Reviewer: xiaojun
Anonymous
Date: 01/31/2016 - 02:28 am
Title: Chapter One
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed
Date: 02/11/2013 - 07:47 pm
Title: Chapter 11
Absolutely lovely. So touching, I cried regularly at the early chapters' demonstration of Buffy's & Dawn's grief. Sweet ending, but an epilogue or just another chapter would be nice, so we can see how Buffy & Spike's relationship goes. Thought the story was marked NC-17, but there wasn't any smuttiness, that I could see, unless it was Willow's tittilation during her magicking. Some grammar errors, but mostly nit-picky. Other than that, extremely well-written.
Reviewer: All4Spike
Anonymous
Date: 10/11/2006 - 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 11
Oh so sad.. and then so happy. She should have known though... magic always has consequences!
Reviewer: sister cuervo
Anonymous
Date: 09/27/2006 - 05:11 am
Title: Chapter Nine
Oh dear, "turning back time". I've got a bad feeling about this. I forsee many more regrets for all of our favourites.
Still, loving the whole story, as always, you've done an excellent job evoking the feelings and characters.
Reviewer: Lynda
Anonymous
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:28 pm
Title: Chapter 11
OMG. I just read your story today and I have to apoligise for not reading it before. It what wonderful. I could not stop reading. Wonderful story, great original plot. I love it.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 11
Well, wasn't expecting quite that ending. But I really like it. Glad to see all those ends tied up. Glad they have each other. Really did love it. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:11 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Wonder what then Buffy thinks of all of this. And Willow, that's not good, either. Another wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:04 pm
Title: Chapter 10
"From the way Buffy was behaving, Willow wondered if Spike might’ve been the one thing that was stopping Buffy from going nuts."--Bingo! Finally figured the big one out. Gotta wonder about this spell though.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:59 pm
Title: Chapter Eight
Love Spike talking about when he first saw her. And Willow Magicking her parents. Wonder if they can turn back time and change things.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:51 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Ouch. That sucks so much. And the idea of balance, Joyce dying for Dawn to live. How very tragic. Great chapter.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:43 pm
Title: Chapter 6
Oh, good God. When it rains it pours. What to do now. And Anya making Xander have a talk with Willow. Wonderful.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:37 pm
Title: Chapter 5
"She is sexually repressed despite being a lesbian. I can just see her, taking notes in different coloured pens!”--Love that. Love Anya and all her awareness. Hope Xander Listens. And way for Tara to have a backbone. Really, such a strong girl... Great chapter.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:29 pm
Title: Chapter 4
Such a sweet, tender necessary moment to be ruined by someone who has no business... Or it could be Tara, I guess. And Buffy changing her room into his crypt. Perhaps a tad creepy, but I really like that idea. Wonderful chapter.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:21 pm
Title: Chapter 3
Love Tara in this. Girl always saw and understood people. And Willow, she's still on the evil magic train it would seem. Hope she comes round, too. Wonderful chapter. Really captures all the emotions.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:09 pm
Title: chapter two
I love that Buffy is taking the chance to know the man through his belongings. So sad that he's gone. Poor little sis. Poor lonely Buffy.
Reviewer: BuffyRat
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2006 - 11:05 pm
Title: Chapter One
Poor girl. I suppose sometimes you need the absense to make your heart grow... Hope the rest understand.
Reviewer: Hwesta
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2006 - 06:17 pm
Title: Chapter 11
Very nice story! I liked the ending so much :)
Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed
Date: 09/16/2006 - 12:35 pm
Title: Chapter 11
Very nice ending. :D
Reviewer: Cas
Anonymous
Date: 09/16/2006 - 07:54 am
Title: Chapter 11
Seemed like a bit of an abrupt ending...you could have made it last longer I think. Anyway, I am sure that I remeber this story - you must have posted it elsewhere. Still a good read.
Reviewer: rosie
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 10:30 pm
Title: Chapter 10
cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: jt
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 07:55 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Per usual, something goes wrong. Oh, der.
Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed
Date: 09/15/2006 - 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Badia
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 11:17 am
Title: Chapter 10
Okay Buffy is now Insane going to Willow for spell help. That is beyond desperate its outright crazy! I'm so loving this fic cannot wait for more updates, cause I know somethings gonna go wrong.
Reviewer: jt
Anonymous
Date: 09/15/2006 - 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 10
Lovewd Buffy shaking Willow and scaring her. I'd love to shake her til her teeth rattled also. Looking forward to next update.
Reviewer: Cas
Anonymous
Date: 09/14/2006 - 06:13 pm
Title: Chapter 10
Really terrible, sad beginning, but I trust that you'll make it all turn out right in the end, and it does seem to he heading in the right direction, finally. So, like Willow that when Buffy really wants to magic, suddenly she's all 'I can't do that' girl. Great story.
