Reviewer: Tara
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/2007 - 12:05 am
Title: On my way down
Awesome start can't wait 4 more
Reviewer: Tara
Anonymous
Date: 02/10/2007 - 12:03 am
Title: On my way down
Awesome start can't wait 4 more
Reviewer: bloody_hell
Anonymous
Date: 02/02/2007 - 07:08 pm
Title: On my way down
yay!!! i looove it!!! please update soon.
great work...although it's weird to have Joyce be so mean because she was so nice on the show , but it puts a spin on things and it's original...props!!
Reviewer: sable
Anonymous
Date: 01/28/2007 - 07:09 pm
Title: On my way down
YAY! i love this story. it's really different and i like that about it.
i cant wait till the next chapter
comes out.
I LOVE SPUFFY
Reviewer: cordykitten
Anonymous
Date: 01/28/2007 - 05:03 am
Title: On my way down
Ripped jeans? Other spent a lot of money to have them look that way; it seems that's not the reason Buffy's jeans are ripped.
Oh Spike is the new guy. Seems the popular ones want to have him with them but he was more interested in Buffy. Maybe because she's different?... ~ Joyce. Seems she is abusive to Buffy. I wonder if that's because she drinks? And she knows Ethan. So Buffy did met Spike sooner again as she would have guessed.
Looking forward to the next part. Good luck with finding a beta too. (If you don't find one I can send you a link to my collection of place to find a beta.)
Though you should get rid of the errors on the summary. You'll loose some readers that can't overlook this (thinking the whole story has a lot of errors).
Reviewer: kaylee
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:44 pm
Title: On my way down
Great start, i love stories that has buffy lonely & hurt, & spike saves her. Can't wait to c wat happens next.
Author's Response: This is not one of those stories, it may seem that way but things will change.
Reviewer: Hostile 17
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:38 pm
Title: On my way down
Good for your first fanfic, few spelling errors. Unlike mine... but never you mind that, love this story. Hope she and Spike make friends soon.
Reviewer: rosie
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 09:18 pm
Title: On my way down
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Reviewer: kelly
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:35 pm
Title: On my way down
ooooh. good. please continue sooon.
Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:13 pm
Title: On my way down
more pleasa and i hope that ethan in this story isnt a bad guy
Reviewer: daydreamer
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:12 pm
Title: On my way down
Good start. This is kinda a common theme (teenage Buffy being abused and Spike saving her) but maybe you can put a more original twist to it. Please update again soon, I like to see new authors writing fanfic it's something I would never have the courage to do.
Author's Response: Oh dont worry, this story is not one of those teenage Buffy being saved by Spike. I already have a twist for it.
Reviewer: Tuesday
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:01 pm
Title: On my way down
Definitely be looking forward to more! Great start!
Reviewer: Saya
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 12:41 pm
Title: On my way down
Interesting start. It was a big shocker seeing Joyce as an abusive mother but it's refreshing with something new. I agree with lacey that you should get a beta but I don't agree with her that the errors make the story bad. In my opinion the storyline is good, but it can be better with a beta. I like that he obviously knew Buffy was a geek but didn't let that scare him off, although Cordy and Harmony seems to try their hardest to get him away from her. Keep writing, I'll look forward to seeing the next chapter.
Reviewer: Oulipo19
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:50 am
Title: On my way down
Loved it, looking forward to more, please update soon !
Reviewer: annefan
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:49 am
Title: On my way down
great start!! can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lacey
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 09:23 am
Title: On my way down
um, well, i started it, but i don't think i will be continuing. i can't stand to see joyce as the abusive mother. it's horrible what she said and that is just not like her character at all. also, i know this is your first story, but i think you really need a beta. there's way too many errors that i found too distracting, even in the summary. just something to think of.
Author's Response: Yes well, Joyce as an abusive mother sure isnt like her character at all. Which is the exact reason why I made her one, its different plus its fiction. I havent seen many stories with her as an abusive mother, and I wanted to use all my other options as characters in the story. I also wanted to keep the same mother as in the show. I know I need a beta and Im working on that part. I just need to find one.
Reviewer: squawks
Anonymous
Date: 01/25/2007 - 07:37 am
Title: On my way down
good start. hope to see you update soon
