
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:47 pm
Title: Limits of Endurance
I can't wait for the rest of the story. GREAT!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2005 - 06:30 pm
Title: Limits of Endurance
Good chapters. I do hope that Cordova is going to get hers. I also hope that Spike won't be too incapacitated to deal with her.
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/05/2005 - 03:58 pm
Title: Limits of Endurance
Chapters 25 and 26 were really good. I liked how Xander realized what Spike had givrn up to help Buffy. I'm glad Willow is all for getting Spike out too. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Chelsea Signed
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:37 am
Title: 24
Excellent updates. I really loved the part where Spike found the in Buffy's closet. Awesome job! I can't wait for chapter twenty-five!
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2005 - 11:20 am
Title: 24
Another great update. I hope that General Cordova gets what is coming to her.
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 11/05/2005 - 02:55 am
Title: 24
you are truly evil, leaving me hanging like that. i can't wait to read what happens and hopefully cordova will get her ass kicked, after a little torture. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON???
Reviewer: Bridget
Anonymous
Date: 11/04/2005 - 08:54 am
Title: 22
Great two chapters. I hope that Buffy won't be tortured horrifically. I hope that somehow they will figure it out before she is too damaged.
Reviewer: jenny
Anonymous
Date: 11/04/2005 - 02:27 am
Title: 22
i love it. please don't let cordova put a chip in buffy's head that makes her unable to slay or to hurt humans. it would be ironic if she under estimated buffy like walsh did and get's her ass kicked. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR STORY, PLEASE UPDATE SOON??
