Reviewer: jess
Anonymous
Date: 08/04/2008 - 06:38 pm
Title: One-Shot
oooo. im pretty sure i like it, only need to clear one thing up. at the end, she´s not just going to him ¨to feel¨ is she? she actually realizes that what that feeling of comfort and contentment means.
Reviewer: smlcspike
Anonymous
Date: 02/19/2008 - 06:05 am
Title: One-Shot
Oh I am glad that she went to him, kind of weird when people change words like that from one person to the other.
Author's Response: I know, I kinda think it's weird too when people change words, but when I was re-watching the ep. his words just kept coming to me in that moment...so I thought, 'why not?'
Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Lindsay
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2008 - 10:51 pm
Title: One-Shot
absolutely beautifully written, i'm happy and sad and emotional. I think you captured the mood of that kiss dead on and i love the level u brought it to!
well done!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
I was re-watching that episode and just felt the need to make that kiss a little nicer for Spikey...since we all know the horrible road that will lead down. :( Thanks for much for reading!
Reviewer: burnkitty
Anonymous
Date: 02/18/2008 - 04:40 am
Title: One-Shot
It was interesting to say the least and I like the way you switched from person to person, expressing their thoughts, the way they were thinking and such.
Thank you for the beautiful read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it.