Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/26/2012 - 09:50 pm
Title: Chapter 16
Giles got himself in danger... but not only him.
Buffy needs to be careful.
Author's Response: She certainly does. She is a valuable commodity, or a supreme threat, or both!
Reviewer: riz
Anonymous
Date: 04/07/2012 - 04:40 pm
Title: Chapter 16
very interesting and intriguing!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:19 am
Title: Chapter 16
This is interesting, the different plots and characters.
Reviewer: girlie_mel
Anonymous
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:17 am
Title: Chapter 16
I love this story. Please please update another chapter soon I am hanging to find out what happens next
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2010 - 10:28 am
Title: Chapter 15
hmmm - now this is quite the interesting turn of events! buffy a vengeance demon - and so early on! and how this really affect spike and his un-life/plans?
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 11/14/2010 - 06:18 am
Title: Chapter 15
Now Faith and a more evolved Wesley has arrived, interesting indeed.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 11/13/2010 - 05:34 pm
Title: Chapter 15
Oh an update, good to see :)
So we have a new slayer in town.... looking forward to find out what will happen now.
Reviewer: rkm
Anonymous
Date: 08/08/2010 - 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 14
well, well - now how did i know it was d'hoffron before it was spelled out? and what will the consequences of that action be? and what of her family and friends? has her life been truly irrevocably changed? looking forward to the questions being answered ...
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 07/31/2010 - 06:29 am
Title: Chapter 14
Interesting
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/30/2010 - 12:08 pm
Title: Chapter 14
Mmmh no clue what will happen now - Spike says he would kill Buffy, the slayer. But it seems the slayer is gone and we'll see a vengeance demon soon. Not sure if that (becoming one) is the right thing for Buffy.
But looking forward to find out.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 07/10/2010 - 02:18 am
Title: Chapter 13
Many things could happen now, most of them bad.
Author's Response: You are right...for now.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/09/2010 - 12:28 pm
Title: Chapter 13
Not good, Buffy falling for the sweet words for revenge. We'll see where this will lead; the Council has given up on her (but not Giles yet so that was a lie).
Author's Response: True, it seems that everyone has turned against her. Being a 17 year old, Buffy is naive and therefore, more susceptible than she would be had the episode occured later in the series. But she may surprise everyone yet, or Spike might. As for Giles, we shall see! :)
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/09/2010 - 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter 12
Thanks for the explanation about the bullets. :)
Wow, the other members of the scoobies are very angry @ Buffy.
Author's Response: You're welcome, and yes, they are!
Reviewer: Blue Eyes
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2010 - 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 12
This is definitely highlighting the extremes of each personaiity at its worst. Not that I disagree because that is my feelings too towards the end that Buffy has to always be perfect or she get's treated like a pedophile. As well as her mom's jump to believe the worst of her daughter.
Author's Response: You are correct, and everyone at their worst is something I wanted to explore: that there isn't always an easy way out when you do things like Buffy did. As for Joyce, I wanted to also explore the "normal again" aspect of Buffy's character being committed in the sixth season in season two. I felt that if her mother really found out about her daughter's activities, even with vampires being in town, the mother might still have her daughter committed, particularly if Joyce didn't believe her eyes about vampires and demons.
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2010 - 07:20 am
Title: Chapter 12
There's a lot of stuff for Buffy to deal with now.
Author's Response: That's for sure, and at the tender age of seventeen in this universe, too! But eventually, it will work out, though which way, I can't say!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 07/03/2010 - 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 11
Bad things happened in this chapter... they are all after Buffy, one way ore another. Even Joyce wants Buffy in the hospital again, I call that bad.
BTW even if the rifle is a magic one - normal bullets can't kill a vamp. So why is Buffy worried about Angelus?
Author's Response: Buffy is worried because she still has feelings for him, and in this instance, because the bullets are magic, they can kill a vampire, so there is reason to worry! :)
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 07/02/2010 - 11:51 am
Title: Chapter 11
It's good to have a new chapter. Now the spell is lifted, interesting that Spike would feel bad about harming Angelus.
Author's Response: I agree with you. I could have taken the easy way out and just punctuated Spike's hatred of his Grandsire, but I wanted to show Spike's inner conflict over what's happened too. I'll try to post another chapter soon, and have a happy 4th of July!
Reviewer: magnus374
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2010 - 11:23 am
Title: Chapter 10
This was interesting, Buffy and Angelus working together is very rare.
Author's Response: It is rare. It won't last long, though; Angelus being the way he is. But I agree with you there.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 06/06/2010 - 09:00 am
Title: Chapter 10
I was a bit lost with this chapter, I didn't understand why Buffy was (working) with Angelus, hiding from Spike now. *checks whole story* Ah Spike didn't work with Buffy here, I confused the stories.
Looking forward to what will happen now.
Author's Response: I didn't mean to confuse you. It will be clearer in the next few chapters. Buffy is with Angelus because she's conflicted over her attraction to Spike and her previous love for Angel. That will change, though, and it won't take long.
Reviewer: a
Anonymous
Date: 06/06/2010 - 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 9
"his husbandly rights in bed"
D:
Author's Response: Sorry I confused you. They will be together, I promise!
Author's Response: I was wondering...did Amy and her father work for you as characters since you refenced that line? Sorry for the other reply; I was also answering another review!
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed
Date: 05/28/2010 - 03:59 am
Title: Chapter 9
It's good to know more about Amy.
Author's Response: Yes, I wanted to provide a little more background on her character and her father's.
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/27/2010 - 06:36 pm
Title: Chapter 9
Looking forward to find out if they can reverse the spell without Amy. :)
Reviewer: All4Spike Signed
Date: 05/15/2010 - 10:33 am
Title: Chapter 8
I wonder who the shooter is.... clever Oz... and oops, Buffy's in a pickle now....
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 05/15/2010 - 04:32 am
Title: Chapter 8
Ohhh cliffhanger again. So far Buffy managed good but now it looks like she is in trouble.
Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed
Date: 04/19/2010 - 06:10 pm
Title: Chapter 7
Should Angelus be effect too things will definitely interesting in the next chapter. :)