Reviewer: wengdongdong
Anonymous
Date: 07/08/2015 - 05:01 am
Title: Punishment
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Reviewer: Anonymous
Anonymous
Date: 08/16/2012 - 10:57 pm
Title: Purity
i love this story, your writing is fantastic
Reviewer: Emma
Anonymous
Date: 10/05/2011 - 07:04 pm
Title: Baptismal Font
This chapter is just perfect
Reviewer: Pooftis
Anonymous
Date: 07/20/2011 - 11:17 pm
Title: Purity
Loved the story
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/13/2011 - 02:20 am
Title: Hallelujah
Oh my! Whatever next? Love how you're turning this slowly from something sordid into something so sweet. Tenderly written. Enjoying his inner voice. Wonder what Miss Buffy is thinking?
Btw - Jeff Buckley has a gorgeous version of LC's amazing song. Worth looking up :)
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. And yes, I know ALL about Jeff Buckley. He's been around for a while. Well, not anymore, because he's dead. But I used to listen to him back in 19*coversmouth*7 when I was in high school! :D
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/13/2011 - 12:52 am
Title: First Date
Wicked hot. Love how William has abandoned himself completely to his passion now. Can't wait to see where this story goes...Just brilliant.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/13/2011 - 12:18 am
Title: What Now?
Love the shopping scene & the drive behind it - he's trying on a new life with the clothes, finding out what he might be. And then we are right back to the red hot sex...whew. Great balance of story & smut. Well done.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 - 10:31 pm
Title: Repent
Beautiful chapter. Love all the emotion you've layered throughout. Really coming to like these characters & be invested in this tale you're weaving for us. A thoroughly enjoyable read.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 - 10:23 pm
Title: Once More with Feeling
Wow, you took this to a whole new level. I'm breathless. Sensual & tender. You really made me feel for them & their predicament.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 - 10:14 pm
Title: The Sodom to her Gomorrah
Oh bravo! You're so good you just gave me a kink I didn't even know I had. It'll be all priest & school girl fantasies from now on. Super, smoldering HOT.
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 - 10:05 pm
Title: Prayer Analysis
Holy CRAP that was HOT. *fans self* Freshest, naughtiest smut I've read in a good while. Extremely sexy & very well done!
Reviewer: Soul of the Rose Signed
Date: 07/12/2011 - 09:56 pm
Title: Punishment
WooHOO! Hot & Dirty! *applauds* Thoroughly enjoying the first chapter. Can't wait to devour the rest!
Reviewer: Trixie
Anonymous
Date: 01/24/2011 - 06:45 am
Title: Prayer Analysis
You are a VERY dirty girl. I love it!
Reviewer: Minx DeLovely
Anonymous
Date: 11/15/2010 - 07:51 am
Title: Purity
This is the chocolate and peanut butter of all sexual fantasies coming together in a glorious Reeses Cup of filth. It also made me cry in parts, like when William comes back from talking to father Wesley to find Buffy asleep.
Then it gets all crazy with the Royal Tanenbaums feel. Loved it. Thank you.
Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed
Date: 06/08/2010 - 04:39 pm
Title: Prayer Analysis
Hot story. Love Spike as a priest and Buffy the seductress. can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: sarah g
Anonymous
Date: 08/01/2009 - 03:55 pm
Title: Purity
OMFG THAT WAS THE SWEETEST ENDING EVER!!! i LOVED reading this fic so much and thank you so much for finishing it. youre an amazing writer and i cant wait to read more of your work. THANK YOU again for writing this fic and ending it so perfectly
Reviewer: fyreburned
Anonymous
Date: 07/06/2009 - 12:44 pm
Title: Purity
Dampers, I just loved the way you ended it! It started and ended kinda the way I likes my chicken wings--- Hawt and Sweet! With a dash of smokiness in there somewhere too. Seriously, it's been a great journey seeing this monster evolve from some seriously deity-invoking smut to bittersweet soul-searching and floundering to deep, yet joyfully sweet commitment (and still HAWT too! LOL!).
The part about Wm realizing that he & Buffy were actually not reenacting his parents' failures was the crux of his enlightenment, I think, about his future with Buffy, especially as the parallels were almost forming due to Anne having been very young also, and one of Rupert's students.
As the reader you could almost 'feel' the lightening of William's spiritual load, finally as Anne opened up and began to listen, then speak, communicate, and relate to her son, if only for a few moments in his life. We could feel him breathe easier, and the light around he and Buffy seemed brighter, reflected from your words.
Loved it mucho, girl. Thanks for taking it waaaay past your two chappies!
Thanks!
~~Kara
Reviewer: lori
Anonymous
Date: 07/04/2009 - 08:44 pm
Title: Purity
Thank you so much for completing this EPIC story for William and Buffy. The ending was well worth the wait. You gave us everything including: hot smut, identity crises, world travel, duty, guilt, and romance. It will never be the case that you leave your reading without discovering something new from every chapter you write. I have to admit to bawling like a baby when Ann sees the ring intended for her—William and Buffy definitely get their chance at that happily ever-after denied to Ann and Giles. References to Ann’s willfulness seems like such a Spike characteristic that it makes sense in the grand scheme of the Buffyverse and your all-human world. I think that it’s best to leave the reader with the knowledge that Buffy and William will get married. What he says about finding out who they are together, is what makes your chapter wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing this tale with us.
Reviewer: txjmfan
Anonymous
Date: 06/25/2009 - 02:14 am
Title: Purity
Almost sad to see it end, but it's been a wonderful little journey you've taken me on. Loved every syllable (even when I was cussing at the computer screen for the stupidity of whoever was being an ass at the time). Thanks for sharing it!
Reviewer: Em
Anonymous
Date: 06/24/2009 - 08:01 pm
Title: Purity
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful!!! *applause*
Reviewer: claire
Anonymous
Date: 06/24/2009 - 02:25 pm
Title: Purity
Ooh, I'm so sorry to see it end. I hope you've still got the other version in your head and are willing to share it with us. I'll treasure this one as the fluffy version, whenever I need sweetness and porn!
Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire
Anonymous
Date: 06/24/2009 - 01:52 pm
Title: Purity
I loved this story every step of the way, I'm glad it turned out to be longer than 2 chapters. You should be proud of this one, you've put a hell of a lot of work into it! Well done, it was fantastic, I may even read from the beginning again =)
Reviewer: flyingnicole Signed
Date: 06/24/2009 - 01:05 pm
Title: Purity
so sad to see it end :(
Reviewer: serenity
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 11:09 pm
Title: Purity
YAY! Im so happy that you've finished this story because I love it...but then again, Im sad because you finished this story! LOL Im a woman and can never be satisfied.
Loved it, as usual since all your stories are made of WIN! Also, I am super D duper excited that you may be at DragonCon! Seriously, I might grope you out of sheer delight that I finally get to meet the awesome Beth! YaY!
Reviewer: workNprogress
Anonymous
Date: 06/23/2009 - 10:42 am
Title: Purity
Just wanted to say that was absolutely amazing. You turned some shameless (and awesome) smut into a deeply heartfelt, emotionally honest story and I loved it. I can't tell you all the people I've harassed to read this lol. Thank you for putting the time into this and it all was well worth the wait.
Can't wait for your next story. ^_^
